https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2 In groups of three, record ideas about what makes a great recount: en-us 2017-08-29 07:11:25 UTC 2017-09-04 07:14:05 UTC hello@padlet.com Room212016 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/183321798 2017-08-29 07:13:38 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/183321798 Room212016 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/183321873 Alliteration ]]> 2017-08-29 07:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/183321873 Room212016 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/183321901 Full stops]]> 2017-08-29 07:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/183321901 room27 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439805 Don't over write by not adding too much gems.]]> 2017-09-03 22:59:42 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439805 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439814 Show not tell
Personification
Metaphor
Simile
Powerful verbs and adjectives
Assonance
Capital Letters
Punctuation (e.g full stops)
Hyperbole
Alliteration

]]> 2017-09-03 22:59:49 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439814 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439817 A great recount consists of good ideas,  metaphors, powerful adjectives but most important of all, a great hook to hook people into the story.
Surface Features
Capital letters
Commas 
SNOT

]]> 2017-09-03 22:59:53 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439817 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439821 1. no plagiarizing 
2. Make sure that your hook at the start of the sentence catches the person attention 
3. make sure your work make sense
4.Add gems like
show don't tell
metaphor 
similes
allteration
hyperbole
assonace 
personafication

5. full stops and capital letters 
6. don't over write
7. three point plan
  

]]> 2017-09-03 22:59:57 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439821 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439830 Gems such as simile, metaphor and hyperbole.
Show don't tell
assonance
re-read your work
make it original
capital letters and full stops
adverbs
powerful verbs
no plagiarizing
personification
no over writing]]> 2017-09-03 23:00:05 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439830 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439889 #1 Make sure to know what to leave out so that you don't end up over writing. #2 Add in a powerful hook that will interest the reader. #3 Add in powerful verbs not boring verbs like: walk, run, jump. #4 Add in a rhetorical question  ]]> 2017-09-03 23:01:07 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439889 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439890 Dialogue, short staccato sentences, show don't tell, assonance, conjunction, powerful verbs, powerful adjectives, simile, metaphors, clever tittle, full stops, capital letters.]]> 2017-09-03 23:01:08 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439890 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439898 1. show don't tell
2. use hyperbole
3. dont over write]]> 2017-09-03 23:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439898 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439900 Don' over write]]> 2017-09-03 23:01:28 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439900 room27 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439918 Show don't tell.]]> 2017-09-03 23:01:44 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439918 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439924 write three  paragraphs.
Don't over write]]> 2017-09-03 23:01:47 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184439924 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184440012 alliteration, short staccato sentences]]> 2017-09-03 23:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184440012 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184440070 Assonance 
Personification
Simile 
Metaphoric Language
A good hook
Alliteration 

]]> 2017-09-03 23:04:01 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184440070 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184440338 show not tell

]]> 2017-09-03 23:05:08 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184440338 https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184484278 It smells bad!]]> 2017-09-04 07:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/Room212016/msehzjkw6bl2/wish/184484278