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2014-02-14 14:47:28 UTC

Tom Critchley, film magazine feedback

2014-02-14 14:48:02 UTC

If you could give any feedback on my magazine cover it would be greatly appreciated

2014-02-22 15:10:14 UTC

I think the smaller images should be removed

because they cover they take focus off the main

image

Oliver Lawrenson

2014-03-13 13:38:19 UTC

The main image for the magazine covers the whole page which gives you the feeling of shock when you look at it. The fact that the image is a zombie stands out to other magazines as Tom's target audience find this genre more interesting compared to other genre's. The hashtag in the top left also relates with the target audience as they use a lot of social media and this aspect covers that. One improvement would be to remove the other magazines/previous issues as the make the magazine look a little rushed.