Josh African Olive by https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s en-us 2019-06-06 07:34:37 UTC 2025-04-19 19:23:41 UTC hello@padlet.com josh_bennett1996 https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366033970 2019-06-06 07:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366033970 Looks good bugger897 https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366072607 Your page looks really good, it's laid out quite well, and the pictures you've got are good. 

I'd suggest perhaps changing the colour of the headings to something that stands out better than yellow. Also, the 'subsp' isn't meant to be italicized. I'd also say that there is almost too much densely packed text on this page, don't forget that you've got 4 pages to work with in total, so you can afford to space things out a bit.

-Darcy]]> 2019-06-06 11:02:17 UTC https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366072607 I think that the colours chosen are on point for this brochure and the pictures work very well but would at making the species name more prominent . The text is very informative. I think that the formatting requires a bit of work. You have used textboxes to create this but have left the black borders around them and where they do not marry up to each other is quite distracting. rnh970 https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366277762 2019-06-07 05:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366277762 Clear, informative brochure, images detail plant features well, maybe include an image of a mature plant(?). Colours work well although headings in text boxes could be darker or bold font. Key points are good. Avoid having the plant name text box overlapping the image and move up the page closer to the header. Reposition the bottom test box and image so three key messages are aligned down the page as a column. abc56 https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366353339 2019-06-07 13:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366353339 A good summary of information on the African olive. One thing you can improve is the positioning of the text boxes and the titles at the top. Correct them to make a pattern of somekind will improve the look of the brochure. Also, maybe write the titles as something more formal, including the "The Plant". thomasvogan1997 https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366707032 2019-06-10 13:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366707032 Would probably put info on height etc. in the text there. Picture is good and not excessively dominant like some others. Good info on control/distribution johnbrooks941 https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366828621 -John ]]> 2019-06-11 01:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/josh_bennett1996/mvuj2avkal2s/wish/366828621