Revision by Phung Dao https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A en-us 2019-09-27 08:13:16 UTC 2025-10-08 04:27:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844083394 Criticisms: articles chosen could have been studies which would have given her arguments more depth.
Positives: her introduction was strong with a clearly outlined argument. ]]> 2020-10-20 08:50:05 UTC https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844083394 https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844112371 Criticisms: Introduction and conclusion were very weak. The conclusion ended on an open question when the aim was to answer the question. The use of first person in the introduction was not needed.
Positives: The critiques of the texts were appropriately backed up with quotes.]]> 2020-10-20 09:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844112371 Sample one: anyone reading the article would quickly be lost in the terminology as its not clearly explained. Points could have held greater value if they were supported more to strengthen the piece https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844121116 2020-10-20 09:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844121116 Sample one is also very quote heavy from the journal rather than to fully explain a couple of single points https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844126474 2020-10-20 09:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844126474 Sample two: Introduction reads strong as they express why and in the conclusion they outline the findings from retaking the two articles https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844130746 2020-10-20 09:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844130746 https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844131361 Criticism: Lack of correct punctuation and grammar with no clear layout.
Constant use of personal opinion.]]> 2020-10-20 09:13:52 UTC https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844131361 Sample two: the critique is not balanced. More focused on one than the other https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844134100 2020-10-20 09:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/daovanphung/TESOL3A/wish/844134100