Introductory paragraph for Argumentative Essay by Raeidah Ariff https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8 1. Find 3 main ideas and rate from strong to strongest 2. Write the introduction en-us 2017-10-23 06:56:11 UTC 2017-10-23 08:49:51 UTC hello@padlet.com Kento https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199459875  Homework is a big problem for students because homework change the lifestyle of them. However, homework is also an important way to study. I disagree that homework should be banned in school because of the need to remember the classes, being able to learn with my pace, knowing what I do not understand.
 First,  I disagree that homework should be banned in school because of the need to remember the classes. Basically, people cannot remember what I learned in the classes because we need to repeat the content of the classes.  For example, sometimes we do not answer the content that I learned yesterday. Moreover, if we do not do the homework, we forget almost all of contents in the exam. Thus, I disagree that homework should be banned in school because of the need to remember the classes. 
 Second,  I disagree that homework should be banned in school because of being able to learn with my pace. Almost all students do the homework without teacher. It means they can learn with my pace. For example, some students that feels the pace of classes is fast or slow can recover or prepare the content of the classes to do the homework. In addition, the way to do homework also depend on them. Hence, I disagree that homework should be banned in school because of being able to learn with my pace.
  Supporters of the statement stated that homework is done by those who do not understand the content of the classes. However, I strongly disagree that homework should be banned in school because of knowing what I do not understand. Students can know the reason why they cannot the answer. For  example, We can ask someone who is good at studying when they do  the homework. In addition, they cannot do such a thing in the classes. Thus, I disagree that homework should be banned in school because of knowing what I do not understand. 
In conclusion, I disagree that homework should be banned in school because of the need to remember the classes, being able to learn with my pace, knowing what I do not understand. Doing homework leads you to get good scores in the exam. 
]]> 2017-10-23 06:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199459875 TAKURO https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199459993      Most students may have an experience that suffering from massive homework they have to do. In those days, there are arguments about significance of homework.  So, I mention that homework should not be banned in school because of enforcing efficient education, making a habit to study on one's own, and growing independent student. 

     First of all, I think homework is necessary because of enforcing efficient education. Students have each speed or pace to understand classes, so homework can adjust their degree of understanding. If some students need more time to understand in class, doing homework slowly can help to catch up with class in school. Also teacher does not have to take care of those students in class. That is why I think homework should be needed in school.

     In addition, because of making a habit to study on one's own, I insist that homework is important for school. Trying to find solution by oneself is significant in studying. In general, a lot of students tend to do homework alone in their house. This acting makes their habit to study by themselves. If they study on only the class, they would not be able to improve themselves by their own. Therefore, I agree with homework.

     Moreover, in order to grow independent students, homework should be exist. Finishing and submitting homework are very important for not only getting knowledge but also being polite in society. Homework have definitely deadline. Avoiding to be overdue can formalize steady personality of students. It can be connected to grow independent students. Being punctual is necessary to do task in society. For this reason, homework should be enforced in school. 

     In conclusion, I insist that homework should not be banned in school. So, government and school administrators should keep in enforce homework to grow students to become good in every aspects of life.

]]> 2017-10-23 06:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199459993 Yu https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460274 Currently , the number of women working is increasing in the world.But,it is difficult for women to balance  family and childcare.Recent women choose working.I agree women should stay at home instead of working. Women have different ideas from men.I think that will change by incorporating  women ideas.For example , president of women is active in Europe. She does politics from a women point of view.

First ,An environment where women can work comfortably is coming up.For example ,there are infant facilities in the company, some companies have introduced childcare leave.All of these are ideas developed so that  women are comfortable to work.

Second,women can work as their fathers cooperate in mothers' child rearing .Men must also do house work from on now.Do not impose a heavy burden on just women.We have to lose stereotypes.

In addition,also government should promote working women.And I think that the world will change toward peaceful .But it has only been penetrated in some areas.

In conclusion ,I  agree that  
women should stay at home instead of working because of women have good ideas.I think that we should work equally between men and women from on now.Then a new idea will be born again .

That's all.
]]> 2017-10-23 06:59:17 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460274 Yuta https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460279 It is difficult to do housework while working. So, many women are retired and stay at home to do house working. But in my opinion, many women want to continue working their company. Government should change the system for women can live comfortable. I do not agree that women should stay at home instead of working.

In conclusion, I do not agree that women should stay at home instead of working. Because government has to make low. For example, to give much money, to establish many kindergarten and so on. If government decide to make lows, women can get a job easily after  having a baby. And men can help  his wife.  So, many women can have a good life. ]]> 2017-10-23 06:59:20 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460279 YU https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460284   Gun is one of the dangerous weapons in the world,because of if you want to kill someone, you can kill easily. In my opinion, everyone heard that gun news every year. So I agree that gun possession should be legalised, because of decrease crimes, children's good influence and more safety.
  Firstly, decrease crimes. Some country people who possess gun, like America do not think decrease crime,because they hold themselves gun, so they can protect themselves without policeman. However I do not think too, because  people who have not gun are more safety than people who have gun , if gun possession abolition.
  Secondly, children's influence. I think that children need safety, because they cannot think about good thing    
or bad thing. Especially, having gun children. So children is dangerous, if country admit gun possession.
  Finally, even though gun possession
brings positive effects , there is one negative effect which is more safety social. As you know, The United State
occurred gun incident a lot. In my opinion, if gun possession abolish, social is more safety, because ordinary people do not have gun. For example, neighbors.
Thus, I think that gun possession need to abolish for safety.

In conclusion, I still agree that gun possession should be legalised,because of decrease crimes, children's good influence and more safety. I think that those countries would be more safety, if gun possession were abolition.  ]]> 2017-10-23 06:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460284 Yuki https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460512 Currently, the number of woman working in the office. Some people may believe that women should stay at home instead of working but, if woman hope that I want to work outside , we should help for women that they can succeed in their jobs . 
And I think this opinion is old . Because, the women president can be born in some country .so ,I do not agree this opinion.

In conclusion , I still do not agree that the woman should be work on inside for family. because of it is not equal.  I think that senior generation have mostly this opinion .and I think the education have a reason for this problem.so , I suggest that we should be change education .                                                                                                                                                            ]]> 2017-10-23 07:00:38 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460512 Masa https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460537  Homework is good for students to study.
 However Homework is one of compulsion.Students are obliged to do homework. Mom says ''Do homework now!'' This words make son boring. studying must be positive.
 Therefore ,I agree that homework should be banned in school.

First, students can manage their time.If school ban homework, students can get many free time. To manage time leads to their future.

In conclusion, I still agree that homework should be banned in school because  students can manage their time, they can find their hobby and studying becomes interesting.
Even though school compels students to do homework,   school should  suggest more interesting ways to students enjoy.]]> 2017-10-23 07:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460537 Daichi https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460602   Working women are accompanied with various problems. However, working women also play a major role. I disagree that women should stay at home instead of working. because I can't understand that many men are allowed to work although women doesn't allowed to work. 

In conclusion,I still disagree that women should stay at home instead of working because of I think women also have the right to work freely, genderless society and possible to work diversified.]]> 2017-10-23 07:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460602 Yusuke https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460690 In the world, a lot of woman]]> 2017-10-23 07:01:31 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199460690 Taichi https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199461314  For a long time, students have fought with something. It is homework. Student always think how to face it, and some of them come up with doing and finishing homework in their school. However, the school banned students from doing homework.I disagree that homework should be banned because of saving time, learning to control a schedule by themselves, and self-study.

 First, saving time is a reason why homework should not be banned in school. Students finish their homework in order to do other things. For example, students, especially junior high school and high school, have something a lot of things to do such as club activity, committee , so if  homework cannot be done in school, they cannot do anything. Without homework at home, they can have more times.Thus, saving time is a reason why homework should not be banned in school. 
 
Second, it is main reason for students to learn to control a schedule by themselves. In school, It is sure that hanging out and talking with friends are important, but studying is also needed. By doing homework, students understand importance of planning for studying and learn how to use their times.Therefore,

In conclusion,I still disagree that homework  should be banned because of saving time, learning to control a schedule by themselves, and self-study.  a lot of things students do can be  increased by finishing homework in school  
 
]]> 2017-10-23 07:05:16 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199461314 Mika https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199461530 For students, homework is very important part of study. If they do not have their homework, they have free time. Then, most students play video games, watch TV, go outside and so on. Although it is sure good for students, there are some possibility of wasting what they learned in their class. I disagree homework should be banned in school because of not forgetting what they learned the day, switching their mind between studying and playing and improving their scholarly ability.
First, the reason why I disagree that the homework should be banned in school is not to forget what they learned in their class the day. Remembrance is difficult for most people because

In conclusion, I still disagree that homework should be banned in schools because of not forgetting what they learned the day in their class, switching their mind between studying and playing and improving their scholarly ability. The more they do their homework, the better their knowledge. If they do not like doing homework, after that they can eat dinner, sleep well, spend with their family and so on. ]]> 2017-10-23 07:06:41 UTC https://padlet.com/raidalina88/Kanagawa8/wish/199461530