11108349 黃瑜晏 by 蔡涵瀅

原版

2023-12-07 01:36:12 UTC

My favorite corner is in a seafood restaurant, where we visited last week with my cousins in Wanli. The photo was taken during our visit on Wednesday. My dog, a golden Dachshund, wearing a navy blue and white collar, sits in a red bag on a black chair next to a brown one. Behind the brown wooden chair is a dark brown round table. My dog is placed on the black chair closer to me. The wall behind is white, and the floor has a mix of brown and white. The scene gives me a warm, nostalgic feeling, like being at my grandma's house – not fancy but very cozy.

老師改版

2023-12-07 01:38:34 UTC

Last week, I went to Wanli with my cousins to a seafood restaurant, and that's where my favorite corner is. This shot was captured during our Wednesday visit. Perched on a pair of black and brown chairs, my golden Dachshund—accessorized with a navy-and-white collar—rests in a red bag. A round table with dark brown wood behind the brown wooden chair. Near me, on the black recliner, is where I keep my dog. A combination of brown and white tiles cover the floor, while a white wall stands behind. This setting brings back fond memories of spending time at my grandmother's house, which is both simple and inviting.

Reflection

2023-12-07 01:51:12 UTC

The original text lacks smooth transitions between sentences. Utilizing pronouns to establish better coherence would be beneficial. The language used appears somewhat lacking in depth, and the introductory section is overly broad, lacking the necessary engagement.

永續旅遊定義

2023-12-07 02:04:36 UTC

UNWTO將永續觀光定義為：「充分考量目前及未來的經濟、社會與環境影響後，落實遊客、產業、環境與當地社區需求的觀光方式。」需考慮旅遊對環境帶來影響的因素，像是溫室氣體、二氧化碳、減塑。

永續旅遊的國內案例

2023-12-07 02:10:35 UTC

全台首座綠建築：北投圖書館，這座圖書館是太陽能發電，並透過雨水回收系統來灌溉植物和廁所用水。在建材上，使用可回收的木材韓鋼材，同時利用自然採光等方式來減少電力使用。

永續旅遊的國外案例

2023-12-07 02:10:43 UTC

紐西蘭漢默溫泉：紐西蘭的漢默溫泉因為利用地熱能幫助地方環境、採取節水池等措施，曾獲頒永續旅遊獎項。

永續旅遊的策略

2023-12-13 15:20:45 UTC

1.開拓多元市場

2.活絡國民旅遊

3.輔導產業轉型

4發展智慧觀光

5.推廣體驗觀光

永續旅遊的目的

2023-12-13 15:25:00 UTC

在旅行時支持地方，保持文化、景觀或生態的完整性。幫助當地經濟發展，同時能夠保護天然資源，減少污染物和廢棄物，以及尊重當地傳統文化。

An Unforgettable experience, outline

2023-12-28 01:54:43 UTC

What: In second grade, my grandfather carried me over the challenging Longtan Suspension Bridge in Taoyuan, causing severe knee issues.

When: During a rainy day in my second-grade year.

Where: At the Longtan Suspension Bridge in Taoyuan.

Who: My grandparents and me.

How: Despite pre-existing leg issues, my grandfather, in his seventies, carried me, resulting in lasting knee complications.

An Unforgettable experience, Elements

2023-12-28 01:57:58 UTC

Setting: Longtan Suspension Bridge, Taoyuan, rainy day, second grade.

Characters: Me, grandparents and aunt

Pivots: Grandfather, aged over seventy, carries me over, causing severe knee issues.

Themes: My grandfather carried me across the suspension bridge

An Unforgettable experience

2023-12-28 01:59:53 UTC

When I was in the second grade of elementary school, my grandparents and I visited the Longtan Suspension Bridge in Taoyuan. The weather was gloomy with continuous rain, and the wind was strong. The bridge, especially with an uphill section at the end, seemed towering to me. Struggling with a severe fear of heights, I couldn't take the first step and ended up crying loudly.

At that time, my grandfather, who was in his seventies, carried me step by step across the suspension bridge. Prior to this, he already had issues with his legs. After completing the bridge, his knees were in pain. Despite this, he endured until we got home before mentioning his discomfort to my aunt. A hospital examination revealed bone fractures, reaching a point where surgery was necessary. This incident led to severe complications in his knees, and he has yet to fully recover. Over the years, I've felt deeply sorry for him, hoping that one day he will truly get better.