When you present with ‘First’, ‘Second’, it would be a good idea to use numbers in your PPT, so the audience can follow you better. 

Think about how to make better transitions between slides and presenters. You could say things like: ‘And now, my classmate (insert name), will address the issue of X’. 

I think your last slide is very informative. Whilst this is good, you have to think about how much text you include in the slide, which I thought could’ve been less in this case. 

Because the focus of the artefacts is evaluating the text, maybe your evaluation could’ve been an independent slide. I felt the evaluation did not have much space in the artefact.

Overall this is a very good presentation. Think about the points I mention before and it can be even better =)

The transitions between slides could be improved I think. Mostly the way you give the turn to your classmates, think about saying things such as: ‘and now my classmate (classmate’s name) will continue with X…’.

I liked that you didn’t use much text, but used  headings instead and explained them.

Part 3 of your presentation was very nicely delivered. It was very engaging and you used relevant examples. Well done!

Some of the last slides, contain small font text. Be careful with this as the audience may not be able to read it.

Good transitions between slides. Sometimes you gave the turn to your classmates very smoothly, some other times, it was a bit mechanical.

Overall, the delivery of the content of the slides was very good - Well done!

Slide 9 has some issues: There’s an image on the top left corner that is very difficult to see/read. Consider this in the future.

The delivery was very good, although at times, there were some hesitations. You didn’t have much time to organise/rehearse this, so it’s ok. 

Very good transitions between presenters.

Careful with the last part of the presentation. Generally speaking, don’t use white text with yellow background as it’s very difficult to read, especially if the text is small. 

One thing I would consider is the amount of text you use. It’s generally difficult to read a lot of text when someone is presenting. So, as a member of the audience, I prefer the speaker tells me the information rather than me having to read it.

For the last presenter, I wasn’t sure where the information you were presenting was on the artefact. Maybe it would’ve been easier to have for sections so that each of you had a very clear space to discuss/present.