The Lottery Ticket by Joseph https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h One couple won the lottery and decided to take a trip to Paris, France. They traveled into the most romantic place, yet dangerous. en-us 2017-11-17 15:32:59 UTC 2024-02-14 05:58:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://jsmorton-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/r/personal/guadasil000_jsmorton_org/_layouts/15/WopiFrame.aspx?sourcedoc=%7Be5c8872f-08d0-4a6d-bfd8-5b5450bdd567%7D&action=view jojothatdude https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/209147400 -Jospeh

]]> 2017-11-21 15:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/209147400 https://goo.gl/U2NXpR https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/209150291 Word document online   
-Joseph]]> 2017-11-21 15:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/209150291 David Logan -Juan guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210440533 Age:29
Sex: Male 
Desp: Just finished collage 
Carrier: Construction ]]> 2017-11-27 15:07:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210440533 Main Conflict -Maraya martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210443395 So David won the lottery, he decided to go to Paris and get married with his wife Valerie, they had a lot of ideas to do with all that money . When they got to Paris things didn't turn out like they wanted to. David got shot and is in a really bad critical condition, he might not make it. ]]> 2017-11-27 15:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210443395 martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210457342 This is the apartment where David and Valerie live  before they won the lottery - Maraya]]> 2017-11-27 15:31:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210457342 Symbol of the story: Lottery Ticket- Maraya martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210465001 The symbol of the story was the lottery ticket.  The lottery ticket was the symbol of the story because it shows that sometimes a lottery ticket can't  buy you anything or happiness. And a lot of things can happen with just a lottery ticket.
]]> 2017-11-27 15:43:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210465001 Valerie Brown -Juan guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210474344 Age: 25 
Sex: Female 
Desp: finished collage 4 years ago
Carrier: Fashion Designer. ]]> 2017-11-27 15:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/210474344 Speech (protagonist) - Silvia guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211218070 The protagonist of the story is Valerie and David because  they were normal people until  they won the lottery and  met Victor. " One afternoon around 2:00 PM, David and Valerie were in a car going back home for work. David just finished college and was going to work in the construction fields.  Valerie also finished college as she became a fashion designer.  "My name is Victor Teddy, I work for the French investigation system trying to find this Murderer back in my country and thus I am here and not back home." ]]> 2017-11-29 00:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211218070 Thoughts and Emotions(Protagonist) - Maraya martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211240505 "They heard arguments across the hallway and as they got to their door, a gunshot has been heard. David and Valerie ran towards the door and, struggled to unlock their apartment door. As soon as they open the door, they fell on top of each other and closed the door. " "Hello 911?" Valerie panicked." "Valerie started to tear up and hugged David."  Valerie is feeling terrified because of the gunshots being heard in front of their apartment. She thought that something bad was going to happen to them. ]]> 2017-11-29 03:13:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211240505 Victor Teddy -Silvia guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211242690 The detective on the scene. "He had a French accent when talking, wearing a large trench coat, as he is wearing some nice, black, sleek shoes. ]]> 2017-11-29 03:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211242690 Rising action -Maraya martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211247190 David and Valerie went to the store to buy some snacks. When they got there David decided to buy a lottery ticket as well. After leaving the store they took a walk around the city and they sat in a bench eating ice cream. They sat by a TV store, and when they were about to leave they heard the television announcing the lottery ticket numbers. David and Valerie didn't really pay attention till they heard that the numbers were the same numbers as David's . They got exited and went to turn in the ticket. They had just won 100.000.000.000 and a free trip. ]]> 2017-11-29 04:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211247190 Valerie Brown Looks- Juan hernajua081 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211432225 She has Blonde Hair
She is Caucasian
She is 5'2
Valerie is wearing a black and white coat
Black pants
And heel shoes]]> 2017-11-29 15:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211432225 Effects On Others (Antagonist) -Sergio https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211433312 Victor Teddy(antagonist) gave a false sense of safety and security due to the fact that he was a detective. David and Valerie put their trust in him and ended up getting killed by him. "My name is Victor Teddy, I work for the French investigation system."]]> 2017-11-29 15:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211433312 Trip to Paris -Silvia guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211434919  They rushed and turned in their ticket and received 100.000.000.00 and one free trip around the globe any destination, anytime, anywhere. Then planned and booked an order a trip to Paris, France. ]]> 2017-11-29 15:12:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211434919 Speech (Antagonist) -Silvia guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211443519 The Antagonist of the story is Victor because he wanted David and Valerie  trust, so he can kill them and take their lottery ticket. "Victor was the first person that they saw in the airport and gave them a tour around the city.]]> 2017-11-29 15:25:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211443519 Introduction -Maraya martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211443665 This short story is going to be about a couple named, Valerie and David. They had just won a lottery ticket and decided to take a trip to Paris. They thought everything was going to go perfect, they even planned on getting married. When they got to Paris  things went horribly wrong.... ]]> 2017-11-29 15:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211443665 Effects on Others (Protagonists) -Sergio https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211448308 David and Valerie didn't have much of an effect on others due to the fact that they've done nothing wrong to be hated by anyone.]]> 2017-11-29 15:32:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211448308 Victor Teddy Looks- Juan hernajua081 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211449097 Has long hair
Has facial hair
He is 5'8]]> 2017-11-29 15:33:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211449097 David Logan Looks- Juan hernajua081 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211450749 He has pretty long hair
has facial hair
wearing a grey and white jacket
wearing black pants

]]> 2017-11-29 15:36:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211450749 The Airport in Paris -Silvia guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211465449 2017-11-29 15:55:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211465449 The store where David bought the snacks and lottery ticket martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211468061 -Joseph]]> 2017-11-29 15:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211468061 Outside of David and Valerie apartment. -Maraya martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211470408
]]> 2017-11-29 16:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211470408 The Mugger that shot David -Juan guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211672518
]]> 2017-11-30 00:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211672518 Climax -Sergio https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211906553 David and Valerie called victor to help them out but victor didn't help with the problem he slowly became another one.]]> 2017-11-30 15:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211906553 Falling Action- Juan hernajua081 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211907409  As Valerie waits for David to heal, Victor comes through the main entrance of the hospital. Valerie stood up where she was standing and walked towards Victor and talked to him.
"See, I told you the streets are dangerous." Victor said, "Yet I must ask you a few questions outside to keep this private and make sure we do not have any eaves droppers around this place."
As both walked out of the building, they went to a nearest alley to make sure they weren’t being followed.
"Look all I can tell you is that he was wearing a hoodie and had a French accent and maybe some Nikes?" Valerie said.
"Well in the crime scene, all we found was a dead body with 2,000 dollars, a lethal weapon, a hoodie, Red Nikes and bullet in head."
"So, somebody killed and mugged the mugger, who will do that?" Valerie asked?
"A well though lunatic." Victor responded.
"Who was this lunatic?" Valerie turned around.
Victor reached in his coat pocket, grasping and pulling out a MAC 50 and points at Valerie. While Valerie is trying to think who killed the mugger, finger on trigger, a bit hunched, two hands on the grip, Victor had a clean shot, but he hesitated as he was sweating, but then stopped. He stood still and stopped sweating, eye twitched once, and used one hand on the grip. As soon as Valerie turned around, it was
the same feeling on the beach. Then Victor pulled the trigger, killing Valerie.
]]> 2017-11-30 15:44:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211907409 Victor Traits -Silvia guadasil0001 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211912474 -Smart
-Selfish
-Greedy
-Crazy

]]> 2017-11-30 15:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211912474 Valerie's Traits- Maraya martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211941529 - Sensitive 
-Pretty 
-Caring 
-Short 
-Blond
-Fun  
-Hard working
-Caucasian
-Calm 
-Confident 
-Faithful
-Fun
-Loving 
-Generous 
-Hardworking
 

]]> 2017-11-30 16:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/211941529 Actions (Antagonist) -Silvia guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212135225 Victor try to earn Valerie and Davids trust because he found out that they won the lottery. So he could kill them both ."See, I told you the streets are dangerous." Victor said, "Yet I must ask you a few questions outside to keep this private and make sure we do not have any eaves droppers around this place." Victor reached in his coat pocket, grasping and pulling out a MAC 50 and points at Valerie. Then Victor pulled the trigger, killing Valerie.  As Victor walked away, his eye twitched. Victor walk in David's room and told him "See, I have this problem, a little voice takes over me and all hell breaks loose." Victor whispered, "Now then, it's time to meet your wife."  
Victor grabbed a pillow and puts it over David's face, but he wasn't moving and removes the pillow away from and realized, David died before Victor can finish his sentence.
 
]]> 2017-12-01 02:51:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212135225 Actions (Protagonist) -Silvia guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212140785  David and Valerie were normal people. They went to collage and they worked. Everything change once they won the lottery. As both of them walked around the town, David asks if Val wants anything from the store  
"Just give me a bag of chips."  As they were getting their snacks, David decided to buy a lottery ticket from the cashier. As trying to pick his numbers, he decides to go with his birthday, 0-4-19-87.  After leaving the store, they walked all around the city, eating ice cream, and relaxing on a bench. Passing the TV store, they were announcing the numbers. Usually, David and Valeria don't pay attention to the numbers, but as soon as they said the first number, David stopped and stood still like a statue. 
"I will repeat, the numbers are Zero, Four, Nineteen, and..." Then a long pause happened as the forth ball landed in the slot. David dropped his arms and screamed of happiness and so as Valerie jumped in excitement. They rushed and turned in their ticket and received 100.000.000.00 
]]> 2017-12-01 03:44:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212140785 The Lottery Ticket Story. -Joseph guadasil000 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212141418 https://jsmorton-my.sharepoint.com/personal/guadasil000_jsmorton_org/_layouts/15/guestaccess.aspx?docid=1e5c8872f08d04a6dbfd85b5450bdd567&authkey=AeVPWTriGTFBtcOMHOzPPwc&e=4f1c4eea4af5483d8c9d489fb93a28d4]]> 2017-12-01 03:52:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212141418 Song for the Story -Joseph jojothatdude https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212298496 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hoqMpJC0tZY]]> 2017-12-01 15:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212298496 The Airport where David and Valerie landed. martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212299621 -Joseph]]> 2017-12-01 15:18:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212299621 The bench where David and Valerie sat down to relax and eat Ice cream. martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212303376 -Joseph]]> 2017-12-01 15:25:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212303376 David's Traits- Juan hernajua081 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212305643 -Nice
-Caring
-Smart
-Thoughtful
-Loving]]> 2017-12-01 15:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212305643 Resolution- Juan hernajua081 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212307746  Victor grabbed a pillow and puts it over David's face, but he wasn't moving and removes the pillow away from and realized, David died before Victor can finish his sentence. Then one of the nurses witness the actions from Victor, then called for help and the authorities. As Victor was caught red handed and found Valerie's body and took David to bury both of the bodies together. As they were only married for 3 hours.]]> 2017-12-01 15:32:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212307746 The little boy -Joseph martimar356 https://padlet.com/jojothatdude/ltmubkyyd78h/wish/212313848
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