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      <title>Camila D. Google Sites Peer Feedback 2020 - 2021 by Alois  Diaz</title>
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      <pubDate>2021-01-05 13:12:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>My adventure in Dorney Park </div><div>As I was about to fall down the stairs I caught the bar before I could fall pulled myself up and turn and went down stairs asked If we have everything clothes shampoo more after that we all got out and started to driveWhile my heart pounds i see my dad sweating like he is terrified i was in the back just looking at stuff and hearing mariachi  music. The trumpets went Ba-Ba-Baaa-Ba-Baaa-Ba-Baaa-Ba!  I heard my father sing. We stopped at McDonald’s for food. We didn't eat anything home  so after that we kept going. Everyone fell asleep but me and my dad but thought I was asleep but really wasn't. We got there and I could hear my heart pounding like a drum as loud as possible.  Boom! Boom! Boom! The roller coaster swear to god never been so nervous for anything in my life. My mom or baby sister couldn’t come  at that time because that was last year  and she was 6 months old. After we waited for our church we got to the entrance and inside and we stop to the restroom while my father is in the bathroom I felt like I was having a panic attack I was fidgeting with my hands (don’t judge) but after that bathroom break we started walking to the rides.started to go on the ride as i got to the chair I could hear my heart start as the cold chair touches me I put the buckle on as it went over my shoulders and as I took my shoes off because they were gonna fall off and as the people were buckling in I heard the deaths words 3...2...1 GO!! in my mind I knew I should’ve wrote my willand I swear I my heart stopped like i said i hate being on a roller coaster like being in a roller coaster is the scariest thing i was still scared till death then what i did was just keep my eyes closed then once i got out i took my shoes and bags i said to myself don’t open your eyes shut your eyes the. after that little experience I wasn’t as scared I actually felt brave for once so we went on more rides after we went on all dry rides.  church went separate were we were going  but we regrouped after we all were hangout and ate then we went on more rides then we went to the water kingdom it’s in the park just the other half so we got in our bathroom and changed we went on the water rides.</div><div>I changed into my bathing suit what had unicorns and a galaxy (don’t judge me I was still a kid ) then I was next got ready and went down I heard echos and It was dark but with colors and lights once we got down we were soaking wet water dripped down from my clothes. There was a river running  down my clothes.  Whoosh! Woosh! Woosh! Drip! Drip! Drip! It dripped onto hot concrete while my feet burned we got to the next ride but it got windy which made me cold I went with my family then we got dried up and the wind dried my hair then after we got a few pictures at the register and won some new toys and after we went in my dad's car and watched a fluffy video (he is  a comedian) and made me laughed because i was having a panic attack I was fidgeting with my hands (don’t judge)   I get panic attacks when it rains (don’t judge me ) but it really helped and once we got home we were running inside and we watched a movie and then went downstairs and went to my room put on some relaxing music it helps me sleep (but not really ) but sometimes it doesn't work so I make tea afterwards lavender tea helps me calm myself as I gulped it down I was reading my book to I almost spit out the tea because of the book and once i finished the the chapter and my tea i felt sleepy as my eye went shut and i tucked myself down i realised maybe roller coaster aren’t scary there fun it just looks scary you can always  take a chance never judge a book by its cover because there’s always something that can be hidden-Camila</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-06 14:03:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>From gia</title>
         <author>27gredling</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I liked how you said I was asleep but I really wasn’t , its was very discriptive</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-08 14:11:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Janat Moudiab </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I knew I should’ve wrote my will i like that joke but I’m confused because you never said were you whent over all ever thing is good in my opinion </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-12 16:08:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>27gredling</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I liked how I could really relate to the begging and that she included a doctors research. It was very interesting and it reminded me very much about me</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-05-11 12:44:09 UTC</pubDate>
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