Period 4 Gold: Dystopian Presentation Comments: Read the Directions!!! by Donna Camarota https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e The world as we know it en-us 2020-11-23 00:19:43 UTC 2025-10-09 07:24:54 UTC hello@padlet.com https://thenorwichradical.files.wordpress.com/2016/02/dystopia-featured.jpg?w=567 Directions! READ ME! dcamarota1_1 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/950612912 Take a look at your peers Dystopian projects on the whole Classroom Sides 
1. Make a comment about at least 1 of your peers projects and what stuck out to you about it. Include the name of the creator and title. 
 and make a comment here about:
- What projects stuck out to you
- What was interesting about their project?
- Pick out examples from their project to comment on.
-Write the student's name and project title first.
-Make sure your name is visible on top like you see my name on the top of this post.
3. Once you finish comment on at least 2 other peers post on this Padlet as well. 
4. Press the little + sign in the bottom right hand corner to make a new box.
]]> 2020-11-23 00:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/950612912 Mason Clarke-Perfection dcamarota1_1 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953658326 It was interesting by sad that your society reverted back to segregation days. ]]> 2020-11-23 19:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953658326 Brianna Williams- The Flock sant7218 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953710465 I love your dystopia, it's upsetting how brainwashed everyone in the society was since they were born and how the government controls them. It's a form of equality but in a way where it doesn't allow any uniqueness and creativity within the world. It's like elimination, the government eliminates anyone that is may think differently from anyone, especially if they don't look up at the government like everyone else does. I love the painting is portrayed the dystopia well.]]> 2020-11-23 19:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953710465 Breyannah Santos - The Forbidden will7241 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953710915 I like how you decided to make the journal entries. The whole planning of this was well thought out. I also really liked the layout of your project. Your idea for the Dystopia was such a good idea. Having to live life in such a secret hatred is horrible.]]> 2020-11-23 19:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953710915 Andrew McGowen- The Spark clar7295 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953715664 Your rules are very strict and no currency. Very smart thinking. ]]> 2020-11-23 19:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953715664 Natalie Petrone- The City mcgo7669 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953718746 I like how she is telling how everyone is getting distracted into their phones and technology.]]> 2020-11-23 19:18:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953718746 Brianna Williams- The Flock petr7401 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953726347 I thought it was interesting how Brianna said "This education system praises the government" because I think what she is saying is that one of the ways the government brainwashes is through children. I assume everyone in this society has been taught the government is always right since they were children. One thing I am left wondering is what happens to people after the government decides they are wolves. 

]]> 2020-11-23 19:20:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953726347 Breyannah Santos - The Forbidden zimm7753 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953764269 I really liked your Dystopian society, it was a really good idea. Its horrible to live life knowing that the only way you can be accepted is to hide who you are. Also, your diary entries were amazing, they were really well written, and the story was incredible. ]]> 2020-11-23 19:30:13 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953764269 Brianna Williams - The Flock zimm7753 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953788618 I really liked the symbolism, especially with the painting. I thought it was a really great choice for an artifact, you did an awesome job coming up with it and making it. The education system of your dystopia was really interesting, how they brainwashed everyone with propaganda from such a young age, they wouldn't even think to question the government or why they are living their lives in this way.]]> 2020-11-23 19:37:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/953788618 Mason Clarke The Perfection https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/960599343 I really liked how you went into deep detail about everything that you describe in your dystopia. I thought the artifact that you choose was really smart and clever. I also noticed how you named the two different parts of the town Superioerville and Corruptville. ]]> 2020-11-25 17:08:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/960599343 Hector Sanchez Ortiz - Hope mart7673 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/960612766 I like how detailed your Dystopian story is, the diary choice is also a very good idea and  very creative, makes the dystopian story more intersting, and it is very well thought out with the goverment putting collars on the citizens that couldn't be remove.

]]> 2020-11-25 17:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/960612766 Dane Yanusz- A Happy Place pela7351 https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/960650196 It's a pretty great dystopia, I think technology would be used as a deadly weapon if it is in the wrong hands]]> 2020-11-25 17:18:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dcamarota1_1/lxnnjlsff4j1l68e/wish/960650196