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      <title>Peer Review Carousel by Syiqin Shaharuddin</title>
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      <description>Post your draft introductory paragraphs for a cover letter and review your peers&#39; work.</description>
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      <pubDate>2024-09-26 17:44:17 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Welcome to our Peer Review Carousel Padlet!</title>
         <author>misssyiqin226</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/misssyiqin226/mew4gydzx0z44vz2/wish/3140911341</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p><br></p><p>Please follow the instructions below to complete the activity. If you have any questions, please ask your lecturer for help. </p><p><br></p><p>• Add a post to the 'Draft Paragraphs' section with your draft introductory paragraph for a cover letter.</p><p><br></p><p>• Review at least 3 other students' paragraphs in the 'Draft Paragraphs' section. Add your suggestions and edits as comments on their posts.</p><p><br></p><p>• After receiving feedback, revise your paragraph and post the improved version in the 'Revised Paragraphs' section.</p><p><br></p><p>• Finally, reflect on the process by adding a post in the 'Reflections' section.</p>]]></description>
         <pubDate>2024-09-26 17:44:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Fattah Ameng</title>
         <author>misssyiqin226</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/misssyiqin226/mew4gydzx0z44vz2/wish/3140935241</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Dear Sir/Madam, </p><p><br/></p><p>I am writing to express my interest in the TikTok Live Host position at Al-Ikhsan Sports, as advertised. I recently graduated with a Diploma in Sports Science and Recreation from UiTM Cawangan Perlis Kampus Arau. My experience in social media management and live streaming makes me confident in my ability to contribute to Al-Ikhsan Sports' online presence. I am excited about the opportunity to engage your audience and help grow the brand through TikTok Live.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-26 17:58:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Fattah Ameng</title>
         <author>misssyiqin226</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/misssyiqin226/mew4gydzx0z44vz2/wish/3140945855</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Based on the comments I received from my friends, here is my Revised Paragraph: </p><p><br/></p><p>Dear Sir/Madam,  </p><p><br/></p><p>I am writing to express my interest in the TikTok Live Host position at Al-Ikhsan Sports, as advertised on your website. I recently graduated with a Diploma in Sports Science and Recreation from UiTM Cawangan Perlis Kampus Arau. My experience in social media management and live streaming, especially with platforms like TikTok, makes me confident in my ability to contribute to Al-Ikhsan Sports' online presence. I am eager to engage your audience and help grow the brand through interactive and creative TikTok Live sessions.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-26 18:05:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Fattah Ameng</title>
         <author>misssyiqin226</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/misssyiqin226/mew4gydzx0z44vz2/wish/3140946949</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Through this activity, I learned the importance of feedback in improving my writing. My peers pointed out that I needed to be more specific about where I found the job posting and which tools I’ve used. Revising my paragraph helped me refine my language and remove unnecessary repetition. This process showed me how small details can make a big difference in creating a professional and effective cover letter introduction</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2024-09-26 18:06:36 UTC</pubDate>
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