https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d Oh boi en-us 2017-05-18 19:30:08 UTC 2017-05-18 19:49:06 UTC hello@padlet.com joshuacloar https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172676607 There is a very colorful use of langue. Used great creativity to describe the theme

]]> 2017-05-18 19:38:49 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172676607 russell_elizabeth https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172676872 Strong imagery!!! Love the repetition: the world, the world, the world. powerful!]]> 2017-05-18 19:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172676872 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677062 -Very expressive talking
-several pop culture references which helps Poem become relatable]]> 2017-05-18 19:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677062 hall_garion15 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677096 great repetition: the world...... the world......
connection to real life
dark imagery turned into a happier tone.
I loved the references: Hunger Games, Divergent,  Fahrenheit 451, etc]]> 2017-05-18 19:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677096 desous_kayla12 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677266 The descriptions of all the different potential realities set the tone well]]> 2017-05-18 19:42:16 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677266 karakeyserling https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677296 flowed very well
very expressive changes in your voice
made eye contact]]> 2017-05-18 19:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677296 brewer_josie18 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677301 I loved the description you used, it took me to a new place. Made me imagine a new future, and want to fight for it ]]> 2017-05-18 19:42:27 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677301 olson_abigai16 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677305 Eye opening ]]> 2017-05-18 19:42:30 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677305 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677312 Great job. I especially like the allusion to popular culture such as Divergent and Wall-E (Eeevaaa).]]> 2017-05-18 19:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677312 harrin_mckenn31 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677322 Great language and imagery, used a lot of repition and refrences, call to action]]> 2017-05-18 19:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677322 karakeyserling https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677396 Incredible use of alliteration.]]> 2017-05-18 19:43:05 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677396 parris_sydney19 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677448 Very strong and really made me think. I liked how passionate you were about it. ]]> 2017-05-18 19:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677448 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677482 i thought you had a great tone, and great allusion.

]]> 2017-05-18 19:43:36 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677482 perrin_naomi09 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677504 Poem had a good flow with great expression]]> 2017-05-18 19:43:44 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677504 https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677612 Powerful
Good references]]> 2017-05-18 19:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/deaver_lindse19/m4l8xcclkz0d/wish/172677612