Narrative Writing by John Fernandes - 56625/TCHR/BKDC https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp 1.Write a story which includes the sentence: ‘I could not believe how much the place had changed since last year.’ 2.Write a story about an occasion when someone witnessed a very poor musical performance. (Remember that you should include full details of what is poor about the performance to show that it is an important part of your story.) en-us 2020-12-21 05:10:16 UTC 2020-12-23 05:26:33 UTC hello@padlet.com johnfernandes56625 https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035289366 1.Write a story which includes the sentence: ‘I could not believe how much the place had changed since last year.’ 

2.Write a story about an occasion when someone witnessed a very poor musical performance. (Remember that you should include full details of what is poor about the performance to show that it is an important part of your story.)

3. Describe your favourite time of the year and explain what makes it special. (Remember that you are describing the characteristics of the time and not telling a story.) 

4. ‘Many films are a bad influence on young people.’ What is your view? 

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Where and how will your story start?

Starting Sentence? (Hook)

What happens next? (Action)

What happens next? (Consequence)

What happens next? (Further Consequence)

How is your tension resolved?

How will you end your story? (Conclusion)

]]> 2020-12-21 05:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035292642 Rough Draft for topic 1 musaddiq5923 https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035294165
Where and how will your story start?
in a war ridden place  where a war is happening 
Starting Sentence? (Hook)
there goes another army jet and yet another bomb blast throbbing our windows and making our hearts pump even faster.
What happens next? (Action)
the family try to get out of the place as quickly as possible.
What happens next? (Consequence)
the family was living with three fat stubborn dudes and there were not enough supplies. not enough money to go to school or even get food.
What happens next? (Further Consequence)
dont know......
How is your tension resolved?
things get better the parents get a job and they rent a house and stuff
How will you end your story? (Conclusion)
news spreads the war has ended the brothers decide to go and visit their old home. suddenly two groups of people start firing at each other and a few army jets come in too. maybe the war hasn't ended yet and the news was a fake one
]]> 2020-12-21 05:18:05 UTC https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035294165 https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035309823 Rough Draft
Mohsin Ali

Where and how will your story start?
The story starts in a place where development work has completely changed it

Starting Sentence? (Hook)
I cannot believe my eyes that standing at the same place 20 years before was nothing except dunes of sand. It was the same place from where we crossed everyday to  reach our school through unmetalled road

What happens next? (Action)
The development work describe it and how the place was 20yrs before what changes have taken place
What happens next? (Consequence)

What happens next? (Further Consequence)
-

How is your tension resolved?
There is no tension

How will you end your story? (Conclusion)
The story will end when the student leaves the plave with many fresh memories and goes on with his life to start a new life at the same place which is a manufacturing plant of.a company now he gets a job there]]> 2020-12-21 05:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035309823 Narrative: Rough Draft omar6478 https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035317999 1.Write a story which includes the sentence: ‘I could not believe how much the place had changed since last year.’ 

Q1: Where and how will your story start?
The story will start off with a troubled college student in his own room, trying to study for his monthly tests. 

Q2: Starting Sentence? (Hook)
“Everything was going wrong. Despite studying for days on end, I had forgotten everything that was gonna be part of my test tomorrow. I was so screwed.”

Q3: What happens next? (Action)
After failing horribly in my monthly tests, my motivation to study was gone. My hard work isn't paying off, so I decided to not work at all.

Q4: What happens next? (Consequence)
My second monthly tests are nearly on top of me, anxiety kicks in. 2 days before the tests, I start preparing. Why couldn't college  be a bit easier. I thought it became easier as u go up, not increasingly difficult.

Q5: What happens next? (Further Consequence)
Cracks under pressure, has a severe Anxiety attack and I end up in the ER. It couldn't have gotten worse for me. 

Q6: How is your tension resolved?
I eventually visited my O level school, due to one of my juniors in the debate team, asking me to conduct a session and give them my insight on MUN. I could not believe how much the place had changed since last year. Meeting all my teachers, and my juniors, I recalled memories in the place I accomplished so much in, and although it was little like the way I left it, my contributions had helped it to grow. It gave me a much needed confidence boost, and set me on the right track for self care and self growth. I eventually also got therapy and kept in frequent contact with my teachers working towards myself and improving day by day

Q7: How will you end your story? (Conclusion)
With things going better than before, I start studying a month earlier for my midterms, and am ready to tackle them with a fresh and reinforced mindset. One that could take on the world. Nerves hit yet again before my result, however, I am ecstatic seeing an upward improvement from my horrible performance throughout the rest of the college term. I kept working on myself and the only way forward was upwards.


]]> 2020-12-21 05:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035317999 Rough Draft topic1 https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035319393 Where and how will your story start?]]> 2020-12-21 05:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035319393 Sarah Sohail https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035330787 Where and how will your story start?
The story starts with bella drowned in a notebook with a pencil in her hand. She is trying to write something as writing is something she loves and devours the most.

Starting Sentence? (Hook)
As the story starts with Bella trying to write the hook is: " The very next day Anne brings... um no, I need to modify this a bit". Suddenly her mother calls her downstairs for her singing classes.

What happens next? (Action)
She gets annoyed and becomes so upset as soon as she hears about her singing classes because she really does not want to go. She started attending singing classes just for her mother's happiness because singing is in their blood line. Therefore, she cannot even refuse but one thing that really depresses her is that no one motivates and encourages her in writing because she is never able to excel in cotests and competitions although she loves it.

What happens next? (Consequence)
She has an audition soon for a singing agency, she is striving to somehow be able to improve herself at her singing classes but unfortunately, the more she tries the worse she gets. She is so done with everything, her mother is enthusiastic and highly looking forward to her audition while Bella is extremely apathetic and dispassionate about it.

What happens next? (Further Consequence)
She goes for the audition with her mother where when she sings, tries her best but the judges have to stop her midway : "pathetic, so out of rhythm, scattered! You really need a lot of practice, you are not even able to touch the short notes". They have a disgusted expressions which makes her feel embarrased, she is on the verge of crying her lungs out. Her mother is upset, her expressions are a mixture of distress and disappointment.

How is your tension resolved?
When they go home, the situation is extremely awkward. Bella gathers her confidence and makes her mother understand that how she tried but was not able to get better at singing, she explains how much she went through to practice just for her mother's content and that her real talent, compassion is in writing which if she tries and works hard for, it will be a whole hearted effort and she will be able to achieve a lot

How will you end your story? (Conclusion)
The story ends with Bella working hard and putting in all her effort in writing, her mother is also able to see that gradually she has improved her skills and made herself better in what she loced the most.
]]> 2020-12-21 05:49:14 UTC https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035330787 Rough draft topic 1. Adil https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035346051 Where and how will story start ?
In a beautiful village full of lakes and beautiful gardens of mangoes and grapes . Village surrounded with hills and is lush green 

Starting sentence 
Hook
There were two wealthy families who had the most control in the village with most gardens but there broke a fight between them which changed the face of the village forever

Action
As the fight breaks out both the leaders of the families try to burn down eachothers gardens so the can get weak and gain back their control

Consequence 
Alot of people die in this fighting and are brutally been  murdered . The gardens which were once known through out the country for their friuts turned into ash

Further consequence 
During the fighting one of the family leader’s sons also die , the lakes which were once really beautiful now turned into red with full of blood 

Tension resolve ?
The leaders whose sons died backed out of the fight as he wanted to protect his daughters and didnt wanted to lose them aswell . He handed over all his gardens to the other leader

Conclusion 
The face of the village now changed forever . Though the other leader got all the gardens but now they were of no use as they were only ash . Alot of innocent families died in the fighting while the other families fled away from the village and never returned back]]> 2020-12-21 06:02:38 UTC https://padlet.com/johnfernandes56625/n5epevj6x29z11pp/wish/1035346051