4 eso A EVERYDAY writing by joana maria oliver salas https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38 en-us 2022-01-04 08:27:03 UTC 2025-10-07 00:32:18 UTC hello@padlet.com I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT I DON'T REACT IN THE SAME WHY WHEN I AM CRITIZED. When my parents criticise me sometimes I get upset because they're really important for me.HOWEVER,butwhen my friends do I don't really care about it. loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1987871226 Romaisa ]]> 2022-01-12 09:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1987871226 When my parents CRITIZE me I get angry because I care about their opinion.HOWEVER, WHEN MY FRIENDS DO IT I don’t care THAT MUCH. miquelcecilia18528 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1987876337 Cecília Miquel Mascaró]]> 2022-01-12 09:42:52 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1987876337 I don't like when people criticise me. HOWEVER I DO try to listen to them and to LEARN FROM my errors AND TO STRENGHTEN MY weak points loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1987877502 Fatima El Mekkioui]]> 2022-01-12 09:43:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1987877502 If I was asked to eat the same food for a week I would choose the Spanish 'paella'. It is my favourite food ,better said, it has always been the best option for me. I love it canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1989924804 Mar Càneves. ]]> 2022-01-13 08:52:25 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1989924804 I would choose spanish paella because I love it and it is my favourite food. Especially I like my mother's one, it is perfect and very tasty. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991912066 Mar Càneves. ]]> 2022-01-14 08:18:17 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991912066 I WOULD rather read people's mind, because if I COULD read people's mind I WOULD know what people thinK about me.ON THE ONE HAND, I WOULD know if I'm a good person and if I'm popular for the people. FINALLY, I could know if my girlfriend reAlly loves me. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991952911 Miquel Adrover TRY TO USE CONNECTORS AND BE CAREFUL ..YOU USED ALL THE TIME "WILL" BUT YOU SHOULD HAVE USED "WOULD " CONDITIONAL ]]> 2022-01-14 08:50:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991952911 ALBERT https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991954228 I would rather be able to read people's mind .I think that some times people say things that they don't really think and if I could read their mind I could know when they are LYING me.
OK, .I JUST ADD A FULL STOP IN THE FIRST SENTENCE BECUASE IF NOT THE SENTENCE WAS A BIT TOO LONG]]> 2022-01-14 08:51:22 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991954228 If I had to choose I would prefer TO read people'S mind becaUSE IT WOULD BE POSiTIVE FOR ME AND FOR OTHER PEOPLE. ON THE ONE HAND , I would be able to know if the PEOPLE LIE TO ME . As well as I could know if the PEOPLE ARE sad AND I would be able to help THEM https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991954246 Toni Martorell
ONE RECOMENDATION. USE PEOPLE INSTEAD OF  HE/ OR SHE  WHEN YOU TALK IN GENERAL ,BECAUSE IF NOT YOU WILL HAVE TO WRITE ALL THE TIME  "HIS  AND HER" 
EX. You will know if a person is sad and you will be able to help her or him/ you will know if people are sad and you will be able to help them.]]> 2022-01-14 08:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991954246 I would rather be able to read people's mind.WE ALL KNOW THAT PEOPLE ARE NOT SINCERE and if I WERE able to read people's mind I WOULD know always the truth fullanasergi17455 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991954403 Sergi Fullana Pascual.
REMEMBER TO USE "WOULD" AND NOT "WILL" BECAUSE READING PEOPLE'S MIND AS FAR AS I KNOW IT IS NOT POSSIBLE]]> 2022-01-14 08:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991954403 I would rather be invisible. I think if I COULD read PEOPLE'S minds I would get upset or insecure because I would constantly be hearing what people think about me.HOWEVER, if I WERE invisible I would be able to sneak in places that I WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO get in if I WERE not invisible elfatima17448 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991955138 fatima el mekkioui
REMEMBER "I" GOES ALWAYS IN CAPITAL LETTERS
REMEMBER TO USE "WOULD" AND NOT "WILL" BECAUSE AS FAR AS I KNOW BEING INVISIBLE IT IS NOT POSSIBLE SO FAR]]> 2022-01-14 08:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991955138 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991956385 I would rather be invisible because I  would BE ABLE to do  WHATEVER  I  wantED and nobody would see what I do. I think that beING  able to read people mind COULD  BE DANGEROUS because if you KNEW that the   WHAT PEOPLE THOUGHT people things to you, probably you won’t  WOULDN'T be happy.

Joan Nadal
DON'T WRITE THINGS LIKE  "A BAD THING", USE MORE SPECIFIC WORDS(COULD BE NEGATIVE, COULD HURT PEOPLE, 
USE "WOULD "AND NOT "WILL" BECAUSE BEING INVISIBLE IS NOT SOMETHING REAL.]]> 2022-01-14 08:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1991956385 I would rather be invisible because I would be able to SHOPLIFT.MOREOVER, knowing what people think it’s just depressing https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1992085464 Marina
OK ALTHOUGH ...WOULD YOU ONLY USE BEING INVISIBLE TO STEAL?
TO STEAL WHATEVER YOU WANT FROM A SHOP IS "SHOPLIFT"]]> 2022-01-14 10:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1992085464 Maria Adrover adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1992304839 I would rather to read people’s minds because I’m a curious person and I would like to know if what other PEOPLE said would be true or false. 
GOOD YOU USED "WOULD" CONGRATS]]> 2022-01-14 13:39:59 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1992304839 I would rather be invisible bacause I don't really care about what others think about me .So if I was able to read others peopleS mindS it wouldn't be much of a deal for me. On the other hand, if I was invisible I could do lots of MISCHIEVOUS /NAUGHTY things that I cannot do now. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1993601929 Jana G.]]> 2022-01-15 15:31:34 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1993601929 If I could choose between beING invisible or beING able to read minds, I would definitely choose to read minds, since I would love to know WHAT people think and WHETHER they are really telling the truth or not. I would really love to have that power. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1993669032 Brunna Da Silva
IF THE QUESTION HAS A YES/NO ANSWER IS BETTER TO USE "WHETHER"]]> 2022-01-15 17:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1993669032 alcovermaria17429 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1995620611 If I would rather HAVE THE CHANCE OF CHOOSING BETWEEN  beING  invisible or beING abled to reAd people's minds  I would choose to be invisible. Because  I could move all over everywhere without people seeing me, BEING SEEN .MOREOVER,  it would Also be a  VERY EASY way of stealING AMYTHING I WISH  without gettinG caught. 

Maria Alcover

]]> 2022-01-17 10:48:22 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1995620611 If I could choose between beING invisible or beING able to read minds, I WOULD choose to be invisible, because I COULD go to a lot of sites that AN ORDINARY person can't go. For example, if I WERE invisible, at the school time, I COULD SKIP LESSONS AND GO SOMEWHERE ELSE alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1996404213 Marc Alomar Fuster 
CONDITIONAL TYPE 2
IF I WERE....I COULD ( IF PAST SIMPLE, COULD/WOULD +INFINITIVE)]]> 2022-01-17 18:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1996404213 I would rather be invisible because I would like to go to places where I can not normally go because of my age . And I think it would be really FUN . canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999917730 Mar Càneves 
FUNNY(MAKES YOU LAUGH) FUN( IT IS ENTRETAINING...)]]> 2022-01-19 09:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999917730 I would rather go to the future cause I would be able to see what's my future WOULD BE like .MOREOVER I WOULD be able to change the things I don't like about it. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999924342 Jana Galmés Capó]]> 2022-01-19 09:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999924342 I would like to return to the past,ESPECIALLY I WOULD LIKE TO BE BACK on 2009, to SEE the Real Madrid 2-6 FC Barcelona on the Bernabeu stadium. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999925694 Xavi Frau
HI XAVI YOU CAN'T SAY "TO SAW"(EVEN THOUGH IS IN THE PAST) YOU MUST SAY "TO SEE"( PER VEURE, INFINITIVE)]]> 2022-01-19 09:09:56 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999925694 I would go to the future because if I WENT to the future I could see future events AND AVOID NEGATIVE THINGS TO HAPPEN. FOR INSTANCE/for example if in the future my mother died because OF a train ACCIDENT I WOULD BE ABLE TO SAVE HER https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999925775 Toni Martorell
1. IF I WENT ( NO IF I GO, BECAUSE IT IS CONDITIONAL TYPE 2, WOULD / PAST SIMPLE)
2. BECAUSE+SUBJE+ VERB( BECAUSE SHE IS HAPPY)
BECAUSE OF + NOUN PHRASE( BECAUSE OF HER HAPPINESS)]]> 2022-01-19 09:09:58 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999925775 If I had a time machine I would rather go to the past because LIKE THIS I COULD DO MANY THINGS. ON THE ONE HAND ,I'd like to solve all the problems I had in the past in a better way. ON THE OTHER HAND, I'd also like to revive the best moments in my life and the funniest ones. HOWEVER,TRAVELLING TO THE FUTURE WOULD MEAN THAT I would live two liVes, AND THAT WOULDN'T be funny. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999927258 Mar Càneves.
TRY TO USE CONNECTORS AND NOT ONLY "AND AND BUT"
REMEMBER TO USE"WOULD" WHEN YOU TALK ABOUT HYPOTETICAL SITUATIONS AND NOT WILL]]> 2022-01-19 09:10:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999927258 I would travel to the past, maybe 8 or 10 years BACKWARD to when I was in primary school because I HAD a lot of good memories from THOSE DAYS loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999927281 Romaisa L.
REMEBMBER TO USE PAST ( BECAUSE I HAVE , YOU SAID)]]> 2022-01-19 09:10:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999927281 If I had a time machine I would go to the future to see how MY LIFE IS GOING and what's about me.?? https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999927688 Miquel Adrover
WORD ORDER PROBLEM:  ·HOW IS GOING MY LIFE" IS USED IN QUESTIONS, IN AFFIRMATIVE SENTENCES YOU SHOULD WRITE "HOW MY LIFE IS GOING"
YOU SHOULD EXPLAIN IN A DIFFERENT WAY WHAT YOU MEAN ABOUT "WHAT'S ABOUT ME???)]]> 2022-01-19 09:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999927688 I would like TO return to the past because I love SPANISH HISTORY. SPECIALLY THE 15TH CENTURY.I WOULD LIKE TO SEE PEOPLE LIVED IN SPAIN IN 1468. elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999928105 Anas
I THINK THAT IS MORE OR LESS WHAT YOU WANTED TO SAY .]]> 2022-01-19 09:11:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999928105 Albert gayaalbert17461 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999930694 I would rather to go to te future beasicly, because I don't want I WOULD BE SCARED TO to go to the past because I don't want meke  AND DO something there that can COULD   change my present. And I would also like  to go to the future due to  THE FACT THAT I WOULD LIKE  to know which type of life I would have in the future. 
1 YOU SHOULD USE THE PAST NOT THE PRESENT BECAUSE IT IS A HYPOTHETICAL SITUATION
2 DUE TO +NOUN PHRASE: DUE TO HIS PROBLEMS
DUE TO THE FACT THAT+SUBJ AND VERB: DUE TO THE FACT THAT SHE HAS PROBLEMS

]]> 2022-01-19 09:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999930694 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999931016 If I could travel to any time i  I would go to a far future .LIKE THIS I COULDbecause i i  want to see how we WOULD evolve  and how will be things   WHICH THINGS WOULD BE WAITING FOR US  at wait to the humanity.

Joan Nadal Gaya]]> 2022-01-19 09:12:59 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999931016 If I had a time machine I would go to the future to know how MY LIFE WOULD BE in 10 or 20 years.HOWEVER IF I COULD GO to the past I would change the present AND THAT COULD HAVE NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON HUMANKIND fullanasergi17455 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999931815 Sergi Fullana Pascual
1. WORD ORDER PROBLEM: HOW MY LIFE WOULD BE ( IN AFFIRMATIVE SENTENCES)/HOW WILL BE MY LIFE ?IN QUESTIONS]]> 2022-01-19 09:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999931815 I would rather go to the past so ICOULD solve some of the biggest questions that humanity has. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999939144 Marina
REMEMBER TO USE PAST..YOU COULD HAVE INCLUDED SOME EXAMPLE]]> 2022-01-19 09:16:58 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999939144 adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999941744 If I could travel in time, I would travel to tha past. I would like to know how were my parends and my grandparends  WERE when they where WERE  young, and it would be also good to be born again and relive?? all the good things from when I was young.

Maria Adrover ]]> 2022-01-19 09:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/1999941744 alcovermaria17429 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2000597253 If I had a time machine, I would travel to the future to see my future self.lIKE THIS I WOULD BE to be able to CHECK what I have done well and what I have done wrong.

Maria Alcover ]]> 2022-01-19 14:50:40 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2000597253 The city that I liked most to visit was Berlin. I WENT there ONCE in 2015 and I liked it very much.IT is very beautiful, there are MANY LANDMARKS/PLACES/ MONUMENTS/.. to visit and the food is really good. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002291664 Miquel Adrover 
VERY +ADJECTIVE : VERY BEAUTIFUL
MANY+NOUN: MANY THINGS
TRY NOT TO USE THE WORD THINGS]]> 2022-01-20 08:09:49 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002291664 Madrid IS THE CITY I LIKE THE MOST. I VISITED SOME YEARS AGO AND THE PLACE THAT I ENJOYED THE MOST WAS THE SANTIAGO BERNABÉU elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002291935 Anas
IT WAS A BIT TOO SIMPLE]]> 2022-01-20 08:09:58 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002291935 The city I have visited that I liked the most has been New York. I had the opportunity to go there when I was seven years old. I loved the vibes of this city and I also think IT is a really beautiful city to live in, not only for visiting. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002292390 Mar Càneves  
VERY GOOD MAR]]> 2022-01-20 08:10:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002292390 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002292526 The best country that I have visited is Swiss  SWITZERLAND . I HAD THE CHANCE OF MAKING I made a tour for  AROUND a lot of cities THERE AND I HAVE TO ADMIT I WAS IMPRESSED WITH ALL OF THEM that were beautiful and all incredible.

Joan Nadal Gaya]]> 2022-01-20 08:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002292526 First of all , every city that I have visited has been beautiful,but London stole my heart....(AND??) https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002292839 Marina
IT IS A BIT UNFINISHED]]> 2022-01-20 08:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002292839 The city I liked the most is Barcelona. ALTHOUGH I have visited a lot of times I NEVER GET TIRED OF IT .and I think that is beautiful and THAT PEOPLE ARE VERY KIND https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002293204 Xavi Frau]]> 2022-01-20 08:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002293204 The best country I have ever been to is Austria. It's my favorite cause it's really beautiful and I was able to visit a lot of places like, Mozart's house and Sissí's palace. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002295888 Jana G.
OK I SHALL GO]]> 2022-01-20 08:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002295888 The city I liked the most is Madrid. I think Madrid is very SPECTACULAR DUE TO ITS skyscraperS I ALSO ENJOY MADRID BECAUSE when I go to Madrid I ALWAYS vist Santiago BernaBeu which is a beatiful stadium https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002296707 Toni martorell
WHO ARE YOU??
BEAUTIFUL ( NO 2LL)]]> 2022-01-20 08:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002296707 Maria Adrover adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002371120 The city I liked most to visit was New Yorck.  YORK.It was the firts  FIRST Time I travelled outside Europe and it was amazing.
OK A BIT SIMPLE]]> 2022-01-20 08:56:57 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002371120 The city I liked the most was Barcelona.I HAVE BEEN THERE ONCE BUT I WILL NEVER FORGET IT because when I went there I could see a football match from the best club in the World which is FCBarcelona VS Real Madrid and this memory will be in my mind for the rest of my life. gayaalbert17461 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002864524 Albert]]> 2022-01-20 13:47:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2002864524 I would like return to the past, because I COULD go to the happy moments and live THEM AGAIN alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2003306983 Marc Alomar Fuster 
PAST TENSES,
UNA ALTRE VEGADA( AGAIN,)]]> 2022-01-20 16:35:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2003306983 The city I have visited that I liked the most has been Dresde. IT Is a small city in Germany. I went in August in 2018 and there WAS the festival of Dresde. IT was so beatiful. alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2003328268 Marc Alomar Fuster 
BEAUTIFUL ) NO BEAUTIFULL]]> 2022-01-20 16:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2003328268 My favorite trip was to Germany, a few years ago. Since it was a trip with my whole family and we went to a lot of different cities in the country, IT HAS BECOME A WONDERFUL MEMORY . https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2007202136 Brunna Da Silva
IF YOU USE "SINCE " IN THIS WAY, YOU SHOULD COMPLETE THE SENTENCE SOMEHOW]]> 2022-01-23 14:32:51 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2007202136 I would definitely travel back to the past, as I would not like to see the future, because I am afraid of it. HOWEVER,I would love to see the past with my own eyes and LIKE THIS I THINK I WOULD BE ABLE TO understand many things. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2007205135 Brunna Da Silva
DON'T CONNECT SENTENCES WITH COMMAS. USE CONNECTORS AND FULL STOPS.]]> 2022-01-23 14:36:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2007205135 My favourite toy when I was a kid, was the Play 4.I USED TO PLAY WITH IT every day with my friends and I REMEMBER ISPENDING LOTS OF TIME ON IT. I was very happy playing FIFA with my friends every day, I miss THOSE moments. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013070318 Miquel Adrover
USE PUNCTUATION]]> 2022-01-26 09:02:00 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013070318 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013073372 When I was a kid my favourite  TOY was a ball and nowadays it’s STILL  the same.
I COULD SAY THAT I HAVE SA SORT OF have almost a collection OF THEM  and I have played with all  ECAH AND EVERY ONE  THROUGH ALL THESE YEARS a lot of time.

Joan Nadal Gaya]]> 2022-01-26 09:03:34 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013073372 When I was child my favourite toy was a red car. MY brother and I had a RACING CAR TRACK and I liked to play with them. Now the car is broken and my mother throw it on the bin.//UNFORTUNATELY THE CAR GOT BROKEN AND MY MOTHER THOW IT IN TO THE BIN EVENTUALLY adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013073651 Maria Adrover 
( I WUOLD CHANGE YOUR LAST SENTENCE "NOW THE CAR..." FOR THE EXAMPLE I HAVE INCLUDED]]> 2022-01-26 09:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013073651 Albert gayaalbert17461 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013075199 My favourite toy was a big fake horse that my grandmother bought me when I was 3 .Every time that I went there  TO MY PARENTS HOUSE I played with it. For me  IT was very special because it was very big and this, impressed me. AND IT WAS QUITE IMPRESSIVE I HAVE TO SAY]]> 2022-01-26 09:04:50 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013075199 When I was a child I ENJOYED PLAYING VIDEOGAMES, ESPECIALLY THE ONES ON FOOTBALL. I USED TO PLAY with my old brother. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013075774 Xavi Frau
DON'T CONNECT 2 SENTENCES WITH A COMMA. USE A FULL STOP  AND A CONNECTOR IF YOU CAN.
A BIT TOO SIMPLE]]> 2022-01-26 09:05:11 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013075774 When I was a kid, my favorite toy was a green FOOTBALL goal and a football ball.I USED TO PLAY TO FOOTBALL WITH MY FATHER IN OUR FLAT .AND I REMEMBER THAT EVEN ONE DAY WE BROKE A WINDOW GLASS.s. It was so nice :)??(I DON'T THINK BREAKING A GLASS WAS NICE) alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013077373 Marc Alomar Fuster 
REVIEW PAST SIMPLE VERB TO BE( I WAS / YOU WERE)]]> 2022-01-26 09:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013077373 My favourite toy when I was a kid were playmobils. I loved playing with them everyday AND I COULD SPEND HOURS INVENTING ADVENTURES. IT WASN'T SO NICE FOR MY MOTHER BECAUSE SHE always had to buy new ones because I loved having lots of different characters. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013077636 Mar Càneves 
I JUST TRIED TO CONNECT A BIT MORE THE SENTENCES WITH THE IDEA THAT IT WAS NICE FOR YOU BUT NOT SO MUCH FOR YOUR MOTHER]]> 2022-01-26 09:06:18 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013077636 loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013077677 My favourite toy when I was a kid it was a big teddy bear that I got at the fair,  .I remember that I used to sleep with it every night.  
romaisa
CONNECT SENTENCES WITH FULL STOP( PUNTS) AND NO WITH COMMAS]]> 2022-01-26 09:06:20 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013077677 When I was kid my favorite toy was a ps4 and my favorite game WAS Rocket league. elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013077957 Anas
TOO SHORT Anas. pay attention to tenses..you wrote IS instead of WAS]]> 2022-01-26 09:06:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013077957 My favourite toy when I was a kid was a beatifull car that my mother bought for me. The car was SO BIG THAT I b I was able to EVEN drive IT. Nowadays I STILL have it in my bedroom because I'm still in love whith that car https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013078875 Toni Martorell ]]> 2022-01-26 09:07:07 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013078875 When I was a child I used to play with my pinipons a lot.I would build their house and imagine stories with them https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013079203 Marina Arcas Bosch]]> 2022-01-26 09:07:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013079203 My favourite toy used to be A GIANT SOFT DOG. MY UNCLE GAVEIT TO ME WHEN I WAS 3 ANDI USED TO LOVE CUDDLING. . https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013079370 Jana Galmés Capó
YOU CUDDLE SOMETHING(NO WITH)
I WOULD CHANGE THE ORDER THE SENTENCES]]> 2022-01-26 09:07:27 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013079370 My favorite toy was a teddy bear, WHOSE NAME WAS WALTER. IT WAS A DOPHIN AND USED TO LOVE SLEEPING with IT and I spent lots of good moments with IT miquelcecilia18528 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013079569 Cecília Miquel Mascaró
GOOD YOU USED "WHOSE" SENTENCE, BUT I CHANGED THE SENTENCES POSITIONS.
YOUR TEDDY IS "IT"]]> 2022-01-26 09:07:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013079569 My favourite toy when I was a kid was a car that my father bought me. IT was very big and COULD BE CHARGED . I remember GOING with my father and my dog for a walk.NOWADAYS, I still have the car. fullanasergi17455 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013080113 Sergi Fullana Pascual
DON'T CONNECT SENTENCES WITH COMMAS, USE " FULL STOPS"
REMEMBER GOING (NOT TO  GO ) BECAUSE YOU TALK ABOUT MEMORIES
"NOWADAYS"IS A SINGLE WORD,IT IS NOT 3 WORDS]]> 2022-01-26 09:07:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013080113 alcovermaria17429 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013080817 My favorite toy when I was a kid  was a doll. It was very big and my older brothers were afraid of him. IT (YOU SHOULD EXPLAIN WHY YOUR BROTHERS WERE AFRAID OF IT)

Maria Alcover 
YOUR TOY IS AN OBJECTSO YOU HAVE TO USE "IT" PRONOUN]]> 2022-01-26 09:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013080817 The city that I have visited that I liked the most is Manacor, because ALTHOUGH I have BEEN to MANY DIFFERENT CITIES, THERE IS NO CITY THAT I LIKE THE MOST THAN MY CITY.a lot of citys but the others didn't like me.( THIS MEANS CITIES HATE YOU??) fullanasergi17455 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013083474 Sergi Fullana Pascual]]> 2022-01-26 09:10:07 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2013083474 My obligation is to make my bed everyday. HOWEVER, I HAVE TO DO MORE CHORES FROM TIME TO TIME.Sometimes my pareNts make me wash the dishes and also mop the floor. Finally, sometimes I have to dust the house,WHICH is the most boring HOUSE CHORE TO DO canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015327498 Mar Càneves. ]]> 2022-01-27 08:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015327498 I have to LOAD THE dishwasher every day after every dinner. (...) https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015327740 Xavi Frau
A BIT TOO SHORT]]> 2022-01-27 08:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015327740 I haVe TO DO SOME HOUSE CHORES.,FIRST OF A I HAVE to take care of my Guinea pig,clean ITS cage and feed her. I also haVe to clean my room and sometimes take the dishes out of the dishwasher. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015327863 Fátima el Mekkioui]]> 2022-01-27 08:09:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015327863 The only TWO house choreS that I do is SETTING the table and MAKING my bed. miquelcecilia18528 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015329015 Cecília Miquel Mascaró
a bit short, YOU COULD HAVE EXPLAIN IF YOU FEEL LIKE NOT TO DO MUCH MORE OR IFYOU WOULD LIKE TO DO MORE]]> 2022-01-27 08:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015329015 loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015329048 I only have to clean my room at least 3 times a week and sometimes I have to do the laundry as well. 
romaisa 
GOOD USE OF "AS WELL"]]> 2022-01-27 08:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015329048 I don't have any HOUSE chOreS TO DO. MY PARENTS THINK THAT MY ROOM IS MINE AND THAT I CAN DECIDE HOW TIDY I KEEP IT . HOWEVER, WHAT I DO IT IS TO TIDY MY ROOM ONCE A MONTH, SPECIALLY ON SATURDAYS.- alcovermaria17429 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015329362 Maria Alcover 
I HAVE REORGANIZED WHAT YOU WROTE .IF YOU WRIE "THEY" BEFORE YOU HAVE TO SAY WHO YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT (THAT'S IS WHY I WROTE "MY PARENTS)]]> 2022-01-27 08:10:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015329362 Albert gayaalbert17461 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015329453  In my house I have to do some  HOUSE hoose chores like tidyING up my cleaned chlothes, setTING the table in every dinner, and also putTING the all the tishes iINTO the dishwasher. 
A BIT TOO SIMPLE.USE CONNECTORS. PAY ATTENTION TO SPELLING]]> 2022-01-27 08:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015329453 The chores I have to do are OF DIFFERENT SORT. FOR INSTANCE I HAVE TO going to buy food , set TING and PUTTING ASIDE the table. SOMETIMES I EVEN have to mop the floor OR tiding up my bed room. fullanasergi17455 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015330310 Sergi Fullana Pascual 
"SOMETIMES "IS  ONE WORD
TRY TO USE CONNECTORS ]]> 2022-01-27 08:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015330310 In my house I have to set up the table. I ALSO DO THE BEDS AND CLEAN THE BEDROOMS.SOMETIMES I EVEN COOK FOR MY MOTHER , SPECIALLY ON ...WHEN SHE IS TOO BUSY.FINALLY I put the dishwasher https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015330899 Toni Martorell Oroz
BEDROOM  AND NOT "BETHROOM"
I DON'T KNOW IF YOU COOK FOR YOUR MUM EVERYDAY, IF IT IS NOT SO, YOU COULD EXPLAIN WHEN .]]> 2022-01-27 08:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015330899 My obligations in my house are THE FOLLOWING. ON THE ONE HAND I set the table, I ALSO LOAD, the washing machine. I makE MY bed AS WELL, I ALSO TIDY UP my bedroom every day and put the drying machine. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015331154 Miquel Adrover]]> 2022-01-27 08:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015331154 I have to make my bed every day at 7:00 before GOING TO school. elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015331283 Anas
A BIT MORE PLEASE

]]> 2022-01-27 08:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015331283 Every day I have to do my bed, tidy up my bedroom and set the table. IF I don't do FINISH MY CHORES I can't / AM NOT ALLOWED TO play videogames. alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015331292 Marc Alomar Fuster 
A BIT SIMPLE. YOU SHOULD USE A CONDITIONAL AND NOT A "WHEN " SENTENCE]]> 2022-01-27 08:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015331292 adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015331426 At home, every day I have to set the table to have lunch and diner. I also have to vacume clean the fire place every day, and make my bed.
Maria Adrover
OK ]]> 2022-01-27 08:11:44 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015331426 The house chores that I do are makING my bed, setTING te table once every 3 days and keep my room tidy. miquelcecilia18528 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015332869 Jana G]]> 2022-01-27 08:12:36 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015332869 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015334453 I have to clean my room every week. I set up the table every day before the lunch and the dinner…(???)

Joan Nadal
DON'T CONNECT  2 SENTENCES WITH A  COMA.USE FULL STOPS
IT LOOKS UNFINISHED

]]> 2022-01-27 08:13:29 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2015334453 My favorite toy as a child was a pink elephant teddy called Gary. I named him like that because I loved SpongeBob/ I NAMED HIM AFTER SPONGE BOB. Gary was a very special toy for me because my grandmother gave IT to me on my 3rd birthday. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2024178588 Brunna Da Silva

]]> 2022-02-01 19:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2024178588 At home, whenever I'm not studying I have to help my parents with whatever they ask for.MOREOVER, I also have fixed tasks, such as tidying my room, setting the table, taking the dishes out of the dishwasher AND SO ON. HOWEVER, I have an advantage, which is that I have 3 brothers, so the housework is well distributed. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2024184053 Brunna Da Silva
REMEMBER TO USE CONNECTORS AND FULL STOPS INSTEAD OF COMMAS TO CONNECT SENTENCES


]]> 2022-02-01 19:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2024184053 My biggest fear are animals such as dogs and pigeons. Since I was a kid/AS FAR AS I CAN REMEMBER I've been frightened OF THEM . So if I'm alone and I see one OF THEM I will change FOR SURE to the other side of the street and I WILL TRY TO avoid ANY EYE CONTACT WITH them as much as possible. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025007359 Jana G.
MY SUGGESTIONS ARE JUST TO IMPROVE VOCABULARY]]> 2022-02-02 09:39:08 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025007359 I'm irrationally scared of ALL TYPES OF INSECTS insects, WhenEVER I see an insect I FREEZE?/ AND I can't just do anything . I'm not able to walk or act normally because I get too scared. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025016954 Mar Càneves. ]]> 2022-02-02 09:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025016954 I'm very scared of spiders or ANY KIND OF insects . whenEVER I see one I just try to avoid it. loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025017451 Romaisa 
GOOD VOCABULARY

]]> 2022-02-02 09:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025017451 Im very scared of insects, SPECIALLY I AM SCARED OF FLYING INSECTS .HOWEVER, iI'm scared of the ocean because IT IS deep and WHENEVER I SWIM I GET ANXIOUS IMAGINING ALL THE creatures THAT ARE SWIMMING UNDER ME https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025026603 Fátima el Mekkioui 
SAY" FLYING INSECTS" INSTEAD OF " INSECTS THAT CAN FLY"]]> 2022-02-02 09:51:04 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025026603 I'm irrationally scared OF caterillarS. WhenEVER I see this animal I run AWAY AS FAST AS I CAN alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025630978 Marc Alomar Fuster 
YOU ARE SCARED "OF" NO (WITH)]]> 2022-02-02 15:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025630978 Albert https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025835853 I am  GET very sacred  SCARED when I go to my HOUSE BASEMENT room because IT  is very very dark .I HAVE BEEN ALL MY LIFE SCARED OF IT .since I was 3 made me be scared when I go there
A BIT BASICALLY EXPLAINED]]> 2022-02-02 17:00:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025835853 One of my most irrational fears IS NOT TO KNOW what there is under my feet when I’m swimming in the sea.I AM SPECIALLY SCARED OF algaes or jellyfish. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025853641 Maria Adrover ]]> 2022-02-02 17:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2025853641 I like my room but I don’t love it. I’m trying to change some tings like the pink curtains I have HAD since I was eight years old. I would like to fix a lamp and change the mirror TOO. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2026999532 Maria Adrover Riera
GOOD JOB]]> 2022-02-03 08:10:14 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2026999532 Yes I do, I love my room because it is the place where I sleep, I do my homework,AND I rest .MOREOVER I also have a big bed and a mirror THAT ARE VERY COOL. So that is why I like it. HOWEVER, if I could change something of my room I would make it SLIGHTLY bigger. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027000068 Mar Càneves. 
I JUST INCLUDE SOME VOCABULARY SUGGESTIONS. GOOD JOB]]> 2022-02-03 08:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027000068 I really like my room. I recently got a new mirror, and new decoration AND I LOVE IT EVEN MORE. I actually would add a couple posters. And something I love about my room is that I have enough ROOM to add an EXTRA bed for when my friends COME FOR A sleepover. loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027000157 romaisa
GOOD CONTENT AND WELL WRITTEN
"ROOM" MEANS ALSO " ESPAI" ]]> 2022-02-03 08:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027000157 I like my room because IT is very big and have all the necesary things I need. IF i could change somethingI WOULD change the window because IT is in a very UNSUITABLE position and the people of the street can see me when IT IS open. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027003106 Sergi Fullana
"I" GOES ALWAYS IN CAPITAL LETTERS
CONNECT SENTENCES WITH FULL STOPS AND NOT WITH COMMAS
REVISE CONDITIONAL TYPE 2
GOOD CONTENT

]]> 2022-02-03 08:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027003106 In general I love my bedroom but I want to put more posters and some decoration . When I haVE PUT that my bedroom will be perfect https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027004396 Toni Martorell
PAST OF PUT-PUT-PUT ( PUTED DOESN'T EXIST)
A BIT SIMPLE]]> 2022-02-03 08:13:40 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027004396 I like my room because IT is big and there is a lot of ROOM. But if I could change something it would be the wardrobe, because I don, t like ITS color. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027004746 Cecília Miquel Mascaró 
SENTENCES NEED SUBJECT ( I LIKE MY ROOM BECAUSE it ...)
THE WORD "ROOM " MEANS " ESPAI"]]> 2022-02-03 08:13:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027004746 Albert gayaalbert17461 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027006872 I think that my room is okay because the bed is comfortable and  BEDS ARE is the  MOST IMPORTANT l thing that  IN ANY ROOM has to be perfect in a bed room. If I had to change something I would put a new TV  SET with the play.
YOUR SENTENCE WAS GRAMMATICALLY OK , BUT IT DIDN'T SOUND TOO ENGLISH ]]> 2022-02-03 08:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027006872 I like my room very much . ESPECIALLY SINCE I REDECORATED LAST YEAR. SO , I would not change anything . alcovermaria17429 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027006905 Maria Alcover 
THERE WAS APROBLEM WITH THE ORDER OF THE SENTENCES .IT SOUNDS MORE LOGICAL LIKE THIS

]]> 2022-02-03 08:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027006905 I loved to play with my pinipons.I loved to collect them! https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007006 Marina]]> 2022-02-03 08:15:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007006 I'm irrationaly scared of spiders.I hate all spiders and whenEVER I see ONE I jump and run AWAY https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007121 Toni Martorell
CONNECT SENTENCES WITH FULL STOPS AND NOT WITH COMMAS]]> 2022-02-03 08:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007121 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007150 I like a lot of things of my room but if I COULDI would put a tv SET  to see  MY FAVOURITE series, movies… but apart of  FROM that it have  HAS A  good size, AND THE he bed its  IS okey and I don’t have any other problem.
Joan Nadal
BECAREFUL WITH HAVE /HAS]]> 2022-02-03 08:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007150 My bedroom is very good.I like it A LOT, but WOULD like to have a PC in my bedroom, SO I could play all the time with the PC .BUT I AM VERY HAPPY WITH EVERYTHING ELSE. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007477 Miquel Adrover
TOO MUCH ( MASSA..IF YOU LIKE YOUR ROOM TOO MUCH MEANS THAT YOU ARE A BIT OBSESSED WITH IT=]]> 2022-02-03 08:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007477 I like my room, but if I could change it I would put some decoration in it, for example plants, crystals?? AND SO ON dabrunnaeduarda17822 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007739 Brunna da silva
DON'T PUT ETC..WRITE ..AND SO ON...]]> 2022-02-03 08:15:35 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007739 In general I like my room because there I have MY computer and I can play AND Relax. HOWEVER , WHAT I DON'T LIKE IS sharING MY room with my brother but in general I HOPE SOON HE WILL GET HIS OWN ROOM. alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007837 Marc Alomar Fuster.]]> 2022-02-03 08:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027007837 I like my room A LOT but I think a mirror is missing, because when I’m GETTING dressED up I would like to BE ABLET TO look at my outfit,.HOWEVER I ALWAYS HAVE TO to go to the bathroom to see myself. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027009231 Xavi Frau
GOOD VOCABULARY]]> 2022-02-03 08:16:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027009231 I love my room .I think it's very cute and cozy. Also I think it kind of reflects my personality because I have decorateD it MYSELF https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027012205 Jana ]]> 2022-02-03 08:18:41 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027012205 I am scared of complete silence when I go to sleep.It makes me uncomfortable so I need to put some podcasts on so I can sleep peacefully https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027013796 Marina
OK BUT I AM NOT SURE IF IT IS REALLY HEALTHY]]> 2022-02-03 08:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027013796 I wouldn’t change anything,I think it’s perfect THE WAY IT IS /that way. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027014691 Marina]]> 2022-02-03 08:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2027014691 I am very afraid of jellyfish, and the idea that one day they might sting me terrifies me, that's why I always wear goggles in the water and if there are too many I don't go in https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2028347291 Brunna Da Silva]]> 2022-02-03 20:29:55 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2028347291 In my opinion, the BEST PART OF being a teenager is that you start to have more control over yourself and your life. IN SHORT, you start to FEEL freer TO CHOOSE.HOWEVER, HAVING MORE FREEDOM IMPLIES HAVING MORE PRESSURE , FEAR AND INSECURITY what in my opinion is the worst. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037444423
Brunna Da Silva
HI GOOD IDEAS. . SENTENCE WAS TOO LONG AND CONNECTED WITH COMMAS.USE FULL STOPS AND CONNECTORS TO CONNECT SENTENCES]]> 2022-02-09 09:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037444423 The worst things of being a teenager IS that YOU ARE NOT FREE TO CHOOSE . ONE THE ONE HAND, YOU have to do all the things that your parentS say and if you don't do it they GET angry with you.MOREOVER, you have to go to school , do all your homework AND I don't like. HOWEVER, THERE ARE ALSO POSITIVE THINGS ABOUT BEING A TEENAGER. The best thing of being a teenager IS THAT YOU HAVE LOTS OF TIME TO SPEND ON WHATEVER YOU LIKE. FOR INSTANCE, if you want to play with the computer, you can do it, if you want to hang out with friends you can do IT ,and you have a lot of fun when you are teenager because the hormones are REVOLTED and you don't WORRY TOO MUCH ABOUT ANYTHING a teenager. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037444892 Miquel Adrover
GOOD YOU HAVE IDEAS TO WRITE ABOUT. YOU SHOULD USE FULL STOPS AND CONNECTORS. CONNECTORS ALSO HELP YOU TO SEPARATE THE POSITIVE IDEAS FROM THE NEGATIVE ONES.]]> 2022-02-09 09:05:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037444892 The worsT thing ABOUT BEING A TENN is that we have to go to school and that WE have obligations. ON THE OTHER SIDE, THE BEST THING IS THAT WE that we can meet OUR friends. miquelcecilia18528 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037445187 Cecília Miquel Mascaró
WORSE( COMPARATIVE: PITJOR) THE WORST( SUPERLATIVE: EL PITJOR, ALLÒ PITJOR)
PRONOUN COORDINATION:; IF YOU START YOUR COMPOSITION TALKING ABOUT "WE" THEN YOU CAN'T CHANGE TO "I"
IF YOU SAY" WE CAN MEET MY FRIENDS "IT MEANS WE ALL MEET ONLY " YOUR  "FRIENDS
CONTENT WAS A BIT SHORT AND BASIC]]> 2022-02-09 09:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037445187 BEING A TEENAGER IS THE TIME WHEN YOU CAN ENJOY YOUR LIFE THE MOST BECAUSE YOU ARE YOUNG .The best PART of being a teenager is that you don't have a lot of OBLIGATIONS and you are able to practise a sport you like because you are young and active. HOWEVER, The worst of being a teenager is that sometimes you feel bad ??(BE MORE SPECIFIC) YOU FEEL LOW??or with TOO MUCH pressure without any reasons. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037447183 Mar Càneves. 
I REARRANGED YOUR SENTENCES .YOUR THIRD IDEAS I PUT IT AS A THESIS STATEMENT OF THE WHOLE PARAGRAPH.
USE CONNECTORS TO CONTRAST IDEAS]]> 2022-02-09 09:07:14 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037447183 Albert gayaalbert17461 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037447232 The Best thing of being a teenager is that I don't have a lot of responsibilities compared to my parents and this make me feel happy. NEVERTHELESS, but there are some other things that I don't like about being a teenager SO MUCH like going to school because there are somE stressful moments that I hate like when we have final exams. ]]> 2022-02-09 09:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037447232 The worst thing OF BEING a teenager is when I am scolded by my parents, because they think that I don't do anything AT HOME. HOWEVER, The best thing is SPENDING a lot of time with friends. alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037447840 Marc Alomar Fuster ]]> 2022-02-09 09:07:40 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037447840 I think the worst thing about being a teenager is HAVING to study AND going every day to school. HOWEVER, there is a BRIGHT SIDE ON BEING A TEENAGER that is that you HAVE LOTS OF FREE TIME TO HANG OUT WITH your friends. HOWEVER, THE ABOVE ALL THE the best thing OF BEING A TEENAGER is hangING out to PARTIES with your friends. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037448102 Xavi Frau]]> 2022-02-09 09:07:51 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037448102 The worst thing of being a teenager is that you are responsible for everything and your parents always blame you ( FOR WHAT?). HOWEVER, the good thing is that you can go out more elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449024 Anas
USE CONNECTORS]]> 2022-02-09 09:08:24 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449024 For me the worst part of the teenagers live are humor chAnges. Sometimes I’m very happy and SUDDENLY I can change completly. HOWEVER , THERE IS A BRIGHT SIDE OF BEING A TEEN, AND THAT IS friends and OBVIOUSLY spendING time with them. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449381 Maria Adrover
USE FULL STOPS TO CONNECT SENTENCES AND NOT COMMAS
USE CONNECTORS TO SHOW CONTRAST WHEN YOU INTRODUCE AN OPPOSITE IDEA]]> 2022-02-09 09:08:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449381 The worst thing about being a teenager is that sometimes you don't know what's wrong with you.I MEAN THAT IS HARD EVEN FOR OURSELVES TO UNDERSTAND WHAT IS GOING ON INSIDE OUR HEARTS AND BRAINS.It is stressful. HOWEVER, THERE IS A POSITIVE SIDE OF BEEN A TEEN, AND THIS IS NOT HAVING many obligations similar to those of the GROWN-UPS. alcovermaria17429 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449406 Maria Alcover Gomila 
OLD PEOPLE MEANS PEOPLE IN THEIR 60 OR 70s]]> 2022-02-09 09:08:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449406 The wost thing of being a teenAger is that you have to study a lot and you ALWAYS have LOTS OF homework TO DO. One in a blue moon there's no homework (GOOD EXPRESSION). HOWEVER, The best thing ABOUT BEEN A TEEN is that a WE don't have a lot of obligations. When you finsh studying you ARE able to HANG OUT with your friend https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449613 Toni Martorell]]> 2022-02-09 09:08:47 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449613 The worst thing about being a teenager is that we have to go to school and we cannot quit. ON THE OTHER SIDE, the best thing is that we can SPEND TIME with our friends almost every day. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449918 JANA ]]> 2022-02-09 09:08:58 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037449918 THERE ARE MANY POSITIVE THINGS ABOUT BEEN A TEEN.ON THE ONE HAND YOU can spend time with your friends. You ALSO start to be more mature and independent AND YOU HAVE MORE FREEDM. HOWEVER, the worst thing ABOUT BEEN A TEEN is that you have to choose WHAT YOU want to do for the rest of your life WHEN YOU ARE only 16.APART FROM THAT OUR SELF-STEEM IS A BIT FRAGILE BECAUSE WE, ARE Constantly comparing to our friends. elfatima17448 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037451533 Fatima el mekkioui
USE FULL STOPS(PUNTS) AND NOT COMMAS TO CONNECT SENTENCES.
YOUR IDEAS LOOK BETTER WITH CONNECTORS]]> 2022-02-09 09:10:00 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037451533 The best thing of being a teenager is that you don't have a lot of obligations.FOR INSTANCE, you only have to go to school and study to PASS YOUR COURSE.OBVIOUSLY YOU ALSO HAVE , then you have the obligations that you have in your home, but FROM MY POINT OF VIEW THOSE ARE NOT OBLIGATIONS PER SE..HOWEVER, the worst thing is that your body changeS very often(EXPLAIN WHY IT IS SO TERRIBLE) DEVELOPE IDEA fullanasergi17455 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037451786 Sergi Fullana Pascual.]]> 2022-02-09 09:10:10 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037451786 joan https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037453585 The worst thing about being a teenager is that you have a lot of estress and almost all OF IT COMES FROM is from the school, and the best is that you can SPEND A LOT OF TIME WITH YOUR FRIENDS your friends a lot of time.

]]> 2022-02-09 09:11:18 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2037453585 I would LIKE to go to Maldivas because is my dream and my favorite islands after Mallorca of course. elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052684013 Anas
USE CONNECTORS AND EXPLAIN A BIT MORE]]> 2022-02-17 08:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052684013 Before I die I would like to parachute, because I always watch videos ABOUT IT and it looks super cool and exciting. I would DEFINITELY like to go through this experience at least once in my life. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052684151 Brunna Da Silva 
4t A
PAY ATTENTION TO PUNCTUATION. SHORTER SENTENCES. UES FULL STOPS AND CONNECTORS( I think I already said that before)]]> 2022-02-17 08:09:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052684151 (WRITE A SHORT INTRODUCTION EXPLAINING PLAYING VIDEO GAMES IS SO IMPORTATN FOR YOU)Before I die, I would like to get a TOTY(EXPLAIN WHAT IS THAT) on Fifa, or a good Icon, if it’s possible. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052687526 Xavi Frau
A BIT TOO BASIC ]]> 2022-02-17 08:11:12 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052687526 (I would write things that) I would like to do before I die,like meeting Cristiano Ronaldo and marrying him so I COULD beCOME a millionaire. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052687551 Marina
THE ( SENTENCE) SOUNDS TOO INFORMAL. ]]> 2022-02-17 08:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052687551 I would like to be famous before die. I would like to travel to New York with my girlfriend. I would like to have a very good house, very big, with my girlfriend. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052688830 Miquel AdroverÇ
USE CONNECTORS...IT JUST SOUNDS LIKE A LIST OF SENTENCES]]> 2022-02-17 08:11:58 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052688830 Before dying I would like to travel AROUND THE WORLD, AND live for a couple years in New York. MOREOVER I WOULD do bungee jumping, or do parachute because it seems fun loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052689199 Romaisa
PUCNTUATION. USE FULL STOPS(PUNTS) ]]> 2022-02-17 08:12:12 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052689199 In my bucket list I would like to go to the United States because I HAVE ALWAYS WATCHED IT ON MOVIES and its WOULD BE a dream COME TRUE for me. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052690110 Joan Nadal
A BIT TOO SIMPLE AND NOT ELABORATED

]]> 2022-02-17 08:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052690110 I would like to do bungee jumping because I love the sports WITH WHICH THEM YOU GET A RUSH OF AdrenalinE. Then, I would like to travel to Alaska and fish in the frozen late?? there because it's my favorite hobBY alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052690710 Marc Alomar Fuster ]]> 2022-02-17 08:13:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052690710 In my bucket list I wolud write a few of things. First I woULD like to do parachute. I don't know why , but I thinK that I would like to do IT. Secondly I would GET a degree. Finally I would travel arround the world. I love travelling and LEARNING ABOUT new cultures https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052690768 Toni Martorell Oroz
VERY GOOD THAT YOU ORGANIZED YOUR IDEAS IN A PARAGRAPH AND YOU USED CONNECTORS]]> 2022-02-17 08:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052690768 Albert gayaalbert17461 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052691058 If i had to write a bucket list I would write visiting Wembley stadium because from my point of view IT  is the Best stadium in the world. Furthermore ,I would like to visit USA,( YOU COULD EXPLAIN A BIT HERE WHY ) and my final wish would be to talk with Messi (WHY?). 
VERY GOOD THAT YOU USED A CONDITIONAL AND NEW CONNECTORS. ]]> 2022-02-17 08:13:27 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052691058 Before die I would like to live some amazing experiences like parachutING. HOWEVER I would ALSO like to travel around the world and visite places like Australia OR some tropical islands .I WOULD ALSO LIKE TO make a tour around Europe and LEARN ABOUT new cultures. HOWEVER, I KNOW I WOULDN'T BE ABLE TO DO ALL THIS IF I DIDN'T WIN THE LOTTERY SO I WOULD ALSO WRITE DOWN ON MY BUCKET LIST TO WIN THE LOTTO. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052691314 Maria Adrover
THE LAST LINE SHOULD BE CONNECTED TO THE PREVIOUS IDEAS ]]> 2022-02-17 08:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052691314 FIRST OF ALL, I would like to ride on a roller coaster, travel to a random place with my friends without knowing where WE are going TO. Also, I Would like to have a summer job with my friends and have a degree in something I'm really passionate about. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052691450 Fatima El Mekkiouoi]]> 2022-02-17 08:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052691450 Before I die, I would like TO travel arround the world. I would like to swim with sharks. FINALLY I would like to do bungee jumping. alcovermaria17429 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052692376 Maria Alcover Gomila 
USE CONNECTORS PLEASE]]> 2022-02-17 08:14:19 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052692376 I would write lots of exciting experiences ON MY BUCET LIST. I would like to do whatever at the moment I can't do. For example I would like to visit wonderful places and I would also like to do risky ACTIVITIES like/SUCH AS bungee jumping and parachute. THEY look exciting. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052692469 Mar Càneves ]]> 2022-02-17 08:14:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052692469 Before I die, I would like to travel arround the world also I would like to go in a submarine. (EXPLAIN WHY?) miquelcecilia18528 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052693469 Cecília Miquel Mascaró]]> 2022-02-17 08:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052693469 I would like to do bungee jumping .I would also love to publish at least one book. I would love to live abroad. MOREOVER,I would also love to travel all over the world. FINALLY.,I would be the happiest person on earth if I could take part in a movie and live in a different country/city every two years. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052693944 Jana
WHERE YOU WROTE "HOWEVER"( CONTRAST CONNECTOR) YOU SHOUD USE AN "ADDITION CONNECTOR" BECAUSE LIVING ABROAD AND TRAVELLING ABROAD ARE NOT OPPPOSITES

]]> 2022-02-17 08:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052693944 In my bucket list I would write to do parachuting and bungee jumping, because GET A RUSH OF adrenalinE. I would like to visit all the world, (specialy USA) and LEARN ABOUT NEW cultureS. fullanasergi17455 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052696043 Sergi Fullana pascual
DON'T CONNECT SENTENCES WITH COMMAS]]> 2022-02-17 08:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2052696043 This picture WAS made/TAKEN in Cala Morlanda.IN THE PICTURE YOU CAN SEE MYSELF with my girlfriend.IN THE FOREGROUND YOU CAN SEE US kissing and IN THE BACKGROUND YOU can see the rocks behind us. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220213 Miquel Adrover ]]> 2022-02-23 09:05:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220213 In this photo we can see a dish of yakisoba, one of my favorite DISHES/MEALS/FOODS. We can see that it looks like a very delicious dish( YOU COULD DESCRIBE A BIT THE INGREDIENTS) and that makes anyone who is a fan of Japanese food happy. In the same picture, we can see my mum laughing at how happy I was to eat that plate. ALL IN ALL It was a really fun day. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220482 Brunna Da Silva]]> 2022-02-23 09:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220482 THIS PHOTO WAS TAKEN IN NEW YEAR'S EVE. In this picture we can see Toni/MYSELF? pushing MY FRIEND Lluis motor bike. On the background we can see 3 COKE CANS and 1 ORANGE JUICE CAN. Also there is a cake.(YOUCOULD EXPLAIN WHY THERE IS A CAKE ON THE ROAD)? https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220796 Toni Martorell Oroz]]> 2022-02-23 09:06:04 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220796 Albert https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220919 My favourite picture is about me staying on a big rock. OIn the backgrounD you can see a very beautiful/AWESOME/ENCHANTED landscape with the sea and a beautiful7MEMORABLE/ORANGE-PINKISH sunset. Otherwise, on the forEground you can see a very sexy/GORGEOUS/STILISH  boy whose name is Albert.
REMEMBER TO USE INTERESTING ADJECTIVES( NO BEAUTIFUL TWICE)]]> 2022-02-23 09:06:09 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220919 IN THIS PHOTO YOU CAN SEE my dog, with a sunset on the background. ThAT day we hUng out all the family with my dogs. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220945 Xavi Frau
THAT( AQUELL) THOSE(AQUELLS) FOR PAST STORIES
THIS( AQUEST) THESE( AQUESTOS) FOR PRESENT]]> 2022-02-23 09:06:10 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062220945 My favourite picture on my phone is a picture of a sunset at a beach that I always go in summer. It looks very beautiful/IT IS A VERY REMARKABLE PICTURE because it looks a bit purple and pinkish. I also remember I had a lot of fun that day. loukiliromaisae17473 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062221153 Romaisa 
INSTEAD OF "BEAUTIFUL" I SUGGEST YOU SOMETHING MORE "INTERESTING"]]> 2022-02-23 09:06:20 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062221153 MY FAVOURITE PICTURE ON MY PHONE IS THE ONE OF me and my best friend in Tenerife last summer. We are on the beach ,the sand is black and we are very happy. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062221301 Marina
WRITE A BIT OF INTRODUCTION.]]> 2022-02-23 09:06:25 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062221301 my favorite picture ON MY PHONE it’s me running with my brother in the morning on the vía verde, A RUNNING PATH NEAR MY TOWN WHERE PEOPLE CAN GO TO RUN OR RAMBLE. elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062222068 Anas
(IF YOU WRITE SOMETHING IN CATALAN ,LIKE VIA VERDA, YOU HAVE TO EXPLAIN WHAT IT IS)]]> 2022-02-23 09:07:00 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062222068 I DON'T think I have a favourite picture but there is one wHich I like a lot. It’s a picture of my pet Lola. It’s very difficult to take a photo of it SO THAT IS WHY THIS PICTURE IS SO SPECIAL . We were sitting on the pebbles and when sHe CALMED DOWN I took advantage OF IT AND I COULD TAKE HER THIS CUTE PICTURE. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062222187 Maria Adrover
GOOD THAT YOU EXPLAIN A BIT THE STORY BEHIND THE PICTURE
DON'T CONNECT SENTENCES WITH COMMAS .]]> 2022-02-23 09:07:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062222187 I took this picture in a trip to Menorca. BehinD me there is a sunset. I’m wearing a white top and I’m at the beach. miquelcecilia18528 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062222879 Cecília Miquel Mascaró
A BIT BASIC .TRY TO USE CONNECTORS]]> 2022-02-23 09:07:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062222879 My favorite picture is a very funny picture that my best friend senT me. In the picture she is half asleep because she HAS just WOKEN up a few minutes ago. She is wearing a brown t-shirt and a blue blanket COVERS her. She send me that picture to tell me that she COULDN'T anwser my call because she was asleep. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062225126 Fatima el mekkioui
FUNNY PICTURE AND FUNNY STORY]]> 2022-02-23 09:09:17 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062225126 My favorite picture from my phone is a mirror photo. When I did this photography I came from the gym. I felt VERY tired and I took this photo with MY HAIR WET . I love this photo because I THINK I LOOK very COOL/ GORGEOUS/ STYLISH/ FIT alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062226408 Marc Alomar Fuster 
TRY NOT TO USE THE WORD " BEAUTIFUL" ]]> 2022-02-23 09:10:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062226408 Sergi fullanasergi17455 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062226861 My favourite picture of my phone is a picture wHere we can see Toni wearing a red jumper and a green mask.He is dishevelled and his face LOOKS strange.(YOU SHOULD EXPLAIN WHY HE LOOKS DISHEVELLED),BY THE WAY I HAVE LEARNT A NEW WORD .THANKS SERGI]]> 2022-02-23 09:10:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062226861 My favorite picture from my phone is a pick that I took a few months next to the theatre. THE THINK THAT I LIKE THE MOST ABOUT THIS PICTURE IS THE SKYI It's really beautiful and the clouds look like pink coton candy. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062228678 Jana]]> 2022-02-23 09:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2062228678 In this picture we can see a tennis court where I train every day. Behind the court there is the sunset that it is what I like the most. THIS PICTURE MEANS SO MUCH FOR ME BECAUSE IN IT YOU CAN SEE MY MOST PRECIOUS THINGS IN LIFE. TENNIS AND THE SKY canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2069291421 Mar Càneves ]]> 2022-02-28 11:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2069291421 I don't have a best friend so I can't speak about how I met him/her. But I think I have many good friendS which I appreciate so much and WHICH I woULDn't change for anything. Having a best friend won't be a bad option. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2075409403 Mar Càneves. ]]> 2022-03-03 09:00:36 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2075409403 If I have to say who i may best friend IS , I woUldN'T BE ABLE TO ANSWER. There arE 3 people who I CONSIDER MY “best friends” but I can’t chose one of them. The first ONE I MET her when we were four years old. I GOT CHANGED TO A DIFFERENT SCHOOL and she was the first one who came to talk to me. The second one,I METher the same year in school too. And I CAME ACROSS WITH MY THIRD BEST FRIEND one WHEN I WAS twelve years old.ALTHOUGH AT THE VERY FIRST, we weren’t friends,over time we got TO know TO each other AND WE BECAME FOND OF EACH OTHER. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2076103815
Maria Adrover 
MEET ( I MET HER LAST YEAR)
KNOW.(I HAVE KNOWN MY BEST FRIEND FOR 3 YEARS)]]> 2022-03-03 15:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2076103815 My best friend is Jaume. I met HIM in 1st of ESO and we are still very close friends. He makes me LAUGH and make me feel good. For all THESE reasons he's my best friend. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077548077 Toni Martorell
 OBJECT PRONOUNS AFTER VERBS ( HIM AND NOT HE)
THIS( ONE) THESE( PLURAL)]]> 2022-03-04 08:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077548077 I MEt mY best friend in first of eso .  I like him because HE 's the opposite TO me ( SOME EXPLANATIONS?) alcovermaria17429 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077548447 Maria Alcover Gomila ]]> 2022-03-04 08:28:02 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077548447 I met my best friend in a stationery store, the day classes started. The next day, she greeted me and from that DAY we have become very close friends. I like her very much even if sometimes she annoys me, but that is precisely why we are very close friends https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077549187 Brunna Da Silva
GOOD VOC. CONGRATS]]> 2022-03-04 08:28:43 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077549187 I met my best friend in primary school when we were like 7 years old, and we're still best friends .We are best friends because we have a lot of things in common. MOREOVER, we have a great time together. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077549292 Romaisa 
PUNCTUATION( USE FULL STOPS TO CONNECT SENTENCES AND NOT COMMAS)]]> 2022-03-04 08:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077549292 I don't have a phobia at the moment, maybe in the future I WILL realize that I do have one. elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077551927 Anas]]> 2022-03-04 08:31:19 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077551927 I'm scared of all types of insects. I hate all of them and when I see one I start to sweat and suffer a lot. I don't know how to REACT. I know that I need to face this fear but it is not something easy. AND I AM STILL STRUGLING WITH IT ( LLUITANT CONTRA AIXÒ) canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077552666 Mar Càneves( GOOD WRITING ..JUST A SUGGESTION)]]> 2022-03-04 08:32:05 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077552666 I met him when he was 6 years old when we started playing basketball together and he is still my friend because we agree on everything elanas17447 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077554446 Anas. OK, NO MISTAKES]]> 2022-03-04 08:33:49 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077554446 I don't have any phobias but I'm very scared of spiders or insects in general . I would like to try to face it someday, BUT Whenever I see one I just try to avoid it https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077554597 Romaisa ( I HAVE CHANGED THE ORDER OF THE LAST 2 SENTENCES TO CONNECT THEM A BIT MORE)]]> 2022-03-04 08:33:57 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077554597 We have been best friends since we were born because our parents were already best friends https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077554758
Marina]]> 2022-03-04 08:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077554758 I am very afraid of jellyfish, whenever I see one my heart starts to pound and I have to leave the sea/I RUSH OUTSIDE THE SEA. I think it is a very common fear, but even so it seems a bit silly to me since a jellyfish sting does not hurt you so much https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077555221 Brunna Da Silva 4t A]]> 2022-03-04 08:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077555221 Yes, I do have a phobia. I'm terrified of dogs. That's a very big problem cause my grandma has a dog and my cousins have an HUGE dog too. I've had this fear AS FAR AS I can remember and when I'm near dogs I get really anxious, my heart starts pounding really fast and all of my instintICs tell me to run away. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077556312 jana]]> 2022-03-04 08:35:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077556312 I met my best friend 4 years ago in a stationery store, we went to the same class and we became very close friends. I like being her friend because she knows how to give advice. MOREOVER, she helps me, she's funny and we make a good team. HOWEVER, sometimes she annoys me because she is very bossy and she always wants to be right. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077556378 Fátima el Mekkioui 
GOOD VOCABULARY ..PAY ATTENTION TO PUNCTUATION. USE FULL STOPS TO CONNECT SENTENCES AND NOT COMMAS]]> 2022-03-04 08:35:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077556378 I’m afraid of spiders.I can’t stand them.If I see one I have to run away imMEdiAtEly. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077557417 Marina
(PUNCTUATION. CONNECT SENTENCES WITH FULL STOPS AND NOT WITH COMMAS)]]> 2022-03-04 08:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077557417 I’m scared of pigeons. I think these animals are very rare (MEANS NOT VERY COMMON, QUE NI HA POCS) STRANGE and dangerous. I don't UNDERSTAND HOW I AM SO SCARED BECUSE IF YOU THINK ABOUT IT , IT IS A BIT SILLY BECAUSE PIGEONS ARE HARMLESS. HOWEVER, THIS FEAR IS STUCK ON MY HEAD. miquelcecilia18528 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077559382 Cecília Miquel Mascaró

]]> 2022-03-04 08:37:57 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077559382 At the moment I don't have a Best friend cause I have had some bad experiences ON THIS FIELD. But I do have a lot of great friend that I have met all over the LAST years. https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077573369 2022-03-04 08:49:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2077573369 I don’t really have any phobia but there is one thing that SCARES ME me, THAT IS the sting of a bee. I DO KNOW HOW IMPORTANT Bees are very FOr humans and for the ENVIRONMENT, but I CAN'T AVOID getTING scared when they GET CLOSE TO ME. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2079381186 Maria Adrover]]> 2022-03-05 18:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2079381186 I met my best frienD at school. But at first, we didn't get along because other person spOkE ILL ABOUT me. Some people lied to her until we could see each other and see what each person was like. Now, I am super happy to have meEt this person and to be able to live unforgettable experiences with her. alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2079415056 Marc Alomar Fuster ]]> 2022-03-05 20:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2079415056 I think I don't have any phobia, but I AM SCARED OF MANY THINGS SUCH AS jumpING into the water from high above OR................... alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2079416190 Marc Alomar Fuster ( IF YOU SAY YOU ARE SCARED OF MANY THINGS YOU SHOULD AT LEAST MENTION 2)]]> 2022-03-05 20:06:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2079416190 If I had been Will Smith I would have got angry as Will Smith but I wouldn't have used violence. But of course I would have taken the measurements to make Chris Rick pay for his horrible and not funny joke ON MY WIFE'S HEALTH canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2121055780 Mar Càneves ]]> 2022-03-30 08:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2121055780 If I had been Will Smith in that situation, I woULd have GOT angry. I think I’m a rational person and before hitTING him I woULd HAVE TRIED TO keep calm and take A DEEP breath. I would HAVE callED the lawyers and SUIT the show host. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2121982588 Maria Adrover Riera]]> 2022-03-30 17:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2121982588 Monday is the best day of the week because I don't have math lessons at the school. I go to the gym and on the 3rd hour I have PE. Furthermore, I go to my grandpas' house and I have lunch with them. alomarmarc17431 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2170275967 Marc Alomar Fuster ]]> 2022-05-04 17:02:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2170275967 For me Monday is the best day of the week because I have nice subjects at high school and normally on Mondays I use to go to have lunch with my grandparents and my cousin. That is why it’s a good day, because it’s the only day of the week that I see them. adrovermaria17428 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2170337446 Maria Adrover Riera]]> 2022-05-04 17:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2170337446 Maria said that she taught her grandmother to use her mobile phone by being so patient and explainig her only the most imortant things to use. For example, how to scan the QR for the restaurant. canevesmarmaciana17412 https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2172520906 Mar Càneves. ]]> 2022-05-06 07:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joanamoliver/mvc6s5rfh3dsmw38/wish/2172520906