Paul Google Sites Peer Feedback 2019 - 2020 by Paul Vlkovic https://padlet.com/26pvlkovic/mu1s8p7iz6d5 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 19:28:50 UTC 2019-12-10 19:18:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3ad.png Feedback: Pedro 26pmora https://padlet.com/26pvlkovic/mu1s8p7iz6d5/wish/421669643 I love this story. It has good explaining what happened to Alex. I like how you changed Alex's mood, and thought from negative to bright. My favorite part in this story is when Alex got an audition. However, I suggest you for improvement is some spelling errors. (Words not capitalized mostly.)]]> 2019-12-09 15:56:56 UTC https://padlet.com/26pvlkovic/mu1s8p7iz6d5/wish/421669643 I like how everything matches up and makes sense and have a meaning to it.Also I like how you show what your character is thinking about. My wish is if there was a title for the play that you said yes to 26nnitti https://padlet.com/26pvlkovic/mu1s8p7iz6d5/wish/421823177 2019-12-09 19:37:07 UTC https://padlet.com/26pvlkovic/mu1s8p7iz6d5/wish/421823177 I really like how you had so much detail and I can picture it in my head very clearlyAlso I like when you were over the phone talking to the manager all the speaker tagsMy wish is if the i was capitalized through the story 26nnitti https://padlet.com/26pvlkovic/mu1s8p7iz6d5/wish/422375899 2019-12-10 19:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/26pvlkovic/mu1s8p7iz6d5/wish/422375899