Thuy Duong by Thuỳ Dương Nguyễn

chữa bài tập 10/1

nthdg193 — 2022-01-10 08:21:58 UTC

1. mở tốt : cần nêu topic, influence,và nói rõ mạch sắp trình bày trong thân bài
VD : ngày nay ng hiện đại thường ngủ ít hơn hẳn, thậm chí là việc mất ngủ ngày càng gia tăng. Nhiều người quy điều này là do lối sống cập dập và tình hình sức khoẻ đáng báo động. Bài luận sau sẽ phân tích những nguyên nhân này và đồng thời viêc thiếu ngủ của chúng.
- Bài hỏi quan điểm của mình : thì p bắt buộc p có dấu hiêu quan điểm thể hiện ở stance :
+ hedges :
+ booster :
+ attitude markers :
+ self-mentions :
3. KB
- conclude lại ý chính và recommendation.

Task 1
bài task 1 cx cần thể hiện qđiem của ng vt qua các phó từ mta số liệu

TASK2: Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

nthdg193 — 2022-01-10 15:51:38 UTC

Plastic bag usage is increasing at an alarming rate, and it is one of the main causes of land and sea pollution as people often dispose of them after one time use. I totally agree with the opinion that governments should gradually prohibit them from being used for shopping purposes.

Firstly, plastic bags have a injurious effect on the environment because they are non-recycle. This means that it may take hundreds of years for a plastic to decompose into pieces. Therefore, when the bags are buried into the soil or thrown into the ocean and wild animals eat them, plastic will enter the food chain, it will be a serious problem, even death. If a cattle eats a plastic bag, it can lead to humans also ingesting the same poison when people eat cattle. it will seriously damage to people's health.

Besides, plastic bags consist of many toxic chemicals which will negatively impact the surroundings when they are burnt. These harmful will be released into the air, resulting in the gradual development of deadly diseases like cancer when people breath and contact them too frequently. The chemicals may also affect the soil, causing many serious problem about cropping plants. This is because the roots of these plants may not be able to through plastic particles to get nutrients from the soil. As a result, the growth of crops will slow down, leading to decrease labor productivity.

In conclusion, people should reduce the use of plastic bags, it has a very serious effects on the environment and people's health. Instead, the government should warn people about the dangers of using plastic bags and change all to paper bags to keep the environment clean, healthy and balance.

12/1/2022

nthdg193 — 2022-01-12 13:22:45 UTC

BAR CHART

* Có 2 cách phân tích:
1. Bổ theo trục thời gian (chỉ áp dụng nếu có 1 điểm turning point)
2. Bổ theo pattern of change

* Ngôn ngữ : ranking, compare-contrast
- nên tả facts hơn là dùng từ cao siêu để tả số liệu
- 1st: head the list, 2nd: ranked the second, 3rd: next came X, 4th: the least popular item.

* Có 2 loại bar chart
1. Loại ít nhóm ít cột
2. Loại nhiều nhóm nhiều cột khó nhìn pattern -> chia đoạn theo cột cao thấp

FORMAT:
Opening:
+Name
+Overall phải nói đến yếu tố nổi trội nhất, sử dụng công thức tả fact
Body:
+ Đoạn 1: các nhóm cùng pattern - cao nhất+thấp nhất (max 5 số liệu)
+ Đoạn 2: các nhóm còn lại - dùng từ ranged để tóm số liệu (max 4 số)
* Tả các cột nổi trội trong mỗi đoạn, cột sau phải được tương quan với cột trước.

Các cụm từ liên quan đến thải khí

- The highest level of… is found in + vùng, reaching + số

- Khí độc: vùng are choking with a high level of

- bth: vùng are being threatened by a high level of

- The present of (khí) is low/ high

- Pollution problem is the worst in vùng

- Pollution problem is common in

- It is common to observe a cool weather from… to… (month)

…. contributes to a significant amount of acid rain emissions

- Most of the amount of… is assigned to

Số liệu giảm => acid rain threat improved significantly

The decline was sustained throughout the next 5 years

Khi diễn đạt tang giảm, so sánh biến đổi sau vs trc ( tg quan)

Lose momentum: mất đà ( pattern is repeated at a slower rate)

BTVN: (DL: 10h)
the gap is a little narrower
security market, huge diff in preference
2/3 of the men decide to afford a programmable vacuum

women - security and home appliance
men - entertainment/ recreations and mod-con are more popular among men-buyers.
more prevalent
SC heading the shopping list of women (fact)

HW TASK 1 12/10

nthdg193 — 2022-01-13 04:55:58 UTC

Given is a bar chart illustrating the sales of different electronic devices by men and women in UK in the year of 2013.

Overall, it can be seen that women mostly spent their money on security and household devices, whereas men had the highest proportion on electronic devices.

In regard to women, safety gadgets were recorded to be the most critical appliances for women at about 90%, as opposed to men who had the least popular at security camera and had the lowest percentage at over 20%. It is also noticeable that programmable thermostats and wireless home security accounted for the same proportion at more than 60%. Programmable vacuum saw a much lower figure of only 40%.

Regarding electronic devices, top of men’s shopping list was wireless home audio system about 80% compared with a lower number of 60% female usage. In addition, both energy management and home movie theatre had the same figure of approximately 55%.

task 2 13/1 :Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

nthdg193 — 2022-01-13 10:17:19 UTC

Over the past few years, space exploration has been one of the most discussed topics in today's society. While some people suggested that studying space is crucial for humanity, others argued that it is somewhat a waste of resources. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, while strongly opine with the advantages.

Despite the current trend of investing in scientific research to explore space, some people oppose the idea and believe that the government should rather deal with the ongoing problems on Earth before going to outer space. This is because the survival of humanity should be the priority and the enormous spendings on space exploration have achieved such little except for a slight advancement in technology that can instead be used to improve the living conditions of the human population. Not to mention the excessive consumption of resources and energy that can be utilized for other means. To exemplify, according to the New York Times, the expenses of the NASA moon landing that cost over $1 billion dollars can be used to put Americans out of poverty.

6/1 sleep less (v2)

huonglyams — 2022-01-17 06:48:06 UTC

Over the past few decades, sleeping behavior of people have changed in a bad way .^{THAY ĐỔI CÓ THỂ VỪA TỐT VỪA XẤU} This is not a good sign for both mental health and physical development of a human system. Everyone is on race of competing with each other which make their night sleepless. This essay will discuss the reasons (N) and consquences what will be impact of this pattern.

To begin with, competition has changed the way of living a lot due to which people start treating them as machine which is not good for their respective corporal and intellectual health. For instance, people spend most of their time in front of computers and screens at night which create strain in their eyes due to which now almost people in the world wear glasses at an earlier time only senior citizen used to have this problem. Secondly, without an adequate rest people have more issues of heart stroke and diabetes, which is earlier used to happen at an older age. In addition, in young children, staying up late at night will hinder their growth and development. Hence, it prove that sleepless nights are not good for health.

Regardless of growth this drift has more problems. Without proper nap people feel tired and ultimately it will affect their job or even they can lose their work. For example, if pupil went on the job without sleeping at night ultimately he will feel Restless and will there will be clashes at work with their colleagues without any particular reason. Therefore, for growth in work an adequate amount of sleep is essential.

To conclude, For Growth in the career sleeping pattern need to be changed otherwise near future it will only create difficulties.

5/1 line graph

huonglyams — 2022-01-17 06:50:26 UTC

Given is the line graph illustrating information about the difference of UK acid rain emissions from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

Overall, it can be observed that the data presents a downward trend in all the acid rain emission except for transport and communication, which remained steady during the period.

In 1990, it is clear from the line graph that the acid rain emission of electricity, gas and water supply reached a peak at 3,3 million tones and then dropped dramatically to 0.5 million tones, whereas the significant decline was seen in the sector of transport and commuication went up and fell slightly in 2005.

Following the trend, the acid rain emission of other industries decreased rapidly from 2 million tones to 1,2 million tones in 9 years. In addition, the acid rain emission of domestic saw a lower decrease from 0,6 million tones to 0.2 million tones, compared to acid rain emission of other industries.

GUIDELINES FOR WRITING (17/1/22)

nthdg193 — 2022-01-18 05:32:01 UTC

1. Vocab
- learners, the language acquired, acquisition of, .... is most popular/most favored among ... learners
- students of French, students enrolling in French courses
Overall = cuối - đầu
Chia đoạn:
- TĂNG - GIỮ NGUYÊN
- GIẢM
SAU PHẢI TƯƠNG QUAN VỚI TRƯỚC
CÂU ĐẦU ĐOẠN: fact, logic
Câu cuối: đáng chú ý

TOPIC: Housing/accommodation for residents > 2 issues being called into questions: homelessness; land resources in urban areas (megacities)
Scant/limited: ít
Financial security
Residential security
Aid kit
Provide relief for them

Built more apartment complex
Attached to this
City planning
infrastructures connecting in-city amenities

1. Idea progression
2. Attitude: stance and engagement
3. Correlation (tính tuyến tính)
4. Logic idea: chung - riêng, dù - nhưng

17/1 V1

nthdg193 — 2022-01-18 05:40:31 UTC

Given is the line graph illustrating the proportion of New Zealand elementary school learners who were learning a second language for the years 2006 to 2014.

In general, all the language learned saw a fluctuating trend and French classes had the highest number of students over the period. However, Chinese classes had the least number of students but it only lasted until 2011 before the figure strived and competed with others.

QUY TRINH LAM BAI

nthdg193 — 2022-01-18 06:04:13 UTC

1. Outline (logic).
2. Học template với mỗi loại ( cách sử dụng riêng),
LINE: tăng, giảm; BAR, PIE: so sánh, xếp hạng. Nhưng nếu Bar, Table và Pie có trục thời gian giống Line graph thì dùng ngôn ngữ tăng giảm giống Line graph.
3. Đối với LINE GRAPH, có 2 cách:
- Timeline (turning point)
- Pattern ( xu hướng tăng, giảm)
4. PATTERN = điểm cuối - điểm đầu
TEMPLATE
1. Mở bài: 2 câu, câu 1: tên đồ thị, câu 2: diễn biến chung

Given is the line graph giving information about the difference of .....
Overall, it can be observed the data presents/shows +

Những lưu ý khi phân tích đồ thị task 1

nthdg193 — 2022-01-18 06:05:16 UTC

1. Càng ôm số liệu, càng kém, mà phải biết viết có logic, tìm ra logic giữa các số liệu với nhau.
2. Khi viết phải biết kết hợp công thức tả số, và tả facts.
3. Phần intro phải nêu được ý chính mình nhìn thấy ở bài.
4. Phần OVERALL, nên viết theo ngôn ngữ FACTS.
5. Thân gồm 2 đoạn, mỗi đoạn gồm 4 câu. ( các thông tin sau phải đặt trong mối tương quan với thông tin trước).
6. Câu cuối của đoạn 2 phải dành cho chi tiết đáng chú ý nhất.