CID3 Peer Feedback - 3 Aug 2023 by CID https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p en-us 2023-08-03 01:20:50 UTC 2023-08-03 06:47:23 UTC hello@padlet.com Peer Feedback rvhscid https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655114364 2023-08-03 01:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655114364 Grp 42 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655263673 Game is fun, especially the part where it's inspired by Geometry dash. But it would be better to let people piece the chinese idioms themselves rather than let it be given.

How does it help them learn chinese? Is it through exposure? How are you sure that this will improve their chinese]]> 2023-08-03 05:56:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655263673 grp 43 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655263967 - maybe you could add some translation features so students at a lower level of chinese can learn the meaning of the words/phrases
-How will you ensure that students will play the game- Most students who dislike chinese dont reallly want to do anything related to chinese :( 
-will this be used by teachers or is it just for students to use 
-I like that your product has many different features and levels for different students :) 
]]> 2023-08-03 05:57:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655263967 Group 44 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655264097 Clarify: What would make the users want to mentor someone? 

Value: We like the features and how appealing the app is. 

Concern: Right now the website seems very engaging and fun because of how iy is gameified, but how do you ensure that they are learning and not just playing it for all the fun elements?

Suggestions: Expand beyond learning just phrases.

]]> 2023-08-03 05:57:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655264097 Group 40 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655264251 - It is very interactive which keeps the user intrigued and engaged to keep using the website
- What is the story mode about?
- Why are the levels called y, y-1 etc.
- You can integrate other features that can bring out aspects of oral, listening compre etc. ]]> 2023-08-03 05:57:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655264251 grp 41 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655264306 -the game is interactive. This can ensure that students will pay attention and attract students to use it which is good.
-translations can be added as this is a website where people can learn chinese so some of them may be learning from scratch
 ]]> 2023-08-03 05:57:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655264306 grp 43 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655266834 -> i like how you added a "game" function to encourage people to save money 
-> would people want to reveal their spendings/savings to their friends tho (?) [ eg people may be self conscious about their finances
-> giving discounts for bubble tea is a bit strange, maybe you can discount for things like stationery instead since stationery is more essential
]]> 2023-08-03 06:04:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655266834 grp 44 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655267116 - how does the app track the payment (is it through online or physical payment etc?) 
- very appealing and organised design
- how are they going to ensure that the users keep up with the app? coz they can have the app but dont use it (eg can send reminders etc)

]]> 2023-08-03 06:05:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655267116 Grp 42 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655267251 The app interface functions are quite comprehensive. I like the colour combination and design of the interface. How will the leaderboard for who can save money work? What if people starve themselves in order to save money? Is the goal trying to help people save money better or to help them spend as little money as possible?
App interface font isn't really suitable.]]> 2023-08-03 06:05:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655267251 grp 41 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655267631 -some people might not be comfortable sharing their savings with others as it is a private and sensitive thing
- app functions are explained well and a lot of designs to attract users to use it.
- what is the exact goal of the app]]> 2023-08-03 06:06:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655267631 group 39 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655267674 - does the leader board give any benefits besides motivation such as more discount?
- i really like the design because it is very easy to keep track of savings
- I wonder if people might cheat by lying about how much they spend in order to get higher on the leader board
- make people take picture of receipt to ensure that they are not lying]]> 2023-08-03 06:06:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655267674 grp 39 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655270228 - how would one make such a complicated mechanism 
- i like the idea of tracking points to incentivise people to throw rubbish properly
- what happens if something inside malfunctions? how to fix it?
-simplify design more so that it is more feasible to carry out]]> 2023-08-03 06:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655270228 grp 44 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655270311 - not sure how they will implement it because it's like a whole system 
- the drawing was very detailed 
- can elaborate more on how the whole system works ]]> 2023-08-03 06:13:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655270311 grp 43 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655270389 ->what types of materials can be thrown in 
-> I like that you provide awards for people so incentivise them to throw their trash into the bin
-> where are you going to implement this- how big will this machine be
->i like the idea and the science behind it :)
-> who will these "plastic" bags be given to ?
-> maybe you can consider turning it into other different products 
-> is this new "bag" biodegradable
]]> 2023-08-03 06:13:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655270389 Grp 42 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655270654 Good effort in trying to combine all these aspects into one machine

What is the reward system used for?-->is it for buying some stuff. What if people intentionally throw extra rubbish in. How is pollution treated? Will it be released in the residential zone? If so, it will harm residents' health a lot.]]> 2023-08-03 06:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655270654 Group 40 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655271037 - Constantly burning these plastic waste will create a lot of toxic fumes that you are releasing into the air?
- Most of Singapore has high population density. Maybe it could be at places like beaches, parks etc. 
- There may not be enough electricity to perform what you intend if you are planning to use solar panel to power it. In that case you would have to consider the location of the bins as well to ensure they are able to get strong sunlight
- There are many details that you guys have come up with 

]]> 2023-08-03 06:14:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655271037 Group 40 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655274307 - Well thought through presentation though could have been executed better
- Why is the target audience only teenagers?

]]> 2023-08-03 06:21:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655274307 grp 43 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655274454 ->i like how the workouts are personalised 
-> is it really okay if the notifications are shut off?- maybe you could add a feature that would allow you to get notifications from certain people or maybe just shut off the more distracting apps( eg games)
-> i think the leaderboard system will be a good incentive for people to exercise 

]]> 2023-08-03 06:21:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655274454 grp 44 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655274794 - app is very creative, has many elements that are appealing to other people
- as long as the user follows what the app is instructing them to do it's feasible 
- how is the app different from every other app]]> 2023-08-03 06:22:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655274794 grp 41 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655275176 -it is innovative and the planning is detailed
-i think that maybe the target audience can be expanded to more groups as this not only can benefit teenagers but i think can benefit everyone



]]> 2023-08-03 06:23:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655275176 grp 39 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655275378 -how to score more points
-i like the design of the app and how it is gamifies
- how would the app track if people actually exercised
- maybe you could connect the app to smart watch to track people's bp and heart rate to make sure they're exercising and at the correct intensity ]]> 2023-08-03 06:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655275378 Grp 42 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655276098 It's very creative that ya'll try to combine all of the systems into one place. What is the purpose of the reward points? There is a risk of pollution from the incinerator as the gas is being released into a residential zone.]]> 2023-08-03 06:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655276098 grp 44 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655279357 - do i experience getting neglected if i choose to play as a dog? 
- game interface is nice and engaging 
- well thought out, how to popularise etc  ]]> 2023-08-03 06:32:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655279357 Group 40 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655279801 - Well thought through game ;)
- Maybe you can include other types of "Characters" like animals that may have behavioural issues, those of old age etc.
- This game may help to build on the empathy that people have for these animals but it may not really encourage people to adopt? Very good for spreading awareness though]]> 2023-08-03 06:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655279801 Grp 42 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655280060 The interface is slightly blockly and gives the impression of minecraft. Very creative. How does it exactly work to reduce stigma against helping animals?]]> 2023-08-03 06:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655280060 grp 39 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655280330 - if the cat gets adopted does the game continue or does it just end there
- games look very fun and attractive to play
- how can you make sure people actually empathise with the cat instead of just playing the game for fun
-make more different animal scenarios eg dog with three legs]]> 2023-08-03 06:34:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655280330 grp 41 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655280356 -game is innovative and well planned. it is interactive as well
- how are you so sure that it will help encourage more people to adopt animals? it may just be bringing awareness to them but they may not want to adopt]]> 2023-08-03 06:34:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655280356 grp 43 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655285253 ->we like how the game is educational for children
->we like how your game is very engaging 
-> do people really play board games nowadays- would children want to play this game :(
-> will this game be used in schools to educate children about their digital usage??
-> how will they know if their answer is suitable for the discussion part 
]]> 2023-08-03 06:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655285253 grp 39 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655285775 - how will you price this board game
- I really like the design of the game and it looks very fun to play with
- i wonder if the lengthiness of instructions might cause some people to be confused about how to play the game
- i think that you can add more elements such as targeting other players to make the game more interesting]]> 2023-08-03 06:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655285775 Grp 42 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655286029 Very creative. The boardgame is simple but effective. Can show an example of how the cards are going to be like. Are all the cards going to talk about how using too much phone is bad? Is there any difference between the good energy cards and event cards?]]> 2023-08-03 06:46:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655286029 grp 41 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655286597 -this board game is good as it can educate ad teach young children
-will the board game come at an expensive cost? this game is meant to teach and educate young children so im not sure how much it will cost but hopefully not too expensive for those under privileged families]]> 2023-08-03 06:47:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655286597 Grp 40 https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655286690 - I like how it is a board game not on phone to reduce screen time
- why choose the theme to be roblox
- I like the design of the game
- Will this be just played among friends or in school]]> 2023-08-03 06:47:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rvhscid/m2gd7j32blzrrj1p/wish/2655286690