Remake of Themed Space Analysis Proofreading Steps SP20 Template by Matthew Tidwell https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl Proofreading questions en-us 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC 2020-02-05 16:48:41 UTC hello@padlet.com tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048019 What’s the ‘So What?’ for your audience? What is the ‘Big Picture’ conversation that your analysis connects to?]]> 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048019 What experiences (ex. Hidden World), language (ie. implementing concepts), or stories (ex. characters, actions, motivation, scenery) are you identifying and evaluating? tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048021 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048021 The order of paragraphs can sometimes help you understand what needs revision. Explain to your partner(s) why the paragraphs are in the order that they are in. tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048022 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048022 Concluding sentences should: tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048024 -explain evidence as a whole
-connects to the thesis
-sets up the conclusion
-some mix of all above]]> 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048024 Evidence: Where can add distinct detail to a paragraph from the themed space or from the readings to keep from repeating previous ideas/points? tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048029 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048029 Claims: Are your claims (first sentence) smaller arguments that are supporting your thesis? tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048032 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048032 Read or point out a sentence that you are proud of in your draft or notes. tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048033 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048033 Thesis tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048036 What larger claim are you making about this piece? Could someone (reasonably) disagree with it?]]> 2020-02-05 16:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048036 Ethos, pathos, logos tidwellosuedu https://padlet.com/tidwellosuedu/ml7bsr71b4bl/wish/441048037
  • What experience/expertise do you have that would help you explain the significance of your material and help your audience trust your judgment?
  • What are the emotional stakes involved in your material?
  • What is the history or verifiable background of your material? Can you use part of that history to create an interesting hook for the paper?
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