https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk Make your suggestions & give your advice here en-us 2017-12-05 12:32:47 UTC 2023-04-10 23:23:44 UTC hello@padlet.com clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213257516 2017-12-05 13:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213257516 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213257779 2017-12-05 13:08:56 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213257779 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213258081 2017-12-05 13:09:37 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213258081 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213258278 2017-12-05 13:10:07 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213258278 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213258586 2017-12-05 13:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213258586 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213258813 2017-12-05 13:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213258813 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213259058 2017-12-05 13:12:08 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213259058 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213259317 2017-12-05 13:12:41 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213259317 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213259632 2017-12-05 13:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213259632 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213259883 2017-12-05 13:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213259883 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213260156 2017-12-05 13:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213260156 https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213346567 question 7a has less marks than 7b. 7a is a question only asking for similarities between the two texts whereas 7b is asking for both similarities and differences ]]> 2017-12-05 15:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213346567 https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213346640 This question always asks you to evaluate how effectively something is achieved. 

Use references such as 'in line 7 this is effectively achieved because this creates ....'

Analyse specific words or phrases that stick out  - say what makes them successful.

Make sure you support your ideas with short quotes.
 
Try to use evaluative language in your topic sentences (when delivering the point).

]]> 2017-12-05 15:42:32 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213346640 https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213347364 PEA: P(Point) - is about topic sentences. Its the point you are about to develop. ( like introduction to the points you are about to make); E(Evidence) - disclaimer supporting your point ( extract, example quotes); A - analysing the evidence, saying what the effect/impact is.]]> 2017-12-05 15:43:41 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213347364 https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213347390 There's no time to waffle, just focus on the point and evidence; about three separate ones. Don't worry about the analysis. You can do that in 7b
Don't forget you're only looking for similarities.

Hope this advice helps]]> 2017-12-05 15:43:44 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213347390 https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213356316 Language
-repetition
-use of vocabulary 
-metaphor
-simile
-Juxtoposition
Structure
-length of sentence/sentence structure 
-punctuation 
-rule of three 

]]> 2017-12-05 15:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213356316 https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213356649 Paper1= 19th C fiction text worth 40% 
Another question on paper 1 is where you have to chose between two questions about using your imagination 

Paper2=60% two texts to read. This is the non fiction paper. In part B you will be asked to create a non fiction text e.g. letter, article, review]]> 2017-12-05 15:58:04 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213356649 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213605346 Read questions 1, 2 & 3 first - making a note on Text 1 of the key lines and the key prompts. Then read Text 1 & answer questions 1, 2 & 3.

Then read questions 4,5 & 6 - mark the key sections the questions relate to on Text 2. Read Text 2 & then answer questions 4,5 &6.

Then read & answer 7a and 7b, which ask you to compare Text 1 & Text 2.]]> 2017-12-06 08:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213605346 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213605976 One minute a mark - if a question is worth 6 marks, then spend 6 minutes on it. 

Give yourself about 6 minutes to read each extract.

This paper is very tight for time - so keep an eye on the clock as you are writing]]> 2017-12-06 08:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213605976 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213606529 2017-12-06 08:44:14 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213606529 clareswhere https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213606556 2017-12-06 08:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213606556 https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213674964 Mario you must make sure you are using paragraphs correctly for a start and then use adverbial phrases to introduce your points such as ( firstly, furthermore, in addition to this, on the other hand, finally).  also, you can try to use PEA point evidence analysis. This will give you a structure to follow rather than waffling your points. Good luck ]]> 2017-12-06 13:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/clareswhere/luo6mzu8u1yk/wish/213674964