clara's DX3103 ICA 1 ( CM2404, 242441A ) by ONG XIN YAN CLARA https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl en-us 2024-04-25 13:04:26 UTC 2024-06-05 14:40:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f423.png concept 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2971034022 non-fiction

  • life working as hawker in Singapore (chosen)

  • my comfort, my home

fiction

  • what if I wake up one day and there is no more internet?

  • what if I can't remember the things i did yesterday

  • what if there's no tomorrow??

]]> 2024-04-26 09:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2971034022 Milestone #1: Story Ideation part 1- Identify and research your subject matter. 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2979979158 • Document all findings and observation (include a lot of photographs, video, audio
recording, sketches, objects....)
• Please refer to the Requirements stated in Page 1 for Fiction and non-fiction story

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]]> 2024-05-10 14:07:28 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988182370 Title: My Father's Chicken Rice 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988187635 2024-05-10 14:12:01 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988187635 link to my padlet 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988703368 2024-05-11 07:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988703368 Milestone #2: Story Ideation part 2 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988709243

• Title of your project
• Summary:- a one-paragraph summary of the story concept/theme of your photo
series
(Fictional/ Non-fictional)
• Mood board


]]> 2024-05-11 07:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988709243 Milestone #3: Photoshoot 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988710529 • Achieve Aesthetics & Visual Design by applying camera framing and
Composition
• Filter through your photographs identify 9 or12 photographs for your Story Draft

]]> 2024-05-11 07:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988710529 Milestone #4 Consultation + Reflection and Self-evaluation 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988710946 • Identify gaps in the story and Retake photographs
• Look for 1-2 classmates to give you feedback. After you have done so, write
down the feedback in your design journal and indicate the name of your
classmate(s) who provided the feedback

]]> 2024-05-11 07:47:40 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988710946 Milestone #5 Consultation + Reflection and Self-evaluation 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988711454 • Identify gaps in the story and Retake photographs

]]> 2024-05-11 07:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988711454 Assignment 01 - Final Presentation 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988712318 2024-05-11 07:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988712318 a one paragraph about my theme of my photo series 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988823746 My photo series is about the life of my father, who is working in the Food and Beverage (F&B) industry in Singapore. He started his own business in Yishun 8 years ago, wanting to achieve more than what he had at that point of time. As I know that it takes a lot of hard work and effort to be able to build his own business all by himself, I wanted to capture them through this assignment. Knowing that working in a F&B industry is one of the most tiring work one could ask for, I admire how he pull through every single day including the weekends with only 1 day break every 2 weeks.

]]> 2024-05-11 13:03:26 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988823746 moodboard 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988827516 all images from pinterest

]]> 2024-05-11 13:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/2988827516 2nd round of pictures 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3010049933 2024-05-28 10:27:24 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3010049933 story drafts 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3010055283 2024-05-28 10:33:20 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3010055283 Feedbacks (draft 1) 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3010061440

  • Pictures for slide 3-6 are too repetitive

  • No emotions in this visual essay, right now seems like I'm just telling the audience step 1/2/3

  • More close up shots (zoom in into sweat / hands)

  • Opening of the visual essay can be father outside the coffee shop (try to make it darker because right now its very bright) -> did not seem like its early in the morning

  • For picture 9 (aka the climax) try to be IN the crowd -> remove all the negative spaces, be in the same level as the customers in the picture

  • Try watch food documentaries and see how people frame their shots

    • ]]>     2024-05-28 10:40:13 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3010061440     retaken shots 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3012642300 2024-05-30 04:39:02 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3012642300 Feedbacks (draft 2) 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3019269214

  • definitely better than the previous draft (more angles and variation)

  • the sweat photo is not effective, need to retake

  • lunch time photo does not align with theme, audience may not understand what i want to express

  • can add a photo with no/less chicken to show transition from long queues to closing of stall

    • ]]>     2024-06-05 14:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3019269214     Final Visual Essay clarrotthecarrot https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3019289835 2024-06-05 14:32:08 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3019289835 story drafts 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3019296598 2024-06-05 14:39:09 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3019296598 link to slides presentation 242441a1 https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3019298063 2024-06-05 14:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/242441a1/lrov975kqzhp39rl/wish/3019298063