https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3 Make a post with your name and one thing from your Personal Narrative that you plan to improve for your Embedded Assessment. en-us 2022-06-03 16:19:23 UTC 2022-06-03 16:38:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210368142 I would like to improve my pacing by planning how I want to write it ahead of time and not rush in the end. I would like to also thoroughly explore my modes of communication next time as well.]]> 2022-06-03 16:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210368142 https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210369038 One thing I want to improve in my personal narrative is that I need to make the pacing of the story a little faster and not make it too long. I need to find a way to narrate the events in a way that it doesn't stretch out too long.]]> 2022-06-03 16:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210369038 https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210369381 Honestly, proud of myself and grade on that. However, I would improve on making the story more complete for the pacing and lean more into accurate description.]]> 2022-06-03 16:29:40 UTC https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210369381 nr103254 https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210369836 I did good but i didnt get the grade i wanted...like i spoke realness...but whateverrrrrr.....i will do better next time ig:)]]> 2022-06-03 16:30:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210369836 https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210371564 i liked the character and thought in my poem , but i understand my prefernce of speech dont help wit my assignment .]]> 2022-06-03 16:32:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210371564 https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210372337 I feel I can improve by turning in my assignments on time.]]> 2022-06-03 16:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210372337 https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210373156  I plan to improve for Embedded Assessment by actually doing the essay ]]> 2022-06-03 16:33:59 UTC https://padlet.com/dariosulzman1/mvrp5lnn6s70avt3/wish/2210373156