https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi Post a pic of the comic strip here en-us 2020-05-18 08:43:33 UTC 2026-02-15 21:44:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579318449 www: you added high level adjectives and vocabulary.
EBI: if you included diagrams describing what your saying.]]> 2020-05-18 08:49:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579318449 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579319063 PA by Michelle
WWW: Nice try there to attempt metaphors and similes.
EBI: Your hand writing was more clear and if you made your work, year 6 level it would be much better. ]]> 2020-05-18 08:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579319063 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579319132 Per assessed by marten

Www:wrote a good sentence 

Ebi:you continue the whole comic strip

]]> 2020-05-18 08:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579319132 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579319587 You have very good drawings and you have used the writing tools well

]]> 2020-05-18 08:49:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579319587 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579319883 2020-05-18 08:50:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579319883 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579320817 WWW: she used emotive words
EBI: make the comic more suspenseful 

Peer assessed by naya]]> 2020-05-18 08:50:33 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579320817 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579321382 2020-05-18 08:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579321382 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579321413 Www: it’s very neat and everything it’s very interesting.
EBI: it would be better if u drawer pictures in each one of the boxes. Peer assessed by yousef]]> 2020-05-18 08:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579321413 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579322652 WWW:he wrote enough and to look like a comic and it is very interesting.
EBI:To make it more neat.
Peer assessed by Farida.]]> 2020-05-18 08:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579322652 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579326866 Peer assessed Tara
www:You have included good structure 
Eib:You should include writing tools or figurative language]]> 2020-05-18 08:53:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579326866 ankrithik_gfs https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579336560 WWW: Your diagrams are clear 
EBI:Try to make your sentences a little longer.]]> 2020-05-18 08:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579336560 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579337341 Joseph ]]> 2020-05-18 08:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579337341 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579341667 WWW:You included neat handwriting and used some high level vocabulary
EBI: You could have added some pictures or drawings.
Peer Assessed by Ankrithi]]> 2020-05-18 08:59:49 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579341667 maymishu2008 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579368080 WWW:she made a very good effort of trying to make it like a comic and looks like she actually did it


EBI:if that she would write neatly and she could write more ]]> 2020-05-18 09:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579368080 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579371140 www: she wrote a nice comic 
EBI: she did it neat ]]> 2020-05-18 09:12:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579371140 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579379978 Peer assessed by Dhrivika 
WWW : You have used high level vocabulary to describe the setting .
EBI : You could have made your work neat . 

]]> 2020-05-18 09:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579379978 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579383567 Peer assessed by Dhrivika 
WWW : Your drawings are clear 
EBI : You could have described what is happening even further . ]]> 2020-05-18 09:17:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579383567 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579392229 Peer assessed by Lili
WWW: You have used amazing synonyms
EBI: If you could use subordinate clause]]> 2020-05-18 09:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579392229 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579451691 WWW:nice adjectives and adverbs
EBI:maybe try using more figurative language and make a little more clear.]]> 2020-05-18 09:47:30 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579451691 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579471291 Peer assessed by aya
Www:Nice handwriting and showing 
EBI:You use higher vocabulary.

]]> 2020-05-18 09:56:43 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579471291 https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579553906 peer assessed by hamadan    WWW: nice handwriting                 EBI: you can make it more clear for us to see]]> 2020-05-18 10:39:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nagalakshmigajendra/n30wsj24vrxpu2qi/wish/579553906