https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi Read the snippets from Shortcut. What type of punctuation does Donald Crews use? How? Why? How might different punctuation change this snippet? en-us 2020-10-14 21:45:40 UTC 2020-10-15 14:21:50 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f9d0.png emilyjsilverberg https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/830344700 I think he uses ellipses to show silence or that the kids are thinking. The ellipses made me stretch out my pauses between sentences.]]> 2020-10-14 21:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/830344700 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832407757 He put it there because there were calming down ]]> 2020-10-15 14:10:35 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832407757 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832408478 Maybe they used cap cause they were yelling :/]]> 2020-10-15 14:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832408478 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832409715 They are scared and are screaming AHHHHH like if something  touched them and went BOOOO]]> 2020-10-15 14:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832409715 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832410379 There asking like a question.]]> 2020-10-15 14:11:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832410379 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832414141 They used because they were yelling ]]> 2020-10-15 14:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832414141 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832414600 Saying something but calm]]> 2020-10-15 14:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832414600 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832417175 There like waiting for something ]]> 2020-10-15 14:12:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832417175 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832417178 He put a question mark because the character asked a question ]]> 2020-10-15 14:12:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832417178 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832417229 It makes the reader subspenceful]]> 2020-10-15 14:12:38 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832417229 1024233 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832420536 Mmmmmm

]]> 2020-10-15 14:13:19 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832420536 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832420569 I think he used capitals because they were loudy yelling]]> 2020-10-15 14:13:19 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832420569 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832420842 I think there should be a comma right before the or because I stopped before the or.]]> 2020-10-15 14:13:23 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832420842 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832421625 2020-10-15 14:13:32 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832421625 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832422902 Has no talking marks]]> 2020-10-15 14:13:50 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832422902 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832424354 I think he put caps because they were saying get off the tracks really loud ]]> 2020-10-15 14:14:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832424354 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832424822 They are asking a question ]]> 2020-10-15 14:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832424822 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832425994 2020-10-15 14:14:33 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832425994 1024233 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832428759 Thay wher shar]]> 2020-10-15 14:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832428759 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832429660 He was says something quite and calm]]> 2020-10-15 14:15:21 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832429660 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430120 ....]]> 2020-10-15 14:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430120 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430610 That they’re waiting for something or know something is coming and are watching out for it 🤫(it also makes me be more interested in the book and want to know what happens next like in Save Me A Seat.)

]]> 2020-10-15 14:15:33 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430610 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430837 2020-10-15 14:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430837 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430853 They are calming down ]]> 2020-10-15 14:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430853 1024233 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430951 2020-10-15 14:15:38 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832430951 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832431802 To continue ]]> 2020-10-15 14:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832431802 10163852 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832434479 They did not give up]]> 2020-10-15 14:16:25 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832434479 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832437128 They did not give up they will still going]]> 2020-10-15 14:17:02 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832437128 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832438089 The best ]]> 2020-10-15 14:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832438089 1024233 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832439536 2020-10-15 14:17:34 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832439536 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832451247 Vow]]> 2020-10-15 14:20:02 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832451247 https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832452246 That they are asking something like me bc I want to know where are the quotation marks " ]]> 2020-10-15 14:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/emilyjsilverberg/lz8t6k46tchjx3xi/wish/832452246