https://padlet.com/23aniemczyk/mka460ky88wu Hello and welcome to my padlet! Thank you for reading my writing pieces. I look forward to your comments. Please keep them positive:) en-us 2018-02-05 18:29:51 UTC 2018-03-28 12:39:52 UTC hello@padlet.com 23lsimeon https://padlet.com/23aniemczyk/mka460ky88wu/wish/236895381 I wish you would've  check over your grammar more.
STAR 1: i love the way the writing piece was sounded while reading it.
STAR 2: the conclusion was written very well and was a great way ending your piece. ]]> 2018-03-01 13:54:02 UTC https://padlet.com/23aniemczyk/mka460ky88wu/wish/236895381 23asharma https://padlet.com/23aniemczyk/mka460ky88wu/wish/237426690 Hi Ava! I loved your story idea! I like how you portrayed exactly how Nina was feeling when her brother was stalking her. It was a very realistic description of how someone would feel in that type of situation. You also did a phenomenal job in describing how the characters look. In the future, maybe try to make the villain have more of an in-depth personality. For example, when Nina tried to distract her brother by ordering pizza, I don't think that a mental hospital patient would easily succumb to that. I think that he would've been more suspicious and resisted more. Overall, great work! 

- Asmita ]]> 2018-03-02 15:07:13 UTC https://padlet.com/23aniemczyk/mka460ky88wu/wish/237426690 23inunziata https://padlet.com/23aniemczyk/mka460ky88wu/wish/246858497 To begin my first star, I found your  hook really good because it was very interesting and will grab the reader's attention into wanting to read more. Secondly, for my second star,   I think that your explanation about the topic was really good because you gave a lot of detail which will help the reader get a better idea about what the article is talking about, which helped me understand better about the topic. One wish I have for you is in the future, make sure to check over a few minor punctuation such as uppercase names mentioned. Otherwise, I think th]]> 2018-03-28 12:29:43 UTC https://padlet.com/23aniemczyk/mka460ky88wu/wish/246858497