◦Leave feedback on a classmate’s introduction ( one thing to improve, one thing you agree with or found interesting)

Areas of improvement:

◦You could strengthen your background information even further by adding_______________________________________________________________________________

◦You could swap this word __________ with ___________ for an even more formal tone!

Areas of strength:

◦Your use of _____________ is really interesting

◦Your hook is interesting because__________________________

◦I learned__________________ from your introduction!

 “It is estimated that 80% to 90% of children and adults consume caffeine regularly”(strily et. al) 

Caffeine is a nervous system stimulant. Many teens drink coffee, energy drinks, or soda with caffeine. But too much caffeine can affect their growing bodies and cause health problems. People argue that caffeine is good for keeping yourself alert when you're low on energy, however caffeine has been linked to great impact on one's health. 

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 “It is estimated that 80% to 90% of children and adults consume caffeine regularly”(strily et. al) 

Caffeine is a nervous system stimulant. Many teens drink coffee, energy drinks, or soda with caffeine. But too much caffeine can affect their growing bodies and cause health problems. People argue that caffeine is good for keeping yourself alert when you're low on energy, however caffeine has been linked to great impact on one's health

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2. Background information: inaccessible healthcare in one of the biggest problems in America it impacts people’s lives and quality of living.

3. Thesis statement: Although government officials may argue that healthcare must be pricey in order to pay the wages of those working in the medical field, healthcare and insurance should be affordable or free.

1.Hook: 29 million Americans find themselves unable to access or afford 

insurance/healthcare (Bonavitacola)

29 million Americans find themselves unable to access or afford 

insurance/healthcare (Bonavitacola). Unfortunately, inaccessible healthcare is one of the biggest problems in America, because it impacts people’s health and quality of living. Although government officials may argue that healthcare must be pricey in order to pay the wages of those working in the medical field, healthcare and insurance should be affordable or free.

“The average person now spends 20.1 hours a week listening to music.” ( how much music does a person listen to music per week?) “ Happy, upbeat music causes our brains to produce chemicals like dopamine and serotonin, which evokes feelings of joy, whereas calming music relaxes the mind and the body. ” ( Aiello )While many believe that music is just a way to pass time, music can actually promote a better lifestyle, a rather peaceful sensation overall. Due to the release of dopamine (feel feel-good hormone), it ensures that people will feel uplifted. Music should be more widely used in a therapeutic way.