6 +1 traits - EXIT TICKET by Hilary https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p Something that RESONATED, something NEW or a WONDERING about Voice or Sentence Fluency... en-us 2018-04-06 04:21:46 UTC 2018-04-13 08:15:30 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Prizecup.png VOICE hilary_purdie https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/250551623 Voice and Passion go hand in hand. So make every effort to ensure that students are interested and invested in what they are writing about. ]]> 2018-04-11 03:27:10 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/250551623 Voice natalie_price1 https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388342 2018-04-12 23:59:12 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388342 In expositions wanting to know that who is writing is actually a person speaking to you. - https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388349 2018-04-12 23:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388349 Megan https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388352 I can explicitly teach fluency by looking at real examples of writing. This modelling will give kids the skills to experiment with their own writing and take risks to develop their own 
fluency.]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:21 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388352 https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388353 Voice and passion go together...]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388353 Voice https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388354 In narrative writing, the voice is that of the character, not the author.The author must have a deep understanding of the character to be able to convey the voice of the character effectively. ]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:23 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388354 Sentence Fluency https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388361 Buzz 🤬 5 - interesting but students also need to understand what a phrase and a clause are before they can understand how to vary sentence length.
 ]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388361 The idea of the purpose of sentence fluency: "Sentences work together to convey ideas." [Developing Sentence Fluency Chapter 7] https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388367 2018-04-12 23:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388367 Sentence Patterns and length jo_klonaris https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388374 Revising for style is sophisticated and difficult. Students need to consider more, hear others' and their own writing read aloud, hearing contrasting energies and discover how authors achieve mood, style and tone.]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388374 voiceless writing is like soup with no seasoning kazajocky https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388379 2018-04-12 23:59:36 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388379 "Voiceless writing is like soup with no seasoning." https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388381 Cassie]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:37 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388381 Voice is key to creating engaging writing! tony_poynter https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388391 2018-04-12 23:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388391 Voice is the 'seasoning' for your writing - it gives it more depth and flavour. https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388393 2018-04-12 23:59:48 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388393 emma_nuttall https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388395 Voice
"Voiceless writing is like soup without seasoning." Word choice, sentence structure, tone etc all contribute to the voice in the piece.]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:50 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388395 Planting the Seed https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388399 Expose students to range of texts (read, look, listen) Aim to show them how writing can engage/inspire the reader (rhythm, pace, shape)

]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388399 The author’s voice is important in expository writing. https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388400 2018-04-12 23:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388400 Read aloud, read often, read rich texts, read different authors and genres to develop your own voice https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388405 2018-04-12 23:59:54 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388405 Idea that it's more important to help students write one beautiful sentence rather than allowing them to write many sentences badly https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388412 2018-04-12 23:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388412 It is very important to give our students rich examples of literature to share the voice of characters and the fluency of the writing...unpack it. What makes it so powerful? https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388414 2018-04-12 23:59:59 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388414 https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388415 the importance of getting students to read their writing aloud to develop their voice]]> 2018-04-12 23:59:59 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388415 kids need to read their writing out loud - hear voice, hear fluency, opportunity for them to edit using conventions https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388423 2018-04-13 00:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388423 The importance of reading aloud https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388427 2018-04-13 00:00:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388427 Debbie debbie_clark1 https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388436 Voice and passion go together. Read aloud as you are writing and after you write. "Doesn't that piece sound like Andrew"
That looking at a 'boring' piece of writing enables the conversation with students what is missing. ]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:11 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388436 Belinda https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388453 Like a symphony, Sentence Fluency when orchestrated beautifully has melody, rhythm and harmony.]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:15 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388453 Voice https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388466 You can't teach it or fake it! 
Make sure you are being true to yourself and writing in front of your kids. ]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388466 Voice https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388468 2018-04-13 00:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388468 liz_parry https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388478 I found the articles that had practical examples were the most useful (e.g. the Buzz 🤬 Five). 

]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388478 R https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388480 2018-04-13 00:00:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388480 Kim https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388484 That the opportunity to share and get peer feedback is vital within the writing process, not just at its end.]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388484 Ensure students are interested and invested to promote voice https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388491 2018-04-13 00:00:32 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388491 Read https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388516 As often as you can to develop the love of writing 😊]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388516 "Write what's in your mind and heart." https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388521

]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:43 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388521 Kids need to read their writing aloudand play with different words. https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388522 2018-04-13 00:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388522 Read, read, read to students. The read some more. There's no better way to learn how to write well than by hearing fluent texts read aloud. https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388539 2018-04-13 00:00:47 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388539 Voice is personality on paper. Voiceless writing is like soup without seasoning. https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388542 Rita]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:51 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388542 https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388547 Ri]]> 2018-04-13 00:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388547 Writing requires energy. A variety of sentence beginnings give writing its spice. fleur_mcconnon https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388613 2018-04-13 00:01:35 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388613 Heather https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388644 Teachers who regularly share words, phrases and sentences ALOUD open the door to fluency


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]]> 2018-04-13 00:01:46 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388656 Sentence fluencey debbie_clark1 https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388720 Play with the length of sentences to encourage different reactions. ]]> 2018-04-13 00:02:31 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388720 in exposition the importance of knowing that it is a real person talking to you - being able to add something about you. https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388763 2018-04-13 00:02:52 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388763 The more children listen to quality writing - the more they can understand what good writing sounds like.... https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388779 2018-04-13 00:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388779 Students should experiment with their writing and analyse word usage for better fluency. https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388879

]]> 2018-04-13 00:04:11 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388879 Voice https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388945 Mo]]> 2018-04-13 00:04:41 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388945 Voice and fluency can be encouraged, supported and developed through rich language experiences. https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388949 2018-04-13 00:04:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251388949 Bron https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251414511 Good Literature can never be under-rated. Read Read Read.Write Write Write!!]]> 2018-04-13 03:03:07 UTC https://padlet.com/hilary_purdie/lq0ja77gww6p/wish/251414511