HKI E WRITING CLASS WITH MISS IDA by

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iedarahmawati — 2021-11-15 20:43:26 UTC

Today we are going to write paragraph using simple, compound and complex structure

iedarahmawati — 2021-11-15 21:14:43 UTC

upload a picture about your home, then write what you think about your home, what your home means to you.

for example.
hello friends, this is my house. For me, this is more than just a building. This is the reflection of my happiness.

Write about 5 to 10 sentences.
use simple, compound, and complex sentence

this is how it works

2021-11-16 11:41:47 UTC

hello everyone this is my house and i live in this house because I lived here since childhood so for me this is the most comfortable place Thursday I went to Malang so I had to leave my house for a while

2021-11-16 12:40:38 UTC

MY HOME

2021-11-16 12:49:23 UTC

Hello everyone this is my house. My hose is the most comfortable. There , you will find a miracle. Home is not happy but also sadness. Where we shelter and live. Home is the safest and best place. (you just repeat the idea)

suggested revision:
My hose is the most comfortable place to live

Home is not happy but also sadness. Where we shelter and live. (confusing, hehehe)

Home is the safest and best place. (you just repeat the idea, find another)

Home is the most comfortable place to come back. I really like the peaceful atmosphere of the house. When I'm away from home the thing I miss the most is the warmth of hanging out with my family and playing with my sister.

2021-11-16 12:52:53 UTC

From Farah sita salsabilah 200201110216

Balgis Salsabila Zainuri_ 200201110208. Hello Friend this is my house. My family and I live in that house. Many stories have happened in this house from when I was a child and until now. Shelter from heat and rain. I'm comfortable in this house. This house is very valuable.

2021-11-16 13:01:03 UTC

My Sweet Home

2021-11-16 13:06:12 UTC

Hi guys, I want to show you something. This is a photo of my house next to the highway. I like living in this house, because I have friendly friends and neighbors. I've been living in this house since my father changed jobs. My mother always takes care of the household with me, because I have to help her. In front of my house there is a shop. I crossed the highway, for buy necessities at the shop. My father was busy working late into the night, so I helped with some of the housework and looked after my little brother. I like living in this house, because I feel the warmth here.

home sweet home

2021-11-16 13:15:25 UTC

Fahed Zurrofin Rozendana/200201110084
hello everybody, this is my home, the place where I was born and raised. I live with my father, my mother, my big sister, and my little brother but many of us leave our homes as teenagers for study outside the city. even though we are rarely at home, home is still the most comfortable place for us to return. and now only my parents and my younger brother are left at home. even though I am currently studying outside of town, I always try to come home every week or every month.

2021-11-16 13:30:16 UTC

hello everyone! everybody knows what a house is, but not everyone knows what it means. for me, home is the best place for healing. At home, I find warmth and peace from my father, mother, and my sister. home is a shelter when I'm tired of my surroundings. anyways i'm far from home now, i miss my home.

My sweet home

2021-11-16 13:33:01 UTC

^{hello my friends, this is a picture of my house. I've lived here since I was born. I like living in this house because of my warm family and supportive environment. I was educated many things, about science, honesty and discipline. My mother loves plants, so around my house there are many diverse plants. My father is often out of town on duty, so I take care of my mother and brother at home when my father is out and working. I will do the best.}

Ahmad Syahrul Ramadhana Al-Muzakky (200201110045) I and my family live in the house. I sleep every day in house. My grandfather lives alone in this house, so me and my family live at my grandfather's house. I'm always in the house, but when i'm bored i leave the house. my mom is always at home because she has work to do at home.

2021-11-16 13:41:39 UTC

Future Home (Khoyruna Nurunnisak/200201110018)

2021-11-16 14:09:22 UTC

Hello my friend, you know? I have a dream one day to have a private home with my little family. A simple, minimalist and comfortable house near the island. Simple but charming house designs are the best. The house looks calm because of the beautiful yellow light. At some stage, there is me, my husband and son are happy together. My husband sport every morning and I cook in the kitchen. My son is getting ready to go to school. I clean the whole house after my husband left for work. A beautiful house and its contents that love each other will make the heart happy. A big dream, when you have a nice house and a happy family. I'm working hard right now because I have a dream.
Home is the most comfortable place to exchange feelings and stories🤍

What Home Is

2021-11-16 14:24:44 UTC

For me, home is a place to return to. Home is a place where my beloved people belong. A place where my stories is heard, and my opinions is considered. Because i live there for a long time, there are so much things happen there. It is the silent witness of my life stages.

Name: Mutiara Aisyah Alfayara
NIM: 200201110043

The Little House (Akhmad Nur Izza Hermawan/200201110027)

2021-11-16 17:05:22 UTC

Home is a place where I feel like I can go home. Home is where I start my activities. Home for me is not just a place of shelter, but also a place where I feel at home like the quote above. Even though it's messy and messy, I still miss my home. I can't seem to leave the house for long. Even though the house has been entrusted and will be cleaned, my heart feels different when I visit my parents' house. I've been wanting to go home for a week and miss my bed and pillows and my house. Although my mini house is not as wide and spacious as the house in television soap operas, but I feel comfortable under the shade of its green roof and walls. From my house which is just a small housing type that I renovated with my family. During this renovation, we discussed it together like I was an architect. In this small house, we also receive and welcome relatives or friends with big smiles and open arms, don't forget to make simple dishes. The house is small but full of stories and smiles from my family.

FATWAHAFIZ 200201110224 hello everyone look this is my house, this is where my family and I live, my house is like my palace so I really love my house, I always take care of it by sweeping and mopping every day.

fatwa110920 — 2021-11-17 01:30:51 UTC

Home Sweet Home

yogiezidan — 2021-11-17 04:51:47 UTC

hello my name is muhammad yogie hidayatullah. Home for me is a place to unwind. A home is place where I study, sleep, and do my daily activities, especially in the current pandemic era. a place where I want to come back because of its convenience. Home is the most comfortable place in this world.

MY HOME IS MY PALACE

2021-11-17 06:56:28 UTC

Hello everyone, this is house that often I call heaven till for the moment. I will be very happy if you can visit to my house. Although my house is small, but this is where I grew up, learned, and educated affectionately with a brother and a sister. As seen in the picture, I have a small garden because I like to read and relax with a cup up coffe in the afternoon. That’s why no matter how far I go, home always be reason to get back for me because it always gives me warmth and coolness at the same time. I hope someday I can build a nice home like this with my little family.

home sweet home

2021-11-17 11:44:51 UTC

Hello everyone, this is my humble but comfortable house to live in. i live with my sister,dad, mom, grandpa and grandma, from the time i cloud see the world untul now i lived in this house, too many memories and dreams in this house. where i play, get my love and this little house is the most comfortable place to go. my parents loved to grow fruit, because they cloud enjoy the harvest when it was bearing fruit. in the backyard there was also a wide variety of fruit and medicinal plants, plenty of spice and spices for cooking.

THIS IS MY HOME

2021-11-18 02:47:14 UTC

Hi everyone. My name is Imadul Ummah.
This is my home and my little family. Which consists of father, mother, and 4 brothers. For me this house is a part of my life. In this place I grew up, was educated, studied, and many other things. Not only that, but togetherness, loyalty in the family and many childhood memories in this house. I love my family. For me, home is the most valuable place to live. Even though it's not as beautiful as the royal palace that was given a majestic, but I am very grateful to have been given the sustenance of a house to live enough. For me this house is a source of life for me.

Sweet my home (Muhammad Al Pani-200201110031)

2021-11-18 03:19:28 UTC

Hi friends, my name is muhammad al pani, i want to tell you a little about my house. Home is a place where we develop, grow and live our daily activities. I feel that when I am away from home, I always miss the atmosphere of home, in my room, study area, living room, television room and others. The house provides many valuable things in life because it is a place to gather with family, relatives, neighbors and friends. therefore, dear home.

My Sweet Healing HOME

2021-11-19 14:20:51 UTC

Assalamu'alaikum, hi everyone, let me introduce my self. My name is Eka Nur Rahma, I live in Bali. I want tell you a little about my home. My home is just a simple building, but full of warmth and comfort zone. In home there’s my father, mother and me. When I come at my home from overseas, home really became the most comfortable place ever. A comfort zone that can’t be measured by material and also you’ll not get when outside the home with anyone. Home can be the most powerful place for self-recovery or healing from the tired of overseas life.

Waviq Maulida Azizah 200201110015

2021-11-20 08:58:33 UTC

All my friends, I said a little bit of what home means to me. For me the most comfortable place is home, because that's where we feel the warmth of a real togetherness, everyone must want a luxurious house and can be viewed well, but for me a comfortable home is not seen from its luxury but from family harmony in it. There is no place to be comfortable other than home.

Home Sweet Home

2021-11-20 13:03:33 UTC

One of important things for survive for life is home. I think best home is home that can give pleasure for the family inside. Since I born, I feel the pleasure here with my family. My father hard work for fulfill our daily needed. My mother take care us well. And my little brother play and study with me and cousins. My family is simple, and I love them so much. Nothing else can replace the important of family I think. I say this because I realize that home with lovely family is the most valuable person in our life. Many people still don't lucky to have good family then I think someone who have good family she/he must love and make family proud of her/him.

Home

2021-11-20 17:03:56 UTC

Assamu'alaikum, Hi everyone.
What is home?! Home is a place where my family do all things he loves and home is the base for every individual and we should thank God for being blessed with a lovable home. My home is located in the city of Pasuruan. A very small city, yet i love the place. Our home is strategic, so we want going to nature is easy and going to the city is easy too. Since i was born i have always felt harmony and warmth in my neighborhood. I love my home so much, because there is so much of fun and memorize at my home. Me and my family usually spend time off at home by talking heart to heart and we eat together. Even though our home is not big but positive vibes make us happy so we feel comfortable.

Home Sweet Home

2021-11-20 21:46:35 UTC

Hello everyone, this is my house. For me, home is the most comfortable place and I always miss when I continue my studies outside the city. I have a family waiting for me there. When we all get together, my mother always serves the children the food they love. We always do jokes, laughs, and share stories. Many messages are conveyed by my parents to their children. my family is everything to me and home sweet home.

my home

2021-11-21 06:54:55 UTC

Assalamu'alaikum, everyone.

I said a little bit about what home means to me.

For me home is an important place for my life, because home is a gathering place for all the family, in that house the book can feel the warmth of togetherness, exchange stories and opinions.

For me a comfortable house does not have to be luxurious, but simple but the book of isa feels the beauty of togetherness both when happy and difficult. And I don't think there's a comfortable place other than home.

Home Sweet Home

2021-11-21 07:41:31 UTC

Hi everyone this is my house. This house is older than me. That's where I grew up and spent my childhood. So many memories that I have spent with my family. although not so luxurious but I really like this house. I'm so grateful to have a warm place to come home to

Nama : Riska Nauval Zabrina
NIM : 200201110185

Alfa Syifau Rahmah 200201110218 my house is calming

2021-11-21 08:48:33 UTC

Assalamualaikum ... on this occasion I will tell you about my house. My house is neither too big nor too small. In the house I live with my mother and sister in the house there are 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms and a kitchen in the living room and in the living room there are scenic points that make me feel at home at home in the morning I water the flower plants in the yard and I also clean the yard around the house after that I went to the kitchen to accompany my mother to cook, after that because we have an ornamental fish pond then I will clean the pond after routines like this we do when we are on school holidays. I am very happy because my house is always comfortable.

What is Home?

2021-11-21 10:31:48 UTC

Faidyah Nur Ainina
200201110064

For some people, home is a building where inside—he or she finds the warmth and affection of a family. I hope someday I will have a definition like that.

But for now, for me home is something that can be used as a place to return. It doesn't have to be a building, it doesn't have to be a family in it. To me, anything can be considered a home. Why? Because not everyone has a harmonious family even though he has a magnificent house. Not everyone lives a calm and happy life despite having complete parents. Therefore, home itself does not mean a building, it can be a person, a priority, a hobby, or a place.

Forever may never be ours, but when we are together with something we love—I'm sure, a lifetime won't really be that long.

Zaein wafa 200201110217 house

2021-11-21 10:53:36 UTC

Hello friends I want to tell you about my house, actually this not my really own house just a rental house. I rented this house since 2 month ago. I rented this house because I continue my study in this town, I prefer rental house than boarding house because in rental house I can be free, I do everything I want without disturbing other people or feel disturbed.

This house is not big, But I think is more than enough for me. There are only three rooms in this house, The are living room, bedroom and kitchen. In living room there are a Television, a table for me to put my note book, printer, and books. In bed room there are bed, cupboard, and refrigerator. You maybe think it is funny, a refrigerator is placed in bedroom, not in kitchen. My kitchen is small, it only enough for cooking utensils (such as frying pan, pan, stove), and eating utensil (plate, spoon, and glass). Near kitchen there is bathroom, and behind my house there is a place for hanging clothes after they are washed.

My Home "Mukhammad Rizal Baihaqi"

2021-11-21 10:59:57 UTC

Hi everybody. this is my home, and heaven to me. I feel comfortable when I'm in it, where I and my family take shelter and also build a miracle. My house isn't that big, but it's enough for us to live in. and my home is heaven for me and my family

2021-11-21 11:43:05 UTC

hello friends, my name is naqiyyatussa'diyah. for me, home is the most comfortable place, especially my own home because, if I'm at a relative's house (even though the condition of the house is much better ) but still the most comfortable is at my home. even though it has a story of ups and downs, at home we can also issue all the complaints that we are experiencing in the outside world. we can also talk freely with parents, siblings, or with grandmother (because my grandmother live with me). my own home can be said to be comfortable because from childood we grew up and raised in that house.

Hudzaifah nst 200201110041

2021-11-21 14:07:53 UTC

My house is heaven for me which consists of a very harmonious and peaceful family I am very happy to have them and also a very special house for me and also the state of my village is very safe and peaceful, I have three brothers and I am the second child and my eldest brother works in a company, the house is white as my favorite color and also decorated with trees

About My House :)

2021-11-21 15:22:08 UTC

Simple and holds many memories it is a home impression for me. It's not majestic and not luxurious, but it's the place I miss the most, a place to go home and share many stories. The story isn't always about happiness, sometimes there's sadness, but again, everything feels so precious to me because I went through all of that with my little family.
After I migrated to Malang to continue my studies, I feels like home is the place I miss the most and now I really miss the warmth of being with my parents, my sisters and my brother. so for those of you who still have the opportunity to stay at home with your family I hope you can make the most of the opportunity because I'm sure you will miss it.

My Sweet Home

2021-11-21 15:45:23 UTC

hello friends, this is my house. For me, my house is the most comfortable place. My house is filled with happiness. In this house, I live with my little family. In this house there are so many memorable thing. usually in the morning, I listen music, and my little sister read a book. A lot of things to do at my home. I really like living in my house, especially my room. My house is the best place for me and my family. My house is simple but very meaningful in my life.

Home Sweet Home (Firda Aufa Yumni - 200201110139)

2021-11-21 15:51:08 UTC

This is my home, where my family and I find shelter, and share our happiness, of course. This gray - marked house was large enough for us to live in, since we had only six people in our house, but our laughter always lived in it. Home is always the place to go back to however far I go, because here I find what I can't find anywhere else. Then you are lucky if the home you live in has indeed become your home, a place that gives you security and comfort. How many people are out there that even though they're at home they don't feel that their home can provide security and comfort to themselves, because basically it ~~isa p~~lace where we feel safe, comfortable and protected ~~by it.~~ There are four rooms in this house that we have enough rooms to rest from the weary, and there's prayer for our prayers there, and there's a dining room where we all eat together and exchange stories. Thank god we all feel comfortable here, because we actually found a home that gives us comfort. ~~The~~ house is not about how big and huge it is about how people in it can make us feel nice and safe. May we all truly find a home that we can call home.

suggestion from Mrs Ida to all my beloved students in HKI E

iedarahmawati — 2021-11-21 16:10:32 UTC

The most difficult job of a writer is expressing the idea in some ways that the message will be fully understood by others. Therefore, the sentences you write must be clear, can be read and understood by the reader. Avoid making too long sentences, with no punctuation, such as comma and full stop. The common mistakes of new writer are trying to keep many ideas in one sentence, and it will be confusing for the readers to understand what you mean.

Rumah

2021-11-21 16:12:03 UTC

Home is a shelter from the heat of the sun and the cold of the rain. Home is a place to return to when the soul is tired of struggling to face the rigors of the outside and it is also the home that will accept all the restlessness that is within to rest. Home is a place and he will always be ready to accept us in any condition

Salma desviani-20021110236

Yusuful Husni Ahmad 200201110108

2021-11-21 16:14:28 UTC

Home is the place where we start the journey of life. The house is the most beautiful and most comfortable place because of the presence of loved ones such as parents and other families, making the house more reassuring. Maybe the house is not a magnificent building, but in it are stored many priceless stories.

The body is silent at home, longing to fly aimlessly.
Body at home, mind everywhere.
Home is the place where our heart is.
A good laugh is like a ray of light that enters the house.

Sweet Home Muhammad Iqbal Zain 200201110206

2021-11-21 16:28:57 UTC

hello friend this is my home a simple home with a small family in it a mother who always prepares food and a father who always comes home late because of his work. I have brothers and sisters in my opinion home is a place to go home when the soul is tired of struggling to face the harshness of the outside world and also a house that will accept everything restlessness inside to rest. Home is the most comfortable place and will always be ready to receive us in any condition. So don't forget to go home and lie down.

2021-11-21 16:57:53 UTC

My home is located at bogor in an 150 metres area, i lived in there since i was born, my house is very comfort and warm for my family, my house is painted green, but in that photo i cannot get my photo because i was in malang right now, so i take some photos from google. My home is not very big, but i love living there and another reason is the ceiling was high so that the air can flow up and not warming the room. My house was built by my grandfather 30 years ago and then going to my father until now, it has many trees like mango,rambutan and papaya but in 2013 my home is renovated by my father, it had new front door and the new fish pod for my lovely gurame. But umfortunately our mango's tree must been cut down because it is blocking the side part of my house, but now my father start growing plants in pot and my brother that has biology degrees planting some hidroponik plants like chili and tomato that can be cooked by my mother. Thank you

Name: muhammad farhan fathurrahman
Nim:200201110170

LUTFA RACHMAD_200201110115

lutfarachmad — 2021-11-22 00:59:57 UTC

Hello everyone, In my opinion, the house is the most comfortable place to stop because it is inside the house that we avoid the heat and rain. In this house there are 4 family members who love each other and love each other. In this house there are many memories from childhood to the present that cannot be told one by one. Although my house is not like a palace and simple but this is where I grew up by my parents.

My Beloved House

elzarafamily — 2021-11-22 01:02:59 UTC

Name : Mochammad Asy'ari
Number: 200201110100

Okayy guys, so this is my house. So i will describe a little bit. This house was built for one year, in 1990. There are three bedrooms, a bathroom, living room, family room, and kitchen. Like home in general. I think it’s a different house because it’s comfortable house. Very quiet, so far from road, so there is no sounds of motorcycle and cars. I feel very comfort with his house. Sometimes i want hangout, but the house like make me lazy to go out. This house always be a place to escape to rest after a tired day of activities. All of my family enjoyed this house.

Cahya Fitri Annisa / 200201110135

2021-11-22 07:18:22 UTC

if we talk about home, we can find many things that we can tell to any person about our home. home is a place to go home, take a rest, gather with family, and spend free time with our beloved family.
my own house is located between simple housing in the city. even my house has relatively small size, but it still comfortable to live in.
we must respect to our family member especially with our mom and dad. cause just with them we can accept us in any situation and condition, without any reason.

My Home (Fikri Azka Riza 200201110158)

2021-11-22 08:00:54 UTC

hello everyone, I will explain about my house, I live at home with my small family, namely my father and mother and grandmother and my sister, my house is located in Bali, precisely in Denpasar, then my house has a room to relax, a kitchen, two bathrooms , three bedrooms, and one prayer room. I really enjoyed living in a private house with my parents too. Its beauty makes my house stand out from other houses, it has a large yard that is often used for playing football by the children around it

Rows of flowers and trees make the house look cool and shady, in the garden behind the house there are various types of trees, such as mango trees, rambutan trees, durian trees, longan trees, if the trees bear fruit, many friends will come to taste them.