My Family by ANGIE LORENA LOPEZ LOPEZ

My family

3220171078 — 2018-03-03 16:49:34 UTC

I'm going to introduce you to my family.
This is hernando, my grandfather. He is eighty-five years old. He's from Bogota. He's a pensioner. His wife is Maria's.
This is Maria, my grandmother. She is seventy-four years old. She is from Ibagué. She's a housewife. Luis and Ana's Maria's son.
This is Ana, my aunt. She is fifty-one years old. She from Ibagué. She's an secretary.
This is Mariana, my cousin. She is seventeen. She is a student. She is from Ibagué.
This is Jeronimo, My cousin . He is three years old. He's from Ibagué.
This is Manuel , My cousin. He is ten years old. He's a student.
This is luis, My father. He's forty-nine years old. He's from Ibagué. He's an independent.
This is Patricia, My mother. She's forty-nine years old. She's from Cali. She's a housewife.
My name is Angie. I'm twenty years old. I'm from Ibagué. I am a student of psychology.

3220171078 — 2018-03-04 01:05:08 UTC

Hello Angie,

vana53 — 2018-03-05 16:08:36 UTC

Here are my comments:
1. Where's the introduction? everytime you create a video, please add an intro so we know what you are going to talk about.
2. Grammar. In the video you say: " She's is grandmother" The correct form is She's MY grandmother" and use only IS once.
3. Use of a/an: you say "she's is secretary," "she's is an student." The correct form is " she's A secretary and she's A student."
4. Pronunciation of numbers: practice with small and large numbers when you say people's age.
Your mark is 3.5