Writing Workshop Week (1) by Rebecca Harris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1 (1st) Plan (2nd) Accomplishments (3rd) Comment on 5 classmate posts en-us 2022-10-31 13:37:24 UTC 2022-11-09 03:04:35 UTC hello@padlet.com Dr. Harris --- EXAMPLE dr_rebeccalharris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2363308878 Plan:
  1. More details about the current practice that my reform  is responding to.
  2. Add more support for the purpose of schooling I think is most important.
  3. Strengthen the details of my philosophy of education by adding 2 more attributes.
Accomplishments:
  1. I strengthened my research by adding 3 more sources about my reform.
  2. I developed details on the current practice my reform responds to and my reform itself.
  3. Made sure the theme of equity is clearly explained, and is threaded across each section of my essay
]]> 2022-10-31 13:37:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2363308878 Taylor Weaver https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368571183 plan: 
1) I am going to add more outside sources to help support my reform.
2) I am going to add more details and information about my reform
3) I am going to go in and correct grammar issues and go correct my proposal because I have more knowledge about my reform.]]> 2022-11-03 14:34:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368571183 Jordan Miglino https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368572667 Plan
-Go back into my proposal essay and add more specific details to make a strong introduction for my essay.
-Add extra sources to provide more information to support my reform. 
-Review the comments that were left on each individual essay again and make improvements based on the comments. ]]> 2022-11-03 14:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368572667 Kaya Richardson https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368572773 Plan:
1. Develop the context and background of my proposal section.
2. Clearly state my reform in the proposal section.
3. Add more research throughout the essay and improve my intext citations.

Accomplishments:
1. Developed proposal with current eligibility for NSLP and added conclusion and introduction paragraphs.
2. Clearly stated reform in proposal section.
3.Added 2 more sources to develop proposal section and improved intext citations through paper. ]]> 2022-11-03 14:35:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368572773 Tyler Maidene "Plan" tbeih22 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368576915 1. Make sure editing the in-text citations is done to ensure it follows the APA formatting.
2. Make sure it is clear I have researched the reform I am advocating and it is shown within the essay.
3. Get all the essays together and find a way to smoothly combine them all.]]> 2022-11-03 14:38:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368576915 Emma Hadden https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368578563 Plan: 
1. Go back to my proposal essay and clearly state my reform.
2. Look at the comments left on each of my papers and make improvements.
3. Find more sources to help support my reform ]]> 2022-11-03 14:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368578563 Remi Sullivan https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368851595 Plan:
1.) Go through each section and revise language that may be unclear.
2.) Add information that may have been missing (Educational Pioneers)
3.) Correct information that may have been wrong (Funding)
4.) Seek out and fix grammatical errors

]]> 2022-11-03 17:16:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368851595 Deanna Marshall https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368937745
  • I will clearly restate my reform with the sections to address and resources to support. 
  • I will be more clear and address the prompts with additional information and resources.  
  • I will add more headings to better state my topics. 
    • ]]>     2022-11-03 18:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2368937745     Noah https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2369481584 I plan to look back through Dr Harris’ comments on my papers. Use her feedback to strengthen my papers individually then transfer them to a separated document for the final paper where I will blend them together to make 1 giant paper

    I think this is a good strategy as it will help give me help in certain areas of where I lost points on previous papers]]>     2022-11-04 03:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2369481584     Deanna Marshall https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2370697351
  • I have successfully added an abstract. 
  • I have readdressed my proposal to better state my reform more clearly. 
  • I have successfully added headings to better understand my topics throughout my paper. 
  • I have explained the importance of my reform and how it connects to the purpose of school. 
  • I have added more support for my philosophy section in the paper. 
  • I have explained the relations between my reform and philosophical viewpoint. 
  • I have added my equity section. 
  • I have provided research to support my reform from the lens of equity. 
  • I have added a conclusion. 
  • I have summarized the importance of my reform and advocated the need for change.
    • ]]>     2022-11-04 22:19:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2370697351     Taylor Weaver https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2375202839 accomplishments 
    1) added clarity to my paper through my reform.
    2) expanded my vocabulary throughout my essay.
    3) took Dr.Harris's suggestions and strengthened my essay with those.
    4) fixed grammatical errors

    ]]>     2022-11-08 15:28:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2375202839     Jordan Miglino https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2375206428 accomplishments:
    1) I have created a good equity paragraph to add to my essay to strengthen it
    2) Fixed grammatical errors and made sure I wasn't repeating myself too much in the essay.
    3) I have gone through all my "stand alone" essays and took Dr. Harris's advice to make sure that they are as strong as possible. 
    4) I have reached the word count necessary for the final paper]]>     2022-11-08 15:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2375206428     Tyler Maidene "Accomplishments" tbeih22 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2375231809 1. I have fixed a lot of grammatical errors and citations.
    2. I have revised a lot of the text because I have gained more knowledge on the reform.
    3. I have blended the sections and the proposal together.]]>     2022-11-08 15:45:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2375231809     Emma Hadden https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2375508738 Accomplishments:
    1. Going back in and checking my grammar issues and repeating words.
    2. Went back to Dr. Harris's comments and used those to strengthen my essay
    3. I have a strong equality paragraph to add to my essay to strengthen ]]>     2022-11-08 18:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2375508738     Remi Sullivan https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2376079221 1.) I have made edits for clarity in each of my papers
    2.) I have added some in text citations to my proposal essay
    3.) I have added links to an educational pioneer in my purpose essay and issued a correction
    4.) I have written my equity essay and am near completion on my conclusion
    5.) I have found and eliminated grammatical errors in each of my papers]]>     2022-11-09 02:58:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WWWeek_F22_1/wish/2376079221