Descriptive Writing by sonali nirwal

Arhaan Zeya

arhaanzeya — 2024-08-01 05:39:49 UTC

“Arriving at the pitches adjacent to the Mini, a Camp Nou in miniature, ‘The Flea (Messi)’ hesitated before entering the dressing rooms. He felt embarrassed walking in by himself. His shyness (no, he is not shy, he is reserved) is extreme. He started to get changed outside the locker room and ended up doing so inside, away from the rest of the group. In a corner with no one nearby. Standing up. Tense.”

- From ‘Messi’ by Guillem Ballague

From this paragraph, the author describes Messi’s extreme shyness as he is preparing for a trial at FC Barcelona’s academy.

Descriptive words: ‘miniature’, ‘hesitated’, ‘embarrassed’, ‘shyness’, ‘reserved’, ‘extreme’, ‘tense’.

Ziya Nagpal - The Cruel Prince 🌟

ziyanagpal — 2024-08-01 05:41:57 UTC

Descriptive words :-
-Cruel Delight
-As the sun dips low in they sky
-They’re beautiful as blades forged in the divine fire
-Fox-eyed
-Iridescent

Nandika

nandikamathur18 — 2024-08-01 05:41:57 UTC

‘October extinguished itself in a rush of howling winds and driving rain and November arrived, cold as frozen iron, with hard frosts every morning and icy droughts that bit at exposed hands and faces. The skies and ceiling of the great hall turned a pale, pearly grey, the mountains around Hogwarts were snowcapped, and the temperature in the castle dropped so low that many students wore their thick dragonskin gloves in the corridors between lessons’.

➡️ Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, J.K. Rowling.

Descriptive words Atharv Bansal

2024-08-01 05:42:17 UTC

Black, tiny, ugly, loyal, thousands and thousands, lines and lines, rows and rows, bumpy, scary, scared, sacred, white, huge.

Atharv Bansal

- The red pyramid by Rick riordan

Descriptive Words from The Cruel Prince- amira

2024-08-01 05:42:57 UTC

Her skin is the blueish shade of skim milk

Hair as white as fresh-fallen snow

Beautiful but unnerving to look at, almost like a ghost

A mossy dress

Elaborate shining collar

The pink of her ears and lips stand out

The green of deep forests

Silver bridles

Braided into complicated and magical knots

Nathan Li

nathanli8338 — 2024-08-01 05:43:24 UTC

"Next to him, where Chiron usually sat, was someone I'd never seen before - a pale, horribly thin man in a threadbare orange prisoner's jumpsuit. The number over his pocket read 0001. He had blue shadows under his eyes, dirty fingernails and badly cut grey hair, like his last haircut had been done with a weed whacker. He stared at me, his eyes made me nervous. He looked.....fractured. Angry, frustrated and hungry all at the same time."

- Percy Jackson and The Sea of Monsters by Rick Riordan

Descriptive words- angry, frustrated, hungry, "blue shadows under his eyes", haircut and dirty fingernails. This creates an image of the person in our minds.

Adhiraj Bubber

2024-08-01 05:43:40 UTC

Words-clear, mighty, large, gigantic, enormous, bellowing, long

Samaira Law Singh

2024-08-01 05:43:55 UTC

The Wicked King: Holly Black

Chapter 11, Paragraph 1

‘The whole Court moves to the Milkwood, where the trees are shrouded in masses of silk coverings’

‘Structure of flat stone’

‘It towers over the grove’

‘Crown gleaming at his brow’

‘Sage and Yarrow’

‘For a distorted moment’

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Vaidehi

vaidu06 — 2024-08-01 05:43:57 UTC

“His mouth was a plump bow, his nose an aristocratic arrow.”
“He did not slur my name, as people often did, running it together as if in a hurry to be rid of it.”
“Her mouth was a gash of red, like the torn up stomach of a sacrifice, bloody and oracular.”
“Odysseus stood unharmed. Thetis’ fists were strangling themselves white.”

Here, the author uses similes and various adjectives to describe people, and in some cases, simple things like the pronunciation of a name or clenching fists. The author is showing, not telling.

Words: plump, aristocratic, bloody, oracular, gash, unharmed, slurring

Abhyudai Varanasi - 6S

2024-08-01 05:44:11 UTC

Descriptive words:

Collapsed, wobbly, welly, dull, motionless, swelled, rusting, jigged, faded, massive, lightly

Sana Malhotra The Weight Of Blood 🩸

sanamalhotra09 — 2024-08-01 05:44:12 UTC

Words:

Indigo (describing the night sky)

Pinpricks (describing stars)

Curious (describing the stars as eyes of the dead)

Thick (describing the air)

Scent (describing the smell of pine and damp earth)

Fragrant (describing the reminder of recent rain)

Shimmering (describing droplets on leaves)

Silent (describing the forest)

Secrets (describing what the forest harbors)

Deepening (describing the shadows)

Eerie (describing the glow of the moon)

Faint (describing the rustle of leaves)

Long-forgotten (describing the lullaby)

Chilling (describing the hoot of an owl)

Spectral (describing the sound of the owl)

Shivers (describing the effect on the spine)

Descriptive words veer

veerjain110912 — 2024-08-01 05:45:26 UTC

Ice white hair
Feathered
Mullet
Pointy
Tight
AWFUL
silk
Groovy

Akul Bindra- WINGS OF FIRE - DRAGONETS PROPHECY(1ST BOOK)

2024-08-01 05:46:21 UTC

"Fires flickered around the edges of the great central cave. Echoing space yawned overhead,dripping with stalactites like huge teeth. The cave dome was big enough for six full grown dragons to fit across with their wings extended. The underground river flowed along one wall, muttering and gurgling as if plotting an escape of their own."

Aahana

bn28c6jrvr — 2024-08-01 05:46:23 UTC

Descriptive words from the book ‘The Monsters of Rookhaven’
Austere
Black-clad
Pale face
Starry
Creaking

Vihaan Agarwal

2024-08-01 05:46:24 UTC

Big, long, scruffy, long, beefy, enormous, rumble, infested, raging, red, gold, flaming, horrifying, terrifying.

Daksh Bachchas

2024-08-01 05:46:57 UTC

Exotic, faraway, world of endless sunshine, tall ,fluttering , crisp blue skies

Aaira Jain

2024-08-01 05:47:13 UTC

Words:Shiny,slippery,sweet,delight,orange-yellow,smelling of summer.

Simile:soft as a yam

Adhya Singh

adhyasingh121211 — 2024-08-01 05:47:37 UTC

A young woman with white-blonde hair cropped closely to her head and eyeliner raccoon-dripped around her eyes. The face beneath it all looked eerily Andie-like: similar blue big eyes and plump pale lips

Descriptive words: raccoon-dripped, big blue eyes and plump pale lips

A good girl’s guide to murder
by Holly Jackson

Shaurya kansal

shauryakansal7 — 2024-08-01 05:48:17 UTC

A small van came to their door and 2 men helped their father and mother pile everything into it . They were so tired that they could not do anything but drink hot milk. At last they got off at that tiny hill station they were to get out . How lovely it would be to be win the clean country . A sleepy looking looking porter put their 2 bags on a trolly.

Advika raghavan

2024-08-01 05:57:54 UTC

You think you’d know what a killer sounds like.

That their lies would have a different texture; some barely perceptible shift. A voice that thickens, grows sharp and uneven as the truth slips beneath the jagged edges. You’d think that, wouldn’t you? Everyone thinks they’d know , if it came down to it. But pip hadn’t.

‘ It’s such a tragedy what happened in the end.’

Sitting across from him, looking into his kind , crinkled eyes, her phone between them recording every sound and sniff and throat-clearing huff. She’d believed it all, every word. Pip traced her fingers across the mousepad , skipping the audio file back again

𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐜𝐫𝐢𝐩𝐭𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐬

𝐀 𝐯𝐨𝐢𝐜𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐧𝐬, 𝐠𝐫𝐨𝐰𝐬 𝐬𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐩 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐮𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐧 𝐚𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐫𝐮𝐭𝐡 𝐬𝐥𝐢𝐩𝐬 𝐛𝐞𝐭𝐰𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐣𝐚𝐠𝐠𝐞𝐝 𝐞𝐝𝐠𝐞𝐬.

𝐋𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐨 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐤𝐢𝐧𝐝, 𝐜𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐤𝐥𝐞𝐝 𝐞𝐲𝐞𝐬, 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐩𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐬𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐬𝐧𝐢𝐟𝐟 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐭𝐡𝐫𝐨𝐚𝐭-𝐜𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐡𝐮𝐟𝐟.

𝐏𝐢𝐩 𝐭𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐞𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐚𝐜𝐫𝐨𝐬𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐮𝐬𝐞𝐩𝐚𝐝, 𝐬𝐤𝐢𝐩𝐩𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐚𝐮𝐝𝐢𝐨 𝐟𝐢𝐥𝐞 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤 𝐚𝐠𝐚𝐢𝐧