https://padlet.com/jennifer_weber3/ltcsmbv3twis Type two specific revisions that you made. en-us 2017-12-01 03:54:00 UTC 2017-12-01 03:56:14 UTC hello@padlet.com jennifer_weber3 https://padlet.com/jennifer_weber3/ltcsmbv3twis/wish/212141788 Today when I revised I changed the beginnings of my sentences to use stronger transition words like also, after, next, in the morning, in the afternoon. ]]> 2017-12-01 03:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jennifer_weber3/ltcsmbv3twis/wish/212141788