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      <pubDate>2018-03-26 18:26:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Red Room&nbsp;Productions</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Hannah Halim&nbsp;<br>Tom Burns</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-03-26 18:29:01 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>GENRE</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Psychological thriler</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-03-26 18:29:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>PRODUCTION TITLE</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Cult</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2018-03-26 18:29:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>CHARACTERS</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Sienna Williams</strong>- SHORT IN HEIGHT,  CURLY BROWN HAIR, BROWN EYES. She is the hero of the story as she finds herself up against a cult, the leader being one of her teachers. The final straw for the teenage girl is when she is betrayed by her best friend who choses to join the cult instead of helping her. Therefore, Sienna makes it her job to single-handedly take down the cult before they recruit anyone else. She is brave and selfless and only wants to help save her best friend before things get too much out of hand. <br><br><strong>George Jacobson</strong>- TALL IN HEIGHT, LONG BLACK HAIR, BROWN EYES. George is the best friend of Sienna Williams up until the very moment he his brainwashed by the idea of joining the cult. Someone who used to be kind and generous (and sometimes quite dramatic) becomes unrecognisable to Sienna. However, he still wants what he thinks is best for his friend and makes it his duty to recruit her into the cult.<br><br><strong>Mr Cole</strong>- TALL, SHORT BLONDE HAIR, BLUE EYES, INTIMIDATING. Mr Cole turns out to be a notorious cult leader, wanting to convert innocent minds to support his ideals of a cleansed world. He is ruthless, wanting only to get his own way and achieve his goals. When Sienna becomes a shadow on his brightly-lit path there are to alternatives. She either joins the cult or is sacrificed.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>SYPNOSIS</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Act 1<br>Sienna Williams attends her last lesson of the term before the summer holidays; English with fairly new teacher Mr Cole. He had began working at their school just over a month ago although their had been rumours that he had been fired from his last school. Sienna and her friend George enter the classroom, taking a seat at the back at the classroom in their usual seats although they find themselves confused as the whiteboard is filled with odd symbols and writing. Mr Cole is frantically writing on the board whilst the rest of the class walks in seemingly ignorant to the odd happenings in the classroom. The bell finally goes, alerting Mr Cole that the lesson is beginning. He turns around slowly, his face stoic and erasing all emotion from his face. Clearing his throat he begins a strange monologue on the evils of the world and the need for a new and cleansed world. Sienna frowns as she believes this will be a lesson with minimal work and finds herself disarmed what Mr Cole is saying, whilst George has a strange glimmer in his eye. He is entranced by his teacher's words and finds himself following in the footsteps of the other pupils as they line up, collecting balaclavas from Mr Cole. Sienna asks him what is happening but he merely holds a hand out to her, telling her to join them. The students are seen putting on the balaclavas with pentagrams on the head, setting up some sort of ritual, when Sienna manages to escape the classroom, ignoring the angered shouts from Mr Cole and George. Mr Cole turns to George, anger evident on his face as he clenches his jaw. He turns to George and shouts "You said she would comply!". George tries to reassure Mr Cole that he will fix things and make sure that she joins the cult as to which Mr Cole gives him an alternative; either Sienna joins the cult, or she is sacrificed. George quickly nods before leaving the room, on a search for his friend.<br><br>Act 2&nbsp;<br>&nbsp;The corridors are empty as the final bell of the day has already chimed. George sees a glimpse of Sienna in the canteen and slowly approaches when she too sees him and breaks into a run. She runs down an empty, bright lit corridor, hiding around a barely concealed corner before George also briskly walks down the corridor. Sienna holds her breath, as she hides away from her friend. Luckily, George walks past her without a second glance, his view facing forwards as he is determined to find her. George glances up and down corridors, trying to spot a glimpse of the brunette to no avail. Finally, just as he is about to give up, he spots her, standing by the front doors with her back to him. He immediately starts towards her, attracting her attention as she glances towards him before running. She runs to the nearest stairwell, clambering and falling up them as George strides towards her, calling her name "Sienna, you will die if you don't accept membership of our cult.". Sienna ignores him, getting to the top of the stairs, however, she feels herself being pulled backwards as George latches onto her hair. The pair struggle at the top of the stairs, Sienna almost falls backwards down the stairs when George manages to steady her, not really wanting any harm to come to her. Sienna manages to rip free, turning to face George with anger on her face and she shouts "don't you see what's happening?! Cult's aren't all fun and games, George, people die." George's face becomes dark as he relays the cult ideals of a pure world. Sienna pushes George away from her and she runs.<br><br>Act 3<br>Sienna hides in the drama classrooms, theatre lights being her only source of light as she sits in the dark shadows, hiding. She left all her belongings in the classroom when she ran and so has no way of contacting anybody. Running her hand through her hair, she thinks of possible scenarios in which she can survive. She knows that she will die if she bumps into any of the cult members and therefore she cannot get help. Meanwhile, Mr Cole becomes impatient, if the girl somehow escapes, then the cult will be finished. When George returns empty-handed, he only becomes angrier, throwing a chair across the classroom. He then orders the remaining members to search for the missing girl. The others leave and Mr Cole and George are left alone. The teacher is mad as he shouts at George, grabbing him by the back of the neck as he shouts and George cries out in pain. Mr Cole threatens him "if this girl is not found, I will be holding you accountable for all failures. We need a sacrifice and if it isn't the girl, it is you." George is shocked at the revelation that Sienna was intended as a sacrifice all along and not just a recruited member. Scared and alone, George leaves the room, looking for Sienna. Though this time, he wants to help her escape rather than hunt her down. Luckily, as he and Sienna are best friends, he has an idea of where she might be.&nbsp;<br><br>Act 4<br>Heading to the drama room, George slowly enters, making sure no one sees him going inside. He makes sure to be silent, not wanting Sienna to be alerted of his presence. A few years prior, both George and Sienna had hidden behind the drama room curtains from an older group of students a few years above and had done so for multiple lunchtimes until the students left the school. Knowing Sienna would be hiding in the exact same spot, George whispers her name "Sienna?". There is no answer, yet George knows she is here, he senses it even. "I know you're here. You were right. And I'm sorry, I thought it would be good for us, to be part of the cult and finally stick up for ourselves. But I was wrong and Mr Cole isn't the type of person I thought he was. I-I'm sorry." Standing in the middle of the room, under the spotlight stands George, waiting for some sort of response. After a few minutes, he sighs about to leave the room when Sienna emerges, running up to him with her arms wide. Thinking she is about to hug him, George too opens his arms, a grin on his face. However, Sienna punches him hard, in the jaw and he falls to the ground, in a sitting position. "Sorry Georgie, you were an amazing friend all these years, but you've always been too gullible." George's eyes widen in shock as Sienna reveals that she has been a part of the cult all along. The whole cat and mouse game had been a plan to use George as their sacrifice. Sienna explains how George has the innocence needed for the sacrifice and kisses his forehead before another member of the cult comes up behind him and hits him around the head, causing him to fall unconscious onto the floor.<br><br>Act 5<br>George wakes up in the school auditorium, bright lights shining into his eyes as he realises he is on the stage, his hands hound beneath him as he sits on a chair. The chair is situated in the middle of a pentagram, candles places at each point of the star. George begins to panic, struggling against his constraints as he attempts to get free. He freezes when he hears the chilling laugh of Mr Cole sound out behind him. "finally awake" he comes to stand in front of George, hands on his hips <br><br></div>]]></description>
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