Business/Official Correspondence by Kenjave Mark T. https://padlet.com/kenph1994/lxvr8d4i6bznuy46 en-us 2022-11-10 22:18:08 UTC 2022-12-14 04:39:18 UTC hello@padlet.com Office of the President kenph1994 https://padlet.com/kenph1994/lxvr8d4i6bznuy46/wish/2379350253 Group Members:
1. Harold Aponesto
2. Marepie Cueme
3. Tara Ngilay
4. Benjo Sargado
5. Jose Amagan


Enter your group output for the Activity 1 here:

Full Block method should be utilized for better readability.

Date should be aligned to the left. Date should be 2022(?)

Lower Case/Sentence Case
City Mayor
City of Koronadal 

Spacing between the parts of the letter

Colon on Salutation

Difficult words in the body may not establish rapport with audience/recipient and instead create miscommunication. Make it simple instead of using flowery words. According to sir Harold Aponesto: Masyadong William Shakespeare 

Last sentences should be more polite. Should be mroe courteous. Write something like a request to setup a meeting a their convenient time, along with providing contact details. 

Lacking details about the program, it's not concrete, complete, and clear. ]]> 2022-11-10 22:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kenph1994/lxvr8d4i6bznuy46/wish/2379350253 4 - Chesmes kenph1994 https://padlet.com/kenph1994/lxvr8d4i6bznuy46/wish/2379351193 Group Members:
1.ARREO
2.CANTERO
3.MAQUILANG
4.SALUTAN
5.VECINA


Enter your group output for the Activity 1 here:

1. Letterhead - should be in the center
2. Date : Must be in the left together with other parts (Full Block)
3. Salutation - colon
4. Recipients Address - should not be on full caps
5. Closing statement is too demanding
6. Spacing/Margin of the letter head
7. Avoid Beating around the bush]]> 2022-11-10 22:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/kenph1994/lxvr8d4i6bznuy46/wish/2379351193 Group Too kenph1994 https://padlet.com/kenph1994/lxvr8d4i6bznuy46/wish/2379351436 Group Members:
1. Leonard Pe
2. Carmelle Jade Braga
3. Jessel Amoyo
4. Glenda Sendico-Reyes
5. Alvin Magtibay
6. Cecil Gao-ay

Enter your group output for the Activity 1 here:

* Date must be left since letter is full block
*Address in caps, only name of addressee must be all caps
*awkward use of words
*use of "ME" not appropriate
*letter should be clear in all its intentions AT THE FIRST READ
*Colon instead of comma in the salutation
*Spacing between the body and the complimentary close of the letter
*Yung INSIDE ADDRESS.. dapat di ba dugtong. CITY MAYOR OF KORONADAL..
*Flowery words should be avoided in writing formal letter/business correspondence
*"This is the only available time for me so make sure you arrive on time..yan na part very imposing or dili polite?
* No greetings




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Group Members:
1. Vergara
2. Casinao
3. Santos
4. Hubiera
5. Banas
6. Naldoza


Body of the letter must  be changed (last paragraph). Sounds a bit rude hehe

Date is not properly aligned, since it's in full block style
 
Use colon in the salutation instead of coma

No need to use "bold" format text for the salutation

No greetings

Inside Address - MAYOR and CITY OF KORONADAL should be in Sentence Case

Ungrammatical
Informal use of words

It's lacking in details about the activity

Unnecessary and impolite phrases/Sentence in the Body:
"like the rest of the known world" - 1st Paragraph
"This is the benevolent reason for this letter. " - 2nd Paragraph
"This is the only available time for me so make sure you arrive on time." - 3rd Paragraph


]]> 2022-11-11 02:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kenph1994/lxvr8d4i6bznuy46/wish/2379571444 Group 3 - The Letterpedia https://padlet.com/kenph1994/lxvr8d4i6bznuy46/wish/2379571694 1. Anas, Marianne 
2. Cabbab, Laarnie
3. Garces, Ruel 
4. Manzano, Jorge
5. Peliño, Michael
6. Sumog-oy, Olleane 

Incorrect use of letter style - alignment of date should be at the left (full blocked)

Formatting of letter case MAYOR should be Mayor
CITY OF KORONADAL should be City of Koronadal

Wrong use of punctuation mark, should be colon 

Missing greetings

Body of the letter should be brief and concise.
Wrong grammar
Informal use of words
Last paragraph of the letter should sound respective and polite.

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