1. Do you agree or disagree?

2. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

3. What do you think of the view?

4. What is your opinion?

paraphrase of the background.

In my opinion/ To my mind/ To the best of my knowledge/ As far as I am concerned, OPINION [= AGREE/ DISAGREE; APPROVE OF/ DISAPPROVE OF; CONCUR WITH THE VIEW/THE BELIEF; IN FAVOUR OF/ AGAINST STH],

*and reasons for my stance will be discussed in this essay/

* for reasons which will be discussed below.

* on the grounds of NP [=reason 1] and NP [reason 2]

II. BODY:

 Main body paragraph 1

• Topic sentence – outline 1st reason for supporting this view

• Explanation – explain this idea

• Example – give an example or expand the idea

Main body paragraph 2

• Topic sentence – outline 2nd reason for supporting this view

• Explanation – explain this idea

• Example – give an example or expand the idea

  
  

  III. Conclusion

• Summarise opinion and key reasons. (60%)

• SUGGESTION/PREDICTION

In my opinion, I concur with the above-mentioned view/ observation....

• for reasons which will be discussed below.

• on the grounds of ....... ............

• and reasons for this will be discussed in this essay

In my opinion the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Meanwhile online shopping has become increasingly popular

In my opinion the rise of online shopping has undoubtedly pry into all shops in some structures

The second primary reasons behind the growing popularity of online shopping are the fact that people can easily track the origin, product name and more options at the same time faster and wider on online sites.

(ONLINE ADVERTISING) For example, some social networking platforms today are also promoting their products such as Facebook Tiktok youtube.

Another one is COVID-19 , WHICH highlightS the significance of online shopping when lockdowns prompted people to rely heavily on their needs. This shift in consumer behaviour accelerated the growth of online shopping and demonstrated its potential to replace traditional shopping methods in the future.

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Another factor is the UNDENIABLE impact of ONLINE shopping apps SUCH AS SHOPEE. Their ability of advertising and introducing new products is BY FAR better and more convenient than shops in cities. It is clear that they can make trends that attract customers, especially young ones. For instance (coin cake/ a certain brand of sneakers: advertised => must-try or must-buy item)

For example , sneakers will be famous and appeared in many social networkS . This leads to customers will see regularly and have impression in .

Furthermore, consumers are more comfortable with choosing products ONLINE. For example, many STUDIES HAVE researchs showN that many people prefer shopping oline beacause they feel dissatisfied with THE ATTITUDES OF BRICK-AND-MORTAR STORES' STAFF . WHEN SHOPPING ONLINE, CUSTOMERS can buy A PRODUCT or not if they find product unsuitable without HAVING TO LISTEN TO complainTS from strore owner or staff.

First of all,the most important reason is the convenienCE of online shopping. NowadayS, air pollution and global warming is POSING GREAT THREATS TO MANKIND. developing,and With shopping in the Internet,you DO NOT need to go out the bad condition of air and wether. Instead, you just need to stay at your home and wait for the shipper.

Another significant factor to consider is cost and time.When you go shopping in shops, you need to spend lots of time to move and money for fuel. You can THEREFORE use your time more effectively by online shopping and only spend a little money for shipping.

To conclude, PERSONALLY, online shopping will replace shops in cities and town one day because of its OBVIOUS BENEFITS/ MERITS. convenient,saving time and money

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in summary, the presence of discount codes on beloved shopping platforms is great experience. these odes not only save money for shoppers but also save time