https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt Made with a stroke of good luck en-us 2018-04-09 16:52:20 UTC 2025-11-09 04:48:17 UTC hello@padlet.com nelsons18 https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/250825129 Harry-  33, British Pilot, enlisted since 1937. Experienced

George- 27, British pilot, enlisted in 1940. intermediate experience

Charlie- 22, Also British Pilot, enlisted in 1942, rookie experience.]]> 2018-04-11 17:05:49 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/250825129 humerickhousekj https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/250827187 Eastern Tunisia, Africa. During  1943. In an air craft equipped with 1 bomb, and machine guns.]]> 2018-04-11 17:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/250827187 robelc18 https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/250833782 Not much dialogue, many narration.]]> 2018-04-11 17:20:48 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/250833782 nelsons18 https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/250838474 Action, suspenseful, historical-fiction.

-This adds structure to the story and gives an idea of what it is about.




]]> 2018-04-11 17:28:23 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/250838474 robelc18 https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251248645 Spitfire MK Vb/trop
Armament: x2 Hispano MK II 20 mm cannon.
x4 7.7 mm Browning Machine Gun
x1 230 Kg Bomb

]]> 2018-04-12 16:41:52 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251248645 humerickhousekj https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251249853 Examples:
1)“Charlie, break off before he comes back ‘round!”(bottom of pg 1) 

2) “Sure do.”(paragraph 3 pg 1) 

3) “You got him, Harry?” questioned Charlie. (paragraph 3 pg 1) 

]]> 2018-04-12 16:43:52 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251249853 robelc18 https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251251205 Junkers JU-88
Armament: x1 MG 81J Machine Gun
x4-5 500 Kg Bomb (1,100 lbs)
defensive armament: x5 MG 81J Machine guns]]> 2018-04-12 16:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251251205 nelsons18 https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251255800 This story uses detailed imagery. 

Examples:
1.) "The desert was filled with basically nothing; apart from the few rock formations and scattered villages and towns. It was all just sand, just sand."
(paragraph 3)

2.) "The sounds of the Hispano cannons filled the sky, the rapid blasts of the large-calibres thumping like a storm back in England."
(paragraph 4)

3.) "Then, a burst of booms filled the air, George panicked, wildly maneuvering his aircraft around. “What was tha-” His message was cut off as his plane burst into a ball of flame."
(paragraph 5)]]> 2018-04-12 16:55:41 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251255800 robelc18 https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251256183 Messerschmitt BF-109 F-4/trop
Armament: x2 MG 17 Machine Guns
x1 20 mm MG 151/20 Cannon 
"Motorkanone" (cannon is in the propeller shaft"
Secondary Armament: x2 Externally mounted MG 151/20 Cannons]]> 2018-04-12 16:56:30 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251256183 humerickhousekj https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251257406 Examples:
1) Complex; Defensive armament (para. 3, pg 1)

2) Simple; desert bandits (top line pg. 2)

3) Complex; inverted immelman ( para. 2, pg. 2)

4) Simple; his plane tumbled (para. 2, pg. 2)]]> 2018-04-12 16:58:54 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251257406 nelsons18 https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251261580 Simile- "...the large-calibres thumping like a storm back in England."
(paragraph 4)

Hyperbole- "...the plane violently shook and vibrated..."
(paragraph 7)

Onomatopoeia- "His engine spluttered and clanged..."
(paragraph 7)

]]> 2018-04-12 17:06:51 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251261580 humerickhousekj https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251262107 Examples:
1) Charlie noticed one of the fighters zoom climbing towards harry, he pulled quickly towards him and fired on the fighter before it could get at Harry. (para. 1, pg. 2) 

2) Harry spotted something far above them. As he crept closer to the flying object, he could make out the silhouette of an aircraft, two engines, with a bulbous and scattered nose. He recognized it as a Junkers 88. “Enemy bomber, 2 o'clock high.”(Para. 3, pg. 1)

3) The fighter was already alerted, and pulled hard to the right, which Harry followed.(para. 2, pg 2)]]> 2018-04-12 17:07:52 UTC https://padlet.com/robelc18/lv44euo4u7nt/wish/251262107