(7B) DO NOW Padlet: How Can You Make A Thesis Claim More Complex? by Dario Sulzman https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l We've talked about this in a previous class, but you may have some of your own strategies that you've learned in other classes. Today we're going to work on revising our Rhetorical Analysis claims. Specifically, to make them more interesting. So, what are some techniques or strategies that you have to make your thesis statements complex and engaging, as opposed to simplistic and obvious? en-us 2024-11-15 15:58:41 UTC 2025-08-18 04:26:33 UTC hello@padlet.com Noah Vega 1060614 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219225906 Extensive vocabulary

]]> 2024-11-15 16:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219225906 Dominique https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219226285 Strong vocabulary and grammar

Relating to the audience

Creating a sense of understanding

Not being biased/ aggressive

]]> 2024-11-15 16:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219226285 Mohamad Orabi https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219228474 Strong words and adding more info.

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]]> 2024-11-15 16:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219228677 Alex https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219229063 Figurative Vocabulary and focusing specifically on the theme at hand instead of sidetracking towards something else.

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]]> 2024-11-15 16:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219229333 Juaquin Orozco https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219229587 Compulsive writing and more stronger grammar

]]> 2024-11-15 16:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219229587 dyani https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219229656 a “who, what, when, where, why, and how” or a quote so my audience can refer to what proposition im trying to make

]]> 2024-11-15 16:16:35 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219229656 Jacdelyn McAdams https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/m3y24fdgqllmuo2l/wish/3219231608 A thesis claim could become stronger by providing just enough information for the reader to be able to illustrate/understand the text, and adding a non-bias statement can allow the reader to create their own understanding.

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