by Jennifer Panarelli https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h en-us 2013-05-29 12:19:56 UTC 2013-05-29 12:22:06 UTC hello@padlet.com http://d2s8n7nv9yizdf.cloudfront.net/assets/thmbs/pocketwatch-2a3725ea7ac1b5c8a343b6abbc66f31e.jpg jpanarelli02 https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10338461 Create your own text box/sticky note. Within your note, tell me your name and where you need the most help on your paper. Example:

Betsy Sue I need help with my conclusion. I don't know what else to write in addition to my restated thesis.

]]> 2013-05-29 12:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10338461 Patrick Mccareter https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371757 i have to add in more information 

into my paper

]]> 2013-05-30 12:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371757 Avery Colby https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371845 My body paragraph s don't end with good conclusions.

]]> 2013-05-30 12:48:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371845 Gavin Reilly (Achebe ) https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371859 I don't have any transition words in my essay. I don't really know how

to use them in this kind of writing.

]]> 2013-05-30 12:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371859 Kate Zeliff https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371876 i need help with my transitions and adding quotes and also transitioning to the next paragraph. my concluding statement i dont know what to rightabout

]]> 2013-05-30 12:49:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371876 Luke A. https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371885 I need help with the citations and end of my conclusion

]]> 2013-05-30 12:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371885 andrew mcneish  https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371897 i need help with parenthetical citations

]]> 2013-05-30 12:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371897 i dont have any good facts about her. and its hard to get history and stuff anout her since she is a modern day writer https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371900 meagan

]]> 2013-05-30 12:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371900 Taylor Tambolleo https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371924 i need more help on writing my citations and where put them .

i also think i need to be more carefully with run ons

]]> 2013-05-30 12:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371924 Doug https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371931 2013-05-30 12:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371931 Douglas Bianco https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371932 2013-05-30 12:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371932 D https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371933 I need help with my introduction and first body paragraph

]]> 2013-05-30 12:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371933 Brian Olson https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371962 I need help writing my conclusion. I actually did not include one in my essay so I need to ad one but I cant figure out what to say.

]]> 2013-05-30 12:52:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371962 Andrew Vittorioso https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371994 I need help with fixing my thesis statement and adding a few conclusion sentences.

]]> 2013-05-30 12:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10371994 Jessica Shepple https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10372001 I need help with leading into my quotes in the three body paragraphs. Also what to add in my comclusion.

]]> 2013-05-30 12:53:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10372001 Abigail Bernklow https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10372050 In my author essay, the areas where I need help the most is in my conclusion

connecting to the larger world. Another area is the body paragraphs with the conclusion sentences

]]> 2013-05-30 12:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10372050 JOHN MPELKAS https://padlet.com/jpanarelli02/m2t68uwl2h/wish/10372067 First paragraph i was told from my peer editor everything els good

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