IELTS F - WRITING - UNIT 1 - LINE GRAPH by Howie Long https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds CHECK-UP: BODY PARAGRAPHS en-us 2022-03-29 08:08:24 UTC 2022-04-08 02:08:39 UTC hello@padlet.com CHECK-UP: BODY PARAGRAPHS howielongieltsfighter https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2118871001 Sentence 1 (Report data) – 1999: US (20%), Canada (10%), Mexico (5%)
In 1999 – proportion – people - using the Internet – USA – 20% - while – figures – Canada & Mexico – 10% & 5% respectively

Sentence 2 (Describe trends): all countries – increased sharply  
There – sharp increases – in terms of – percentages – Internet users – all countries – 1999 & 2005

Sentence 3 (Make comparison)
A similar pattern – witnessed – USA & Canada – both – increased – 70%
]]> 2022-03-29 08:13:25 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2118871001 Useful structures howielongieltsfighter https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2118894275 Report data:
· In + time, the proportion/percentage of X + was …
· In + time, the number/amount of X + was …
· In + time, the figure for X + was …
· The figures for A and B were … and … respectively

Describe trend 
1. X + V + ADV + (giới từ + number) + time
2. There was a/an + ADJ + N + (giới từ + number) + in + X + time
3. X + saw/witnessed/experienced + a/an + ADJ + N+ (giới từ + number) + time
4. a/an +  ADJ + N + (giới từ + number) + was seen + in + X + time
5. Time + saw/witnessed + a/an + ADJ + N + (giới từ + number) + in + X

Make comparison using SIMPLE SENTENCE
· A was + ADV + ADJ + than that of B

Make comparison using COMPLEX SENTENCE - RECOMMENDED
· A similar pattern was witnessed in + WHERE + AS + S V
. A was ..., số + times as many/much as that of B
. A stood at ... compared to ... B
· The figure for A was ..., while/whereas that for B stood at ...


Make comparison using REDUCED RELATIVE CLAUSE
. A, which stood at ... , was+  số + times as many/much as that of B 
. Standing at ..., A was+  số + times as many/much as that of B 
]]> 2022-03-29 08:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2118894275 quyet https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119226407 1. In 1999, the proportion of people using the internet in USA was 20% while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5% respectively
2. All countries ]]> 2022-03-29 12:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119226407 Quỳnh An https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119226475 In 1999, the prercentage of people using the internet in USA was 20% while the figures for Can&Mexico were 10% and 5% resepectively.

]]> 2022-03-29 12:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119226475 Trần Dương tranduong1812003 https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119226674 In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in USA was 20% while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5% respectively.  Additionally, there was a dramatic increase in terms of the percentage of Internet users in all three countries between 1999 and 2005. Besides, a similar pattern experienced an upward trend in the USA and Canada at around 70%.

]]> 2022-03-29 12:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119226674 Nguyễn Hà Anh https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119226959 In the year 1999, the rate of American Internet's users was 20 percent while the figures for Canadians and Mexicans using the Internet was 10 percent and 5 percent respectively. ]]> 2022-03-29 12:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119226959 Thanh Tâm bluestar090202 https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119227137 In 1999, the proportion of the people using the Internet in the USA was 20% while the figures of Canada and Mexico were 10% and 15% respectively.

]]> 2022-03-29 12:29:26 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119227137 Hồng Ngọc https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119227576  In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in the UK was about 20% while the numbers for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively. In addition, the share of Internet users in all countries increased sharply between 1999 and 2005. Also, a similar pattern has seen an upward trend in the United States and Canada of around 90% at the end of the period.



]]> 2022-03-29 12:29:38 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119227576 Văn Trung trungtid13276 https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119229501 1. In 1999, the proportion saw people using the Internet in USA was about 20% while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5% respectively.
2. All countries were increased sharply. There was a sharp increased in terms of the precentages  in the Internet users by all countries between 1999 and 2005]]> 2022-03-29 12:30:41 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119229501 Nguyễn Hà Anh https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119229589 All the nations had a sharp increasing percentage between 1999 to 2005.]]> 2022-03-29 12:30:44 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119229589 Nguyễn Hoàng Linh hoanglinh18072000 https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119230875 In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in USA was 20% while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5% respectively



]]> 2022-03-29 12:31:31 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119230875 ha my https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119231726 In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in the UK was about 20% while the numbers for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively.]]> 2022-03-29 12:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119231726 Nguyễn Hà Anh https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119232162 A similar pattern was suggested between the percentage of residents using the Internet in USA and Canada. Both raised to 70 percent.]]> 2022-03-29 12:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119232162 Trần Thị Hà Anh hhaanhhh https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119232519 In 1999, the percentage of people using the Internet in the USA was 20 percent while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10 percent and 5 percent respectively.]]> 2022-03-29 12:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119232519 Cẩm Anh https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119233234 In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in USA was 20%, while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5%, respectively.]]> 2022-03-29 12:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119233234 Cao Phượng :<< keongotsaobang193 https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119233581 In 1999, the proportion of the people using Internet in the US was 20% while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5% respectively. In 2005, the percentage of Americans and Canadians accessing the Internet was at the same level of nearly 70% whlst the figure for Mexicans reached just over 20%. ]]> 2022-03-29 12:33:13 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119233581 Hoài Trang https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119233605 1. In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in USA was 20% while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5% respectively.]]> 2022-03-29 12:33:13 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119233605 Hà https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119235038 In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was 20% while the figures for Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5% respectively. ]]> 2022-03-29 12:34:07 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119235038 KLinh 10 chứm ai-eo linh310726 https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119236283 In 1990, the proportion of people using the Internet in the US was 20% and the figure for Canada and Mexico were lower, with 10% and 5% respectively.  Besides, there was a sharp increase in terms of the percentages of Internet users in all countries from 1999 to 2005. In additionally, a similar pattern witnessed an upward trend in the USA and Canada at around 90% in the end of the period.]]> 2022-03-29 12:34:51 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119236283 Cẩm Anh https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119236456 There were sharp increases in terms of the percentage of the Internet users in all countries from 1999 to 2005.]]> 2022-03-29 12:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119236456 Thanh Tâm bluestar090202 https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119240596
There was a sharp increases in terms of the percentages of Internet users in all countries between 1999 and 2005.

A similar pattern was witnessed in USA & Canada as both increased to 70%.
]]> 2022-03-29 12:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119240596 A similar pattern WAS witnessed in USA and CANADA + LIÊN TỪ (AS) + both increased to 70%. (Cẩm anh) https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119242500 2022-03-29 12:38:21 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119242500 Hoài Trang https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119253205 2. There was a sharp increases in terms of the percentage of the Internet users in all countries between 1999 and 2005.
3. A similar pattern was witnessed in USA and Canada as both increased to 70%.]]> 2022-03-29 12:44:44 UTC https://padlet.com/howielongieltsfighter/mwdmfu27fhlzdeds/wish/2119253205