https://padlet.com/27iburdick/m87wpvptn9ycmz7q I hope you enjoyed my writing piece! Please leave some kind and helpful comments. en-us 2021-01-12 15:57:09 UTC 2021-01-29 19:13:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://cdn.pixabay.com/photo/2012/04/18/03/53/write-36784_960_720.png 27acholar https://padlet.com/27iburdick/m87wpvptn9ycmz7q/wish/1141138126 Wassup! I thought that was so suspenseful and intriguing. I especially loved the feelings throughout the story. I can easily picture how scared you were. I would be the same way. Another thing that stood out to me was at the end when you said “ I felt like someone just used their magic powers and healed all my troubles and worries. It’s hard to make a wish in this story but if I had to it would be when you got inside how you were feeling and how your family was feeling. Overall it was amazing 🤩]]> 2021-01-29 15:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/27iburdick/m87wpvptn9ycmz7q/wish/1141138126 27kbrennan https://padlet.com/27iburdick/m87wpvptn9ycmz7q/wish/1142135248 Hey Isabella!What an interesting story about your dog Sirius. I cant believe that if I was in that situation I would feel the same way and would be scared to death. I love how you wrote about what the people driving had in their minds and how you wrote about if they care about your dog or not. I also love when your dog came back and how you were talking to him when Sirius came back to you. I liked the figurative language that you used in that part saying how much you love him and describing how dirty he was. Maybe next time you can add more details about when Sirius was running off and maybe add about what he was thinking and what was going on in his head, But overall I loved this story about Sirius and I can't wait to read more stories of yours.

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