Create tension and suspense in the narrative "An Adventure". by Ms Sarahlyn Cheng

sarahlyn_xl — 2024-07-05 03:48:21 UTC

Who: Nancy, Ben, Tom and two other neighbours

Where: playground

When: after school

What: They decided to have an adventure using pretend play.

Tension and Suspense (page 4)

sarahlyn_xl — 2024-07-05 03:49:08 UTC

Name:

Tension and Suspense:

Choose to raise the stakes, add a ticking clock or not giving up.
Type a few sentences to describe.

Josephine

2024-07-05 06:05:50 UTC

Time was ticking, Nancy the princess was in grave danger. The stakes were high as Ben the knight had to hurry and save her.

Name Joshua

2024-07-05 06:06:00 UTC

If Tom the knight cannot save Nancy the princess in 5 minutes some horrible would happen to her

TYLER

2024-07-05 06:06:02 UTC

The dragon is a slide so you can just go through it

If Tom does not win the chess game,Ben the dragon will kill Nancy the Princess. (Sorry if it was violent)

2024-07-05 06:06:31 UTC

Xie Yuxuan Claire

2024-07-05 06:07:01 UTC

The fight between Kylie and the guards made a lot of noise. They heard a snarl from the sleeping dragon. The dragon was going to wake up soon. If the knight does not hurry, he will get caught captive together with the princess.

Pls like it

Ang Zhi Da

2024-07-05 06:07:01 UTC

If he does not pass the test, he might be grounded for 6 month or more.

Raise the stakes

Valerie

2024-07-05 06:07:20 UTC

On the knight way to the dungeon he got ambushed several times and got severely hurt but did not give up until he was able to save the princess.
(Not giving up)

Yap Zhe Chern

2024-07-05 06:07:59 UTC

As Nancy was climbing up the ladder, she was ambushed by three guards she was also captured.If she can’t save the princess and get out of the prison,they will be executed by the dragon and the guards.

Joshua

2024-07-05 06:08:34 UTC

If ben the spy cannot cut the wire for the bomb in 10 minutes everyone in the building would die

Charlene

2024-07-05 06:09:25 UTC

If the knight does not hurry, the princess is going to be eaten by the dragon.

Mukil Kumar

2024-07-05 06:10:00 UTC

Nancy the knight climbed the ladder when the she climbed up giant rocks fell down she looked up , the guards were trying to thwart her attempt! Nancy the knight did not give up

Rayyan

andreaabigail7374 — 2024-07-05 06:10:45 UTC

“Noooooooo.” Ben cried as tom fell in to lava. “I will avenge you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”.as he slashed the beast belly. Like please:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):)

Name: Sylvia

2024-07-05 06:11:26 UTC

After making her way through the guards the courageous knight, Nancy looked for the cell the princess was in. She was determined to save the princess. However in order to success, she would have to be quick and fight off the even mightier guard or else the princess may lose her life.

Joshua

2024-07-05 06:11:31 UTC

If Ben the firefighter along with his team cannot put out the fire in a few minutes a lot of lives would be lost

Dylan

2024-07-05 06:11:52 UTC

(Add a ticking clock) The evil dragon was attacking everyone around it,if Nancy the knight doesn’t save the princess we will be in huge danger.

(Not giving up) The knight fought army after army of soldiers on the way to save the princess in the dungeon.

Zheng Xinhe

2024-07-05 06:14:34 UTC

Princess Leila was being held captive in a dark and filthy dungeon guarded by a majestic dragon. If Nancy the knight did not rescue her, her life would be in peril. Being the brave warrior she was, Nancy the knight was determined to save princess Leila. The guards, Ben and Tom, waited in ambush to thwart the attempt. As Nancy bravely climbed the dragon, Ben and Tom started firing boulders at her. She was hit several times, but she did not give up.

Ashna

2024-07-05 06:15:09 UTC

If the sleeping dragon woke up, Nancy the knight would not be able to save the princess and the dragon would breathe fire at her.

Name: Henry and akshyan

2024-07-05 06:15:11 UTC

Nancy, Ben and Tom was playing pretend play, Nancy was the princess and was trapped on the very top of the castle. Tom known for his sword skills, dashed to save princess. In the attempt of saving Nancy, Ben appearred and tried to slow down Tom as the person who save Nancy will receice a big prize from the king.

Wenkai

2024-07-05 06:15:28 UTC

If the knight Nancy can’t save the princess, she
will be in great danger.

Name: Zubair

2024-07-05 06:16:05 UTC

As Nancy was fighting the guards she knew there was limited time but she defeated the guards just in time almost getting defeated

Lee Jia Ying

lunaliss899 — 2024-07-05 06:16:11 UTC

Time was ticking, Leela the princess, was guarded by the majestic dragon in a dark and filthy dungeon . Nancy the knight was climbing the ladder, she got discovered by the three guards. If she wasn’t fast enough, the princess would be in grave danger.

Hui Ru and Emma

2024-07-05 06:16:23 UTC

A majestic dragon with widespread wings nestled at the playground. The evil dragon kidnapped Leela the princess. “Ahhhh!!!” she screamed in fright. “Oh no…” Nancy the brave knight wailed. She decided to go save the princess. However, Nancy the knight was caught too. They were trapped in the dark and filthy dungeon. If they did not escape, the dragon would gobble them up. What were they going to do?

If Nancy the knight doesn’t rescue the princess in time she may get executed by the dragon or the guards.

2024-07-05 06:16:46 UTC

Joshua

2024-07-05 06:16:47 UTC

The rocket with the hostages was going a blast in one minute can Nancy and her crew save the hostages or were they would fly in space and die

Name: Janaki

2024-07-05 06:17:04 UTC

The scary monster was attacking the poor kids.If Jasmine and her brother did not escape in time , they would be attacked too.

Hayley

2024-07-05 06:17:13 UTC

“Come on! Come on!” Nancy told herself. She had to find the right key to save the princess. If she does not manage to free the princess, the guards would lock her up as well! She could hear the guards footsteps just around the corner. She had to hide!

Name:Adrian

2024-07-05 06:18:12 UTC

It was a bright Friday afternoon. Nancy the princess got kidnapped by the guards of Buckingham palace. As soon as Ben the knight read the note from the guards he hurried out to save princess Nancy.

2024-07-05 06:18:34 UTC

Hanishka.S

Raise the stakes.

Princess Leela was held captive in a dungeon protected by a humongous dragon. Nancy the knight was trying to save the princess but got injured however she got up and ran to the dungeon and fought another guard to save the princess.

2024-07-05 06:19:20 UTC

Time was ticking. There was only enough time to distract the dragon.so while Tom was playing the game,Kaiwen freed Nancy.However,The dragon found out and trapped Tom,Kaiwen and Nancy

Name : HANISHKA R

2024-07-05 06:19:55 UTC

As Nancy the knight tried rescuing the princess . If she can past through the big and large body guards she will come out safely but if she doesn’t she and the princess will get banish by the dragon and the three big and large body guards.

En Xi

2024-07-05 06:20:27 UTC

When Nancy the knight heard that the princess was captured. If she did not rescue the princess in time , she would be in great danger. When she was climbing up the ladder to reach the dungeon, she was attack by a few guards they were throwing stones at her, but she manage to reach the dungeon. One last obstacle was to fight the stronger guard, but she manage to save the princess.

As soon as Ben got to the dungeon he saw another note that said,’’find her in eight minutes or she will die from lava and magma”. Ben the knight got scared but still went in the fight the guards

2024-07-05 06:20:27 UTC

Name: Yi Xuan & Yik Shuen

2024-07-05 06:21:58 UTC

“Oh no time is running out, I should hurry up and save the princess!” Nancy the knight exclaimed, as she climbed the ladder. As Nancy got to the top, the princess had already been sent to heaven. “No, my princess is gone, I will have my revenge!”Nancy cried.

Elva

2024-07-05 06:22:24 UTC

Nancy the brave knight climbed up the ladder in order to save princess Leela. The guards Ben and Tom crouched under a wall to thwart the attempt. Ben and Tom stopped Nancy in her tracks. Unfortunately, Nancy lost the fight and got captured too. She was trapped in a dark dungeon but managed to escape but it was almost execution time and the princess may lose her life.

Farisha

2024-07-05 06:24:57 UTC

If princess Nancy does not come in time, her best friend could be living in the dungeon forever. The evil dragon could attack her.

Name:ilaria

2024-07-05 06:25:00 UTC

Nancy the knight was going to save the princess when she encountered a dragon. The dragon was scary looking and fierce but if the Nancy did not save the princess in time she would be in danger. As Nancy was determined to save the princess. She fought as hard and beat the dragons.

yu hang and Bryan

2024-07-05 06:25:33 UTC

As Tom was tiptoeing to the other side of the cave, he woke up the fearsome dragon. He was thrown into the dark and filthy prison. If Tom don’t escape the prison in time, he will be lunch!!!