Pre4 English Students' Work Moderation by Nadia Hussain

HA - EOY June 2022-2023

2jl482 — 2023-06-05 11:46:21 UTC

HA - BOY - 2022-2023

2ej4261 — 2023-06-05 11:50:36 UTC

HA - MOY - 2022-2023

2ej4261 — 2023-06-05 11:53:27 UTC

Students wrote words independently describing themselves using words that are written phonetically. There is a clear sentence structure in speaking and writing.

MA- BOY - 2022-2023

2ej4261 — 2023-06-05 11:55:44 UTC

This piece of writing is a medium from the samples because the child attempted to form some letters and their drawing of a body is improving. After discussions this piece of work is considered a Pre3 M.

MA - MOY - 2022-2023

2ej4261 — 2023-06-05 11:57:31 UTC

I can write with some mistakes and show some understanding of sentence structure.

MA- EOY - 2022-2023

2ej4261 — 2023-06-05 11:59:06 UTC

LA - EOY- June 2022-2023

2ej4261 — 2023-06-05 12:01:34 UTC

The students copy letters and added strings of letters to express themselves.

LA- BOY- June 2022-2023

2ej4261 — 2023-06-05 12:03:01 UTC

This child showed mark-making and I chose this piece as a ‘low.’ After discussions and comparing it to the different rubric, this piece of writing would be considered as a Pre3 low at this time of the year.

LA- MOY- 2022-2023

2ej4261 — 2023-06-05 12:05:07 UTC

I can copy letters. I can write my name with some mistakes or by using the name card.

HA-BOY-PS4A-23/24

2oy987 — 2023-10-17 13:02:49 UTC

I can draw using different lines and write my name correctly.

MA-BOY-PS4A-23/24

2oy987 — 2023-10-17 13:03:56 UTC

I can make simple drawing. I am starting to develop my letter formation in order to write my name.

LA-BOY-PS4A-23/24

2oy987 — 2023-10-17 13:04:57 UTC

I am still developing my pencil grip but I am trying hard to create a drawing and write my name.

HA-BOY-PS4B-23/24

2oy987 — 2023-10-17 13:06:40 UTC

I can draw and healthy sandwich and comment on what is in my sandwich. I can also write many letters.

MA-BOY-PS4B-23/24

2oy987 — 2023-10-17 13:08:21 UTC

I am beginning to create and form letters using the correct letter formation. I have started writing my name by writing the letter H.

LA-BOY-PS4B-23/24

2oy987 — 2023-10-17 13:10:25 UTC

I am developing my fine motor skills as I learn how to grasp the pencil correctly and make different mark making lines like straight, wavy, zigzag and curve lines.

HA BOY PS4E 23/24

2023-10-22 09:42:47 UTC

Students drew a picture of themselves and attempted to write their name or write about what they drew.

MA BOY PS4E 23/24

2023-10-22 09:44:07 UTC

Students drew a picture of themselves and attempted to write their name or write about what they drew.

LA BOY PS4E 23/24

2023-10-22 09:45:52 UTC

Students drew a picture of themselves and attempted to write their name or write about what they drew.

HA-MOY-PS4A-23/24

2oy987 — 2024-02-05 03:45:37 UTC

I am able to form a sentence and identify initial sounds on my own.

MA-MOY-PS4A-23/24

2oy987 — 2024-02-05 03:47:37 UTC

I am beginning to form sentences and writing the taught letters that I hear in our taught sight words.

LA-MOY-PS4A-23/24

2oy987 — 2024-02-05 03:49:19 UTC

I am trying hard to form letters. I am able to draw myself with some detail while developing my pencil grip.

HA-MOY-PS4B-23/24

2oy987 — 2024-02-05 03:56:26 UTC

I can form a sentence using taught sight words. I can also write my name on my own. I can make a drawing of myself and add details to bring it to life.

MA-MOY-PS4B-23/24

2oy987 — 2024-02-05 04:00:22 UTC

I can write and make the sounds of the taught letters. I am mark making using some details to represent details. I am trying hard to develop my pencil grip.

LA-MOY-PS4B-23/24

2oy987 — 2024-02-05 04:02:26 UTC

I am trying hard to form letters to be able to write the taught sight words. I can draw with some detail and I am working hard to develop my pencil grip further.

LA-MOY-PS4H-23/24

2024-02-05 09:59:59 UTC

I can draw a picture of myself, using some detail and write some letters that I know.

MA-MOY-PS4H-23/24

2024-02-05 10:02:02 UTC

I can draw a self-portrait with lots of detail and write my name accurately. I can form most letters accurately and so somebody else can read it.

HA-MOY-PS4H-23/24

2024-02-05 10:04:07 UTC

I can draw detailed pictures and describe who is in my picture. I can write sentences using my phonics knowledge and known sight words.

EOY HA PS4 C&D

2024-05-28 07:15:35 UTC

I can write words phonetically; I can use and write the sight words correctly in a sentence. I can write with some mistakes, but others can understand my writing.

EOY MA PS4 C&D

2024-05-28 07:16:50 UTC

I can write initial sounds of words; I can write with some mistakes and its difficult for others to understand my writing. I am beginning to show an awareness of how sentences are structured verbally.

EOY LA PS4 C &D

2024-05-28 07:20:49 UTC

I can copy letters. I can string letters and understand my writing.

EOY HA PS4B

2oy987 — 2024-05-28 09:09:51 UTC

I can write and segment and blend letters on my own. I can also represent what I write in a drawing.

EOY MA PS4B

2oy987 — 2024-05-28 09:11:48 UTC

I can write initial sounds to represent the objects in my drawing. I am segmenting on my own.

EOY LA PS4B

2oy987 — 2024-05-28 09:12:50 UTC

I am trying hard to segment the letters that I hear in words. 'My name and mom have a lot of m's'.

EOY LA PS4A

2oy987 — 2024-05-28 09:14:19 UTC

I am trying hard to form letters that I hear in words. I can segment with teachers support.

EOY MA PS4A

2oy987 — 2024-05-28 09:15:30 UTC

I can draw and represent my drawing with a statement. I segmented on my own and tried hard to form the letters correctly in a sentence.

EOY HA PS4A

2oy987 — 2024-05-28 09:16:51 UTC

I can draw a detailed picture and write a sentence on my own to represent my drawing. I segmented and blended the letter sounds to write the sentence.

2024-05-30 09:51:34 UTC

I can use sight words in my writing and segment words independently. I can form a sentence and draw a picture in relation to my sentence.

2024-05-30 09:52:29 UTC

I can draw a picture and talk about it. I can write the initial sound of a word.

2024-05-30 09:53:27 UTC

I can form a sentence independently and other people understand my writing. I can segment words and write the sounds that I hear. I can write the initial sounds of words.

PS4 BOY LA 24/25

2oy987 — 2024-09-30 11:11:29 UTC

PS4 BOY MA 24/25

2oy987 — 2024-09-30 11:13:41 UTC

PS4 BOY HA 24/25

2oy987 — 2024-09-30 11:15:54 UTC

Pre4 MOY LA 24/25

2025-02-17 03:20:20 UTC

I am able to draw myself and attempt to write a taught sight word and my name.

Pre4 MOY MA 24/25

2025-02-17 03:21:27 UTC

I can draw myself with details and use taught sight words to form a sentence. I can segment the word mom on my own.

Pre4 MOY HA 24/25

2025-02-17 03:22:47 UTC

I can draw myself and write a sentence using taught sight words in a sentence formation. I can also segment the name Leo (my cat's name) on my own.

Pre4 EOY HA 24/25

2oy987 — 2025-06-01 09:46:48 UTC

I can draw a detailed picture and write a sentence using sight words i have learned.

Pre4 EOY MA 24/25

2oy987 — 2025-06-01 09:47:49 UTC

I can draw myself and my friend and attempt to write a sentence using sight words.

Pre4 EOY LA 24/25

2oy987 — 2025-06-01 09:48:57 UTC

I am trying hard to make a drawing of myself. I can write my name with the correct letter formation.

Pre4 BOY HA 25/26

2oy987 — 2025-09-17 11:32:12 UTC

I can draw myself in detail. I can draw my facial features, arms and legs. I can write my name uisng correct letter formation to the best of my ability.

Pre4 BOY LA 25/26

2025-09-17 11:35:05 UTC

I showed interest in mark making. I attempt to copy the letters of my name and draw myself as I observe myself in a mirror.

Pre4 BOY MA 25/26

2oy987 — 2025-09-17 11:35:30 UTC

I can draw myself with some detailed features. I tried writing my name using the correct letter formation to the best of my abilitly.

Pre4 MOY HA 25/26

2oy987 — 2026-02-17 10:47:54 UTC

I can write my name and draw in detail about myself.

Pre4 MOY HA 25/26

2oy987 — 2026-02-17 10:50:20 UTC

I can draw myself and write a sentence using taught sight words on my own.

Pre4 MOY MA 25/26

2oy987 — 2026-02-17 10:52:20 UTC

I can draw myself and attempt to write a sentence using taught sight words on my own.

Pre4 MOY MA 25/26

2oy987 — 2026-02-17 10:53:11 UTC

I can draw myself and write my name on my own.

Pre4 MOY LA 25/26

2oy987 — 2026-02-17 10:54:54 UTC

I can draw myself with some detail and attempt to write my name with guidence.

Pre4 MOY LA 25/26

2oy987 — 2026-02-17 10:57:22 UTC

I am attempting to draw myself and write some of the letters in my name.

EOY MA 2025-2026

2026-06-14 10:32:01 UTC

EOY LA 2025-2026

2026-06-14 10:32:45 UTC

EOY HA 2025-2026

2026-06-14 10:33:30 UTC