The Invention Convention by Mr. Hawco https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352 Share your thoughts and questions en-us 2017-06-21 16:01:06 UTC 2017-06-27 17:00:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Dartstarget.png Its not called a wool spinner 348736299 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573736 2017-06-27 16:52:49 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573736 speak more clearly 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573751 2017-06-27 16:53:03 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573751 timothy_hawco https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573764 Clothes allowed us to live more easily in cold places. Especially wool which is very warm. ]]> 2017-06-27 16:53:12 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573764 have more expression 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573768 2017-06-27 16:53:16 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573768 look at the audience more 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573780 2017-06-27 16:53:25 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573780 A little choppy 349075325 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573783 2017-06-27 16:53:27 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573783 i like how you spoke loudly and clearly 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573827 2017-06-27 16:54:03 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573827 A lot speaking on history and no pictures 349075325 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573830 2017-06-27 16:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573830 Very detailed 341040632 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573842 2017-06-27 16:54:17 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573842 eye contact 348736299 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573851 you need more eye contact]]> 2017-06-27 16:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573851 timothy_hawco https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573896 Maybe try making bigger connections to why making clothe is important. And how doing it faster made life better. ]]> 2017-06-27 16:54:52 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573896 more pictures 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573914 2017-06-27 16:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573914 pictures 348736299 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573925 too little pictures]]> 2017-06-27 16:55:19 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573925 say more examples 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573936 2017-06-27 16:55:26 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573936 mostly information 341040632 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573940 not a lot of persuading]]> 2017-06-27 16:55:32 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573940 Too much history and facts that don't tell us why it's important invention. timothy_hawco https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573951 Would have made this section much much shorter as it doesn't support why it's important and is not interesting to your audience. ]]> 2017-06-27 16:55:41 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573951 To much talking on history 349075325 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573966 2017-06-27 16:55:52 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573966 talk more about why we need the wool spinner 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573978 2017-06-27 16:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177573978 More Eye contact 341040632 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574031 you were mostly looking at your page]]> 2017-06-27 16:56:43 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574031 to many words on history 348736299 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574043 2017-06-27 16:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574043 don't forget, you are trying to persuade us that it is the best invention ever 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574055 2017-06-27 16:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574055 no pict 348736299 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574077 2017-06-27 16:57:32 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574077 Needs pics 341040632 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574092 2017-06-27 16:57:47 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574092 To much info 341040632 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574126 2017-06-27 16:58:19 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574126 to much information 348736299 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574155 Its not very persuasive. Your only talking about information.]]> 2017-06-27 16:58:42 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574155 To much information 349075325 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574161 2017-06-27 16:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574161 i think you copyed this off the internet 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574170 Would like to hear your own thoughts and ideas. ]]> 2017-06-27 16:58:56 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574170 These arent your words 341040632 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574193 2017-06-27 16:59:13 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574193 Too long 349075325 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574226 2017-06-27 16:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574226 spends too much time on one slide 349108373 https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574252 2017-06-27 17:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/timothy_hawco/mg01f5os2352/wish/177574252