Success Criteria for Outstanding Writing by Felicity Archer

Will and Kieran

5FA — 2015-04-17 08:10:39 UTC

Try to use sophisticated connectives like however, nevertheless or although rather than and, but or so.

Jay Katelyn

2015-04-17 09:32:25 UTC

ONLY use and, but or so IF ABSLOUTLY NECESSARY!

Riley

2015-04-17 09:38:51 UTC

Try to use expanded similes to extend your sentence.

Sebastian

2015-04-17 09:39:10 UTC

Only use and in lists

You could use complex sentences maybe 2 or 3 simple

Up level words

Use nouns , verbs and phrases

Harvey

2015-04-17 09:39:27 UTC

And, but, or so unless you can't think of anything else

Charlie and Morgan

2015-04-17 09:39:44 UTC

Use sophisticated connective such as although, nevertheless.

use

Noah and Kieron

2015-04-17 09:39:58 UTC

Expanded similes:

As tall as a giraffe, stretching.

Metaphor:

He was an eagle, fling through the sky.

Neve and Callum.D

2015-04-17 09:40:32 UTC

We are going to improve a paragraph:

Although the rest of the guests were distressed, it had been the shortest stick the whole time, not the longest. So that had given the thief away. How had this happened? How did the clever judge know which one was the thief?

Charlie and Mia

2015-04-17 09:40:43 UTC

Only use and,but and so when you can't think or use anything else

and if you can use something else use it!

Callum S

2015-04-17 09:41:57 UTC

Use connectives ,adverbs adjectives.

Will and Kieran

2015-04-17 09:42:03 UTC

Movement verbs, complex sentences, embedded clauses, similes with expanded nouns.

Jay and Katelyn

2015-04-17 09:42:29 UTC

Make sure you use connectives e.g after all, nevertheless, thus, despite as well as although

Nicole and Dale

2015-04-17 09:42:34 UTC

Try to use complex sentences, complex sentences make your writing better as they add detail.

Riley

2015-04-17 09:44:51 UTC

Complex sentences give you more information and extend your senten

Kieron and Noah

2015-04-17 09:45:35 UTC

Semi colons:

He was huge, with large wings; He was huge, with enormous teeth.

Jessica and Caine

2015-04-17 09:46:09 UTC

Use sophisticated connectives or embed clauses within sentences.

Callum S

2015-04-17 09:48:48 UTC

Settings

Movement verbs e.g swallow

Connectives e.g furthermore

Adverbs e.g Truly

Adjectives e.g frasty

speech verbs e.g Uttered

Mia and Charlie C

2015-04-17 09:48:49 UTC

Use a variety of punctuation to impact the flow of the story whilst adding suspense.

Morgan and Charlie.A

2015-04-17 09:49:19 UTC

metaphor: white blanket of snow covered the hill

Jay and Katelyn

2015-04-17 09:49:44 UTC

Use adverbs to up-level sentences as this will give us a higher level in our writing by adding more detail whilst telling the reader more.

Amber & Paris

2015-04-17 09:51:01 UTC

Use alliteration as well as sophisticated nouns/verbs to up level your work.

Callum

2015-04-17 09:58:17 UTC

Description writing.