'The Offering' Film Pitch Feedback. by Zara Martincevic https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4 en-us 2017-02-06 15:40:20 UTC 2023-04-27 09:27:50 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Moderncam.png martz001_312 https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151857948 2017-02-06 15:45:11 UTC https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151857948 Cait martz001_312 https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151858284 WWW: Good use of typical conventions and narrative to represent the horror genre.
EBI: Describe the narrative in a less complicated manner.
]]> 2017-02-06 15:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151858284 Olivia martz001_312 https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151860957 WWW: Interesting and creative narrative, that includes many typical conventions of your genre.
EBI: Include a character that the audience can identify with.]]> 2017-02-06 15:52:07 UTC https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151860957 Khadijah martz001_312 https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151862033 WWW: Wonderful use of horror iconography to accentuate sub-genre and it's narrative.
EBI: There was a situation of which the audience could relate to. ]]> 2017-02-06 15:54:28 UTC https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151862033 Emily martz001_312 https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151865280 WWW: Original narrative which includes the conventions of your genre.
EBI: Use a variety of character that your audience can relate to.]]> 2017-02-06 16:02:15 UTC https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151865280 Shannon martz001_312 https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151867948 WWW: Great details of graphic imagery alluding to horror.
EBI: Include more basic language when describing your narrative.]]> 2017-02-06 16:08:37 UTC https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151867948 Megan martz001_312 https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151869072 WWW: Original idea, with traditional horror locations.
EBI: Have a clear protagonist]]> 2017-02-06 16:11:50 UTC https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151869072 Miss Lewis martz001_312 https://padlet.com/martz001_312/mdiotm08xvh4/wish/151871746 WWW:
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