https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx Todas en-us 2020-05-15 16:18:28 UTC 2025-11-26 18:36:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/2640.png susanmaymi18 https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575526627 Hello Krystal! I need some help with the essay I am writing for university, can you read it and tell me what you think about it? Also what I could fix and such? ]]> 2020-05-15 16:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575526627 krystamaymi11 https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575529835 Okay! I'll be glad to help. ]]> 2020-05-15 16:22:45 UTC https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575529835 krystamaymi11 https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575530953 In paragraph 4 add -y at the end of the on the fifth sentence.]]> 2020-05-15 16:23:14 UTC https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575530953 krystamaymi11 https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575531445 In the conclusion, after women and men, add any human being, there are people that do not fit into any of those categories.]]> 2020-05-15 16:23:27 UTC https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575531445 krystamaymi11 https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575532603 In the conclusion add a -u between -a and -s to make cause. Then after that mention who is trying to defeat women’s rights. Maybe put the oppressor.]]> 2020-05-15 16:23:59 UTC https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575532603 krystamaymi11 https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575538931 After that, I feel that everything is amazingly written and embodies what you want your reader to know. ]]> 2020-05-15 16:26:43 UTC https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575538931 susanmaymi18 https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575539475 Thank you so much!]]> 2020-05-15 16:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575539475 krystamaymi11 https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575539953 Keep up the amazing work!]]> 2020-05-15 16:27:09 UTC https://padlet.com/susanmaymi18/mrx65m8i9buujjqx/wish/575539953