https://padlet.com/24gsweeney/m9m40zncsee7 Thank you for leaving feedback. Please make it constructive :) en-us 2018-12-05 17:13:21 UTC 2024-10-15 23:21:43 UTC hello@padlet.com 24cwidder https://padlet.com/24gsweeney/m9m40zncsee7/wish/312315731 what up Grace I loved your vignette it was really interesting I like how you added dialogue to the beginning of the story. Another star I have is that your characterization was really intriguing and it was really good how you described the characters. One wish I can give you is too add more on what the story is about in the beginning so the reader knows what is going on. - Colin Widder]]> 2018-12-07 16:58:23 UTC https://padlet.com/24gsweeney/m9m40zncsee7/wish/312315731 24tcino https://padlet.com/24gsweeney/m9m40zncsee7/wish/312320252 Hey Grace, I loved reading your suspense narrative! It has great word choice, sentence structure, and figurative language. I wish that you continue to use vivid word choice in the future, like you did in this piece. Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Tara C]]> 2018-12-07 17:07:22 UTC https://padlet.com/24gsweeney/m9m40zncsee7/wish/312320252 24dresnicoff https://padlet.com/24gsweeney/m9m40zncsee7/wish/312328187 Grace, your vignette was famtastic you used great]]> 2018-12-07 17:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/24gsweeney/m9m40zncsee7/wish/312328187