https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1 Identify the persuasive appeals and writing techniques ( eg modals, connectors) used. en-us 2019-02-20 14:02:08 UTC 2025-09-25 02:02:46 UTC hello@padlet.com chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333451780 2019-02-21 01:13:41 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333451780 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333451892 2019-02-21 01:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333451892 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452720 2019-02-21 01:18:08 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452720 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452742 2019-02-21 01:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452742 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452760 2019-02-21 01:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452760 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452777 2019-02-21 01:18:28 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452777 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452804 2019-02-21 01:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452804 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452821 2019-02-21 01:18:45 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452821 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452840 2019-02-21 01:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333452840 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333453149 2019-02-21 01:20:07 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333453149 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333457908 2019-02-21 01:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333457908 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333485877  Question 1
: "I feel certain that our students will be enable to benefit from this exchange programme, for the reasons I will outline below"

Question 2: 
As the President of the Student Council, I am writing to you with regards to my recommendation for which school to visit during our Overseas Exchange Programme, namely Hanoi Amsterdam High School in Vietnam.]]> 2019-02-21 04:04:24 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333485877 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333485888 the sentence where she says that she is certain that 'our' students is worded too strongly and it should be changed to 'most of our students' 
the purpose is stated "i am writing to you with regards to my recommendation for which...]]> 2019-02-21 04:04:30 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333485888 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333485917 "I feel certain that our students will be able to benefit" she can use think instead of "feel certain" and use words like "majority" instead of "our"
the purpose of the letter is to recommend her suggestion for which school they should visit]]> 2019-02-21 04:04:41 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333485917 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486128 2019-02-21 04:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486128 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486234 "I feel certain that our students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme" Should be changed to "I feel that most of our students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme"

"I am writing to you with regards to my recommendation for which school to visit during our Overseas Exchange programme, namely Hanoi Amsterdam High School in Vietnam"]]> 2019-02-21 04:06:29 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486234 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486289 1. "I feel certain that out students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme, for the reasons I will outline below.

 2. "As the President of the Student Council, I am writing to you with regards to my recommendation for which school to visit during our Overseas Exchange Programme, namely Hanoi Amsterdam High School in Vietnam."]]> 2019-02-21 04:06:44 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486289 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486693 I feel certain that our students will be able to benefit from this exchange program should be I am most certain that the majority of our students will benefit from this exchange program]]> 2019-02-21 04:09:02 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486693 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486741 recommendations for which sch to visit]]> 2019-02-21 04:09:12 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486741 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486829 1. The sentence  is "I feel certain that our students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme" Should be modified to, "I believe that majority of our students would be able to benefit in some way from this exchange programme"

2. The sentence used is "I am writing to you with regards to my recommendation for which school to visit during our Overseas Exchange Programme, namely Hanoi Amsterdam High School in Vietnam"]]> 2019-02-21 04:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486829 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486869 It shows their feelings about the school they recommend. ]]> 2019-02-21 04:09:47 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486869 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486898 "I feel certain that our students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme,for the reason I will outline below"

"I am writing to you with regards to Lyn recommendation for which school to visit during our Overseas Exchange Programme...]]> 2019-02-21 04:09:56 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333486898 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487011 Instead of saying "I feel certain that our students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme", it could be rephrased to "I personally trust that most of the students will reap myraid of benefits from this exchange programme" :))) 



]]> 2019-02-21 04:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487011 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487027 The students viewpoints towards the school is being represented]]> 2019-02-21 04:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487027 ongsheng1987 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487067 "I am writing to you with regards to my recommendation..." / "I am writing to you to propose a suggestion for..."
"I feel certain..." / "I believe that majority..."
"...will be able to..." / "...would be able to..."


]]> 2019-02-21 04:10:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487067 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487085 She mentioned that the school is one of the top school in Vietnam.
The main benefit is students get the opportunity to help the less fortunate and learn new subject.

]]> 2019-02-21 04:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487085 enternia_cynthia https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487435 The sentence that is worded too strongly is "I feel certain that our students ...." to say 'our students' is too strong as it assumes that everyone is in agreement. Rather, the sentence should instead say, "I feel certain that most of our students..." as that is more moderated and leaves room for agrument, making it more credible.]]> 2019-02-21 04:12:51 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487435 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487580 The school provides multiple pedagogies to suit the learning needs of the students. In a since the school comprises of top performing students, it would have a culture of competition that pushes the students to excel.
The school also provides resources for the pupils with economic difficulties.]]> 2019-02-21 04:13:39 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487580 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487599 emphasize the different atmosphere that can be experienced and the prestige of the school]]> 2019-02-21 04:13:47 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487599 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487649 1. The writer emphasises the statistics of the school admitting only the top ten percent of elementary students, meaning that it would be a good opportunity to visit such developing schools.

2. The students can experience new subjects and can be exposed to different styles of teaching from what they are used to, they also encourage their students to tutor other children from poor families in their studies.mi]]> 2019-02-21 04:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487649 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487740 The writer states that the school is one of the best in which it can help students to develop their leadership skills

]]> 2019-02-21 04:14:34 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487740 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487826 Logos? She shows how prestigious the school is in Vietnam "the school admits only the top ten per cent of elementary students, making it one of the top schools in Vietnam"

Students will be able to experience and be exposed to more subjects as well as teaching styles, different from those they know.]]> 2019-02-21 04:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487826 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487923 She mentioned that experiencing things first-hand is far better than learning about them from textbooks

]]> 2019-02-21 04:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487923 spabhinav100 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487977 1. The sentence "I feel certain that our students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme " should be altered to "I believe that most of our students would benefit from this programme "]]> 2019-02-21 04:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487977 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487994
The school is one of the most top and prestigious in the country]]> 2019-02-21 04:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333487994 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488108 1. "I feel certain that our students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme "
2."I am writing to you with regards to my recommendation for which school to visit during our Overseas Exchange Programme , namely Hanoi Amsterdam High School in Vietnam."]]> 2019-02-21 04:16:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488108 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488131 She mentioned that students would be able to learn about the history of Vietnam as it's located near the Old Quarter(Hanoi's rich cultral and historical centre)

]]> 2019-02-21 04:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488131 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488148 Out of classroom learning and understand vietnam's culture]]> 2019-02-21 04:17:13 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488148 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488172 2019-02-21 04:17:24 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488172 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488322 1. LOGOS
HAHS only enrols top tier students.This makes  HAHS one of the best schools in Vietnam.
2.  By visiting HAHS they can experience different teaching methods and new languages such as Russian.]]> 2019-02-21 04:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488322 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488406 2019-02-21 04:18:48 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488406 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488464 2019-02-21 04:19:13 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488464 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488524 Logos

Rich culture the school and area has to offer]]> 2019-02-21 04:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488524 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488533 i feel certain that our students will be able to benefit from this exchange programme]]> 2019-02-21 04:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488533 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488545 She mentioned that experiencing things first-hand is far better than learning about them from textbooks]]> 2019-02-21 04:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488545 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488559 There is rich culture in vietnam and there is so much to learn there. ]]> 2019-02-21 04:19:42 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488559 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488577 'i feel certain that our students will be able benefit from this s exchange programme]]> 2019-02-21 04:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488577 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488687 She mentioned that the school is one of the top school in Vietnam.
The main benefit is that students are able to have the opportunity to help the less fortunate and learn new subjects ]]> 2019-02-21 04:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488687 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488693 The school is located near many cultral sites in Vietnam, enabling cultural excursion.]]> 2019-02-21 04:20:30 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488693 ongsheng1987 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488721 Persuasive tone:
It only accepts elementary students from the top 10 percent.

Main purpose:
Learning of new language such as russian which is not taught in Singapore.

]]> 2019-02-21 04:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488721 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488800 Our students can also benefit from the rich culture of the school and area has to offer ]]> 2019-02-21 04:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488800 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488941 1. Hanoi's rich cultural and historical centre, our students can learn more about the history of Vietnam, showing that Vietnam has a very interesting and deep history for the students to learn. 

2. ]]> 2019-02-21 04:22:02 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488941 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488946 2019-02-21 04:22:03 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333488946 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489004 Our students lack practice,listening to such presentations will boost their skills.]]> 2019-02-21 04:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489004 chriscg https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489059 2019-02-21 04:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489059 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489290 1. the school admits only the top 10 percent of elementary students
2.encourages the students their students to tutor other students from poor family in their studies ]]> 2019-02-21 04:24:10 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489290 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489316 The school is located near places with rich culture]]> 2019-02-21 04:24:17 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489316 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489536 she emphaisises the school only takes 10 percent of elementary students and that it is one of the top schools in Vietnam 

]]> 2019-02-21 04:25:43 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489536 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489578 The modal most used is Our Students showing that the concern is mainly catered towards the students benefits]]> 2019-02-21 04:25:54 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333489578 https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333490041 2019-02-21 04:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/333490041 muthuselvan_sujay https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/2149609111 2022-04-20 02:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/chriscg/4E2pw1/wish/2149609111