https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf Proofreading and Editing en-us 2016-09-09 13:46:24 UTC 2016-09-17 16:40:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404135 2016-09-16 16:10:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404135 https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404328 U did ]]> 2016-09-16 16:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404328 https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404357 You di]]> 2016-09-16 16:11:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404357 https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404449 Y]]> 2016-09-16 16:11:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404449 https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404518 You did good but u need to change how the words are set up 

]]> 2016-09-16 16:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404518 https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404529 You need to mak more sense and you more pronouns and ver]]> 2016-09-16 16:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404529 https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404600 2016-09-16 16:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404600 https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404937 Make more sense and use more pronouns and verbs an]]> 2016-09-16 16:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124404937 arianaculbreth99 https://padlet.com/sharenking1/n3ht07pcdrf/wish/124524862 Hi ms King 

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