https://padlet.com/23mmurray/mkrts412s7tc Please comment in a nice way en-us 2018-03-01 17:43:17 UTC 2018-03-02 16:13:39 UTC hello@padlet.com 23ggerminder https://padlet.com/23mmurray/mkrts412s7tc/wish/237076127 Star: I feel you did a very good job expanding on all of your ideas and making sure your point got across. For example, if something was not clear you would elaborate or have another sentence to make it clear. 
Star: In this piece you made 100% sure that you did not plagiarise by sharing the authors or speakers voice even when it was not data and you were just sharing their opions.
Wish: In the future, one thing I think you can improve on is your word choice. In some sentences you had to many words that it made the sentence confusing. If you cut down on unnessasry words it still gets your point across in a clearer way. Try taking out and, both, there, the, it espically and in sentences. ]]> 2018-03-01 18:01:50 UTC https://padlet.com/23mmurray/mkrts412s7tc/wish/237076127 Hpaige https://padlet.com/23mmurray/mkrts412s7tc/wish/237432536 Star: I really like this story because I can really relate to it, I can't trust my brother with anything
Star:  I really like how much detail you had in the whole writing piece
Wish: Just read your piece over next time because there were a couple of grammar mistakes
-Paige]]> 2018-03-02 15:14:50 UTC https://padlet.com/23mmurray/mkrts412s7tc/wish/237432536 23epizha https://padlet.com/23mmurray/mkrts412s7tc/wish/237461537 Star: Your introduction was amazing. You really hooked me into you piece. 
Star: I really liked your piece because no one really did something like this and it was unique. 
Wish: In the future, I suggest you read over you piece and see for spelling errors. If you want you can us Grammarly it's FREE!! just fill in the blanks and answer the questions to get an account. I highly recommend it. 
-Emily P.]]> 2018-03-02 15:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/23mmurray/mkrts412s7tc/wish/237461537