https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft I'm Elina. So yeah en-us 2016-10-07 16:16:46 UTC 2024-06-25 19:55:28 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Brightnessdown.png 20jaine https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft/wish/129182767 2016-10-07 16:33:42 UTC https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft/wish/129182767 20jaine https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft/wish/129184387 I was pretty engaged in my work, especially on the second body paragraph. I think I have a ton of thoughts in my head that I would like to talk about but I can't put it in to words because my mind understands what I'm saying but I just can't say it. With being timed when writing this, I believe it forced me to actually write something and not just sit there thinking and not doing anything in the end. I was expecting a tad bit of a higher grade just because I thought I did really well, but after reading it again, I realized my grade was very fair. I am proud of my examples. I thought I did a good job providing examples. I want to improve on making the essay flow more and focusing more on the analysis and not getting off topic.]]> 2016-10-07 16:38:47 UTC https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft/wish/129184387 20jaine https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft/wish/129876884 2016-10-11 16:22:58 UTC https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft/wish/129876884 20jaine https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft/wish/129877853 thesis-proficient/needs improvement
Evidence- Proficient
Organization- proficient/needs improvement
Use of Language- Proficient
Grammar and Mechanics- Proficient
Analysis- Needs Improvement]]> 2016-10-11 16:25:18 UTC https://padlet.com/20jaine/mwid7b7xstft/wish/129877853